The Sword Immortal in League of Legends

Uc brought us together 🤭

Just when I was getting into the story, it suddenly jumped to another world, which was incredibly frustrating and made me want to quit. It was so inexplicable.

Having a half-brother from a different father? 😂

Hmm, it wasn't easy to find a book with League of Legends background.

Keep it up! The writing isn't great, but the idea is really good.

This one is well-written, and the writing style is good too. You could consider rewriting this theme. I'm from the Void, a similar author. Your writing styles aren't that different. (Just don't get too carried away.)

What does this have to do with sword immortals? Is it some kind of cheap trick? 😰

Hey buddy, there are too many typos. I've already marked them in many places in the text. When could you please fix them?

The beginning was great, but just as I was getting into it, the sudden shift to parallel universes was really off-putting. Didn't anyone mention this to you beforehand?

Holy crap, six chapters updated! Prolific like a sow! I need to go back to updating too.