The Last Immortal on Earth

I think it's totally OK, the character design is pretty good, I hope it doesn't fall apart later.

There were several chapters where I felt that the end and the beginning of the next chapter were not connected, and the previous chapter was just that. I could still fill in the whole with my own imagination. When you go to Zhulu, you will be fooled by me. If you feel that the power of the country cannot be involved, just hide it, or guide it secretly, or pass it off in one stroke. You obviously want to write about the revelation of extraordinary power, just expose it, but you just write the beginning, but there is no follow-up (at least the next two chapters)... The county supervisor's follow-up is gone, the special forces sent to communicate are gone, and there is even no reaction from the parents.

Do you need to be cut? There has been no update for five days.

The protagonist's intelligence is not that of a ninth-generation rebirth. She looks quite arrogant, but her intelligence is not as good as that of a normal middle-aged person. In chapter 20, the heroine was given the daughter of a classic figure, but she was bullied by her neighbors for several years. The plot is not only classic enough, but the protagonist's intelligence is not very good, and he is not fully thoughtful in many places.

It's a good book, but it's a pity that it's written in a different way. It can be funny, especially if the storyline is funny, it is very popular. But don't be funny in your characterization. The writing about pig's feet is very successful, but the supporting roles are not satisfactory. Relatives to children, especially children. This should not be the author's understanding. Personally I feel the worst is Tian Lili, she is not funny at all. Too much is not enough.

It was so embarrassing. The various conversations between a few four- and five-year-old kids were just like a few adults communicating.

It says that all kinds of monsters, ghosts, and snakes have come out, and the last damn immortal is here.

It's good to watch, but there's just too little of it, and the main character's character looks like a cultivator.

I'm speechless. You are the first one in Chapter 400 who is still in elementary school. You can apply for a reward. Your transfer to high school was better than this, it's crazy.

Why did I read more than 200 chapters with such a frustrated protagonist? ? ?

I clicked in early to take a look. The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that I couldn't stand it. He punches his family hard, but he is submissive to the naughty heroine... Is it okay to treat everyone equally and ignore them at the same time? Do you realize the true meaning of life when you watch a dog survive a night outside in the winter? 6

The first card in the game made me sick. I went to Zhanzhuang when I was 3 months old. My bones are still soft and I don't have any common sense

Too little. I support it. I think it's very, very good.

It turned out to be a 19-year-old book, and it's already been 25 years and it's not over yet 😰

Manmana's whole family is a failure

The style of this novel is very similar to that of more than ten years ago. It is very similar to a book I read about The Martial Arts Master on Campus. It is not suitable for today's taste. The overall style is too bland and there is no climax plot.

Good looking and different

Sorry, I came across comments on other websites. I heard that the protagonist was reborn as a dog licker 9 times.

This novel is so damn divisive and awkward.

This book is really good. How come there are so many scumbags?

The overall outline should be fine. But the setting of the characters and the connection of the story. All very problematic. First of all, the main character doesn't seem to live very long at all. Character. Eat your feet. The way it seems. They are all mentally retarded. And then the other characters are weird too. It feels like the author wants to make the next big move, but what about the author's level? It's hard to tell.

I can't understand it, it's too confusing. The plot is so confusing

Abandoned book in Chapter 70, no main line, no climax, no desire to read further

I have collected this book for a long time, and I suddenly came across it today and flipped through it. Damn, I haven't finished it yet. Does it take 10 years to write?