The Old Man Wants to Become an Immortal

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Aren't you talking about the old man? Why is it that 1⃣️cultivates immortality or regains memory and becomes a bit 2?

Xiaobai's new book has many deficiencies, please forgive me. Talk about the golden finger, everyone says it is too wide. But in the big world and thousands of small worlds, it is not outstanding. This is a story about thousands of small worlds competing against each other. The Atlas of All Spirits is just a spiritual weapon, and the spiritual weapon is a very special treasure in this world. The worlds of immortals and demons were shattered, and many small worlds were born. The rules of heaven and earth also changed accordingly, and a large number of spiritual creatures were born between heaven and earth. The Catalog of All Spirits is very powerful, but compared with spiritual weapons such as the Hongchen Silk, Jingtian Vase, and Shengtian Bowl, it is not particularly outstanding. Introduced in Chapter 62.

Seeing that 12 pictures can transfer spiritual roots, I always feel that something is wrong. If spiritual roots can be transferred, wouldn't those ordinary people with no power be playing tricks if they develop a high-level spiritual root? Those with huge family affairs but ordinary spiritual roots can easily be replaced by high-level spiritual roots. Then the Matthew effect, the stronger the stronger, the entire world of cultivating immortals will become a Shura field.

Brother, the character of your protagonist is really poisonous. He has a twisted personality, is greedy, has high ambitions and low abilities, and does not remember gratitude but only holds grudges. Brother, your character is very miserable in society.

The character of this protagonist is not in line with the old man at all He is completely a teenage boy There is no sense of maturity and stability that an old man should have.

Chapter 19: Have you ever thought that your grandson would be tortured to the point of being tortured to the point of death? Where is the brain?

The writing is good, pretty good, not too bad, but the number of words is too few 😁

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw in Chapter 20 that he ran faster than Jin Dan, smashed Jin Dan's protective shield with three sticks and beat him to death. How could you not defeat a pangolin before your super power was so strong? This is too strong, it's poisoned to death.

I am also considered a cultivator. I often stay up late and call myself a senior. I have no problem staying up until 4 am every day, but now it is easy for juniors to stay up all night. Alas, I am getting old. Unwilling to be reconciled (metaphorical person)

I have been poisoned since I tested my spiritual roots. Now I urgently need a detoxifying pill.

The front is fine, but the back is poisonous

There are contradictions, and there is a slavery contract. I don't dare to take the healing medicine given by the third elder directly, and I don't believe what I say. Is this contract a fake?

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 120. I'm baffled by the protagonist's various naughty tricks! In the end, all the cool operations are for the purpose of bringing benefits to others! I can only say "I'm convinced" about the author's brain circuit. What a pity this writing style is! Farewell!

Chapter 13: Death from poison! If an ordinary person challenges a monk and he is an elder, if they force you to resist, will they immediately pass on your resistance? Then kill all your family members! And then you turn into a demon to take revenge and they go on to kill you a second time? Author, are you sure the pig's feet are that old?

After reading the first ten chapters, the style is somewhat similar to that of Swordsman before the beginning. It is a good book.

I don't have anything to write anymore. I came up with something about traveling through time and space. It feels like it's gone bad.

How big is the sect? Monsters at the late stage of the seventh-level golden elixir can be bought and sold in a pet shop. This kind of ** setting makes the whole book uninteresting at all. 🙄

I read more than 30 chapters, and I found that the author felt very strange when writing about the character of the protagonist... Especially the chapters about Wei Lianting. Did the author also write down his own feelings at the time? 😓 The original idea was good, but I always felt that it looked a bit unsatisfactory. Not to mention anything else, the character of the protagonist can really be changed. 😤

After wearing the skin of an old man, he started to look younger within a few chapters... I thought he had always been a bad old man...

How come you have gone so far as to regulate society! The system is just a system, but it's a low-grade aura. The low-grade spiritual weapon had no mana to support it and the high-grade spiritual weapon was taken away. He also hired powerful masters from the Nascent Soul stage. You can still open a store before graduating from elementary school. There is a kind of author who opens a store. Even if I can't defeat you, I still need you to write a book?

Also, the character of the protagonist is too bad, and he is engaging in evil deception and robbery!

He was too open-minded, and he took the golden elixir before he even started cultivating immortality.

It's better not to write about the city, it really can't be done

Very good idea, great book, keep up the good work

The feeling of being on the road to immortality suddenly came out. Around the 100th chapter, I felt sad about my poor talent, but I couldn't give up.

The picture catalog function should be limited. If the golden finger is opened too large, it will not look good.

It's quite interesting at the beginning, but in the end it's just an ordinary routine of upgrading and killing monsters. There's nothing new. I can't stand it anymore.

Congratulations on signing the contract, keep up the good work⊙∀⊙!

I haven't read Cultivation of Immortality in several years. Although Golden Finger is a bit stronger, it's not too much. Sometimes it also depicts a bit of the artistic conception of cultivating immortality, which makes me unable to sleep. What can I say about the author? ㅍ_ㅍ