Don't Touch This Script

The plot jumps too fast, the scene transitions are not good, the paragraph transitions are not good, and the description is too little, which makes people feel confused. Judging from the kaomoji expressions, the author's writing experience should be relatively new. But it doesn't matter, as long as you keep learning and reading, you can improve on these. It's good that the author wrote what he thought in his heart. There may be some mistakes in it, but I hope the author will not give up and continue to persevere. It is recommended to write more character descriptions and environment descriptions.

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It's a great work. I've collected it. Come on, let's encourage each other.

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