The Legend of Yun Ling Yao Xian

In the first two chapters, I thought the young man was the protagonist. When the protagonist appeared in the third chapter, there was no plot that could let the readers know that he was the protagonist. I clicked on his name in almost every chapter and found out he was the protagonist. There is no reader base who can write like this. Author, you are too courageous. No matter how good the writing is (it's true, the author's writing is pretty good), after reading the first three chapters, not to mention all readers, at least most of them will leave because they can't find a sense of immersion at all.

Come on brother! Writing it down is victory✌

Let's encourage each other. I've written more than 50,000 yuan, but still haven't signed a contract. I'll just wait for 100,000 yuan to see what happens 😡

No contract? It's probably cool, but don't be discouraged. It took hundreds of thousands of words to sign the contract, so keep working hard.

After reading the previous chapters, how should I put it, there are indeed problems, but the advantages are also obvious. How should I put it,,,,,,, I like your writing, because I personally like to watch "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman", and I can vaguely see some shadows of the owner of Huanzhu Tower in it. But frankly speaking, my liking does not mean that others also like it, or even that many people don't like it - times have changed, reading habits have changed, and the literary environment has also changed - there is nothing that can be done about it, and some parts are indeed quite blunt. I believe that the progress will be obvious as I write later. But the plot still needs to be refined. It felt like the author wanted to write a very grand story. In the first few chapters, it felt like he wanted to advance on multiple fronts, but it was actually quite difficult to do this. If there are really multiple lines, you might as well occasionally intertwine them and write them together. Later on, the obvious protagonist is the character Li Qianyang, but the plot is indeed a bit scattered. The above is my personal opinion, please correct me if I am wrong. In short, the author should work hard. Writing articles is actually quite difficult. The most important thing is to see what you want.

Brother, you can't sign a contract. Your first chapter doesn't even have a protagonist. I don't know what you are writing. But if you just want to write for fun, this kind of novel is still good 🙂

…Ask a question. In the introduction, love is also vague and hatred is empty. What does it mean?

Come on, try to get better results

What does Taogu demon-inducing spirit mean?

The second chapter is a good song, but a little abrupt.

Coming from Zhihu, there is nothing wrong with the writing and the narrative. Just write. Let's see how the story goes.

I think the writing style, plot, and world view are the most important. Of course, it also depends on the marketing methods 😁. I don't even look at the rankings when looking for novels now. They are very poor. .

Come to Zhihu, you write online articles, but follow the path of traditional novels.

Emmm... The writing is very good, but there are too many descriptions, the plot details are a bit messy, and it feels a bit incomprehensible. This problem should not occur after writing for a longer time.

Brother, you've got 100,000 words, and you can apply for a contract. Have you passed it?

The author, please make sure to finish it and don't leave it unfinished, okay? 😳 I feel pretty good reading two chapters a day.

Coming from Zhihu, the author's writing style is undoubtedly invincible, and this is the case for the great masters on the ranking list. . The protagonist appears a little late at the beginning, but it is not an irredeemable problem. I feel that the author's main problem is Jiang Wen's question of making dumplings for pigs to eat. There is no market for quality. Although the starting point is old and white, readers have not evolved to appreciate literary talent. I just read a few chapters and I don't know what the plot is like. The author recommends that you read the book Bu Jianting.

The first chapter is good and the writing is good. I started reading online articles in 2005 and still have a very bad taste. I think what you wrote should be fine, but the main title is unappetizing. Even the pictures are not pleasing to the eye.