Supernatural Alien Play

Author, you are too impatient. The pace of this kind of book should be slower in the early stage. You rush to make the protagonist's power explode before the world view is clearly explained. This is like a gentle wave on the surface of the water and a hundred-meter wave hits you directly. Who can stand it? The rhythm is completely broken! Did you not care about anything in order to give the protagonist a girl? The character design has not yet been finalized. If you want to cause trouble, why do you want the protagonist to have death threats? If you transform and die, the protagonist will be punished for cheating. It will also increase the number of laughs and the number of words. You are putting the protagonist's life in danger and you are still fooling around. Are you afraid of death? After the double transformation, can you control your writing? The first two transformations looked okay and seemed well-written. Then Kyuubi let himself go. Damn it! Was it written by one person?

It seems that the author is writing a book for the first time, but the writing style is very good, and the writing is very natural, which makes people want to read more. It is countless times better than those so-called great masters. Unfortunately, it is too little and not enough to read.

I really don't like this kind of character design where the parents are not like their parents. Qianli recognizes my sister, why don't you have some younger brothers? Just act, and involve the people you know in the role into reality. I was also drunk. It would be weird if it didn't collapse in the end.

It is not recommended for the protagonist to use his or her original name, as this will make the protagonist look stupid It is determined that the world he has visited will open a tunnel to his own world and reveal his real-world name in other worlds. . . It's uncomfortable to watch Only my personal opinion

The protagonist has no brains and the author has no social experience. The part about the girl upstairs is extremely toxic. From the police hastily closing down the team after calling the police, it can be seen that the author has no life experience. Law enforcers cannot make subjective assumptions. Even if they are boyfriend and girlfriend, they have to find out. They cannot leave without even watching the surveillance. In this way, you can record the official account and call 110 to report it Then report the supernatural part. I don't know what the protagonist wants. He is confused. Is there any benefit to you if you report someone? Do you think you are doing a good deed by harming others but not benefiting yourself? Moreover, revealing one's own superpowers is also a cliché operation. Everyone knows that you have been dragged into the water, and there is no mature detection method. Just register and you can expose both of your superpowers. Why don't you expose your cheating finger at the same time? Exposing one's abilities without knowing the principle of cheat skills, what if skills and abilities are not the same system? What if abilities can be detected but there are skills without abilities, then as the only special case in the world, the result will definitely not be much better. The reason for being a person with abilities is because there are many bases after the spiritual energy is revived. You, the only one, have been restricted from freedom before The protagonist is**

There are always mistakes when you look at the pirated version, and then you make more mistakes when you look at the genuine version. You who watch pirated versions still have the nerve to come here to complain. You don't spend a penny and you still have the nerve to come here to complain (only for those who watch pirated copies and come here to complain).

Collapsed. I don't know what to say, and I don't know that it's wrong. It makes me feel like I don't want to watch it anymore. It's getting worse and worse. It was originally very good-looking, but the show by the main character's mother made me feel numb.

He also threw stones. It turns out that ordinary people throw stones when they encounter monsters.

I won't comment too much on this novel. The first part is okay. What the hell is going on in the section up to the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox? All kinds of intrusions? A group of people playing pretending games? Is there something wrong with your brain?

The first one, goodbye completely retarded

Look, who would read the Hail Mary? Being kind is right, but being kind will have the consequences of being kind. Many people have lost a lot of money because of kindness, so no one in this society is a fool. Even getting married requires a house and a car. Why don't you use all means to make money, even if it's a dup? This is reality.

Chapter 1, finished reading. ,, It feels like the writing is like Kuaishou Douyin.

I can't stand the plot of the nine-tailed fox, especially the dialogues about snakes...

Just read novels. Nowadays, there are so many eunuchs that have been banned and some of them can't even read them and have to scold them? You are a bunch of idiots who don't want to read them. No one asks you to read them.

Non-human genetic integration, millions of possible shadows That's all for now, keep reading

For the winged beasts in Chinese mythology, you can also choose Phoenix, Suzaku, Golden Crow, Bifang or Jumang. I think they are better than the Golden-winged Dapeng. Ps: Bifangniao is the wood spirit, Jumang is the wood god, and the spring god. They all match the magical powers obtained by the bell snake.

Don't be happy with things, don't be sad with yourself, let others talk about your own books. It was much worse than you in the beginning.

I persisted until it was released, but I couldn't bear it anymore. The characters collapsed, the plot was tiring, the setting was perfect, the author was intoxicated, and in one sentence, it was difficult to handle 😒

Another child who was sprayed with autism

A very good book, cheers!

As other comments said, it was fine before, but it completely collapsed starting from the fox demon.

I remember watching it before, and it was too much for me to give up on.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

What a great subject matter, what a great plot. It's a pity that the author ruined it. It's really crazy.

Is this author already autistic? Please update. If you don't update, what kind of battle will you participate in?

Just reading the title synopsis, I feel a bit like Dreamland Films is writing a novel, but I haven't read it yet. I hope it won't be similar.

No more updates today? It's almost time!

There seems to be a non-human sect that is very similar to this book!