I Started Checking in Since I Was a Special Soldier

Let me talk about my feeling after reading more than 500 chapters in the past few days. The main military plots at present are Wolf Warrior, Operation Mekong, Operation Red Sea, Sky Hunter, I Am a Special Forces Soldier, etc. These are relatively famous domestic movies and TV series. People who have watched these are quite boring to read these plots. After all, except for Goldfinger, everything else has been spoiled for you and it is completely unimaginable**. However, the author is also very good. The basic plot is very coherent, but now it is gradually leaning towards fantasy technology. I hope the author can fill in this pit. I personally like the emotional line of this book. Currently, it has a single female protagonist. The writing is okay and relatively reasonable. If this is a novel written by a novice, then I feel that it is suppressed first and then promoted, as well as the characterization of the surrounding characters. The promotion aspect is okay, but if the suppression is not done well, it will not be refreshing enough. The above are some of my thoughts after watching it, I don't like to criticize it lightly! You can also put forward your ideas.

The first few chapters were indeed a bit toxic, but it got much better when the first exercise started. Except for the slightly inconsistent feeling of masturbating with a sniper rifle, it was really fun during the first exercise. But this little ** came to an end quickly after the computer virus broke out. It's a pity that it didn't break out. Perhaps the author wants to draw out the information warfare chapter below, so I won't go into details here. The writing in the later chapters is great, and the actual combat chapters are very touching. It makes up for all the regrets I have about domestic military-themed film and television dramas. Multiple arms coordinate, crushing attacks, and the ability to crush Yao Mozi to death without feeling aggrieved. If you don't surrender to the group for the sake of brotherhood and comradeship, just two words like it! As long as there are real-life protagonists in domestic films and TV shows with military themes, there will be all kinds of difficult conditions, and any harsh situation will be even more severe. It is to highlight the spirit of hard work of our army. It seems that there is nothing wrong with it, but it ignores that this is no longer the era of Xiaomi and rifles. We are one of the top three countries in the world in terms of national defense and military strength and one of the five permanent members. As a result, in actual combat operations, we are tied up and frustrated to death. In the end, victory comes from not being afraid of death. What about the demeanor of a great country? Our country's military strength has not been reflected at all. There are also some suggestions about the heroine and how to make the protagonist pretend more effectively. Emotional scenes began to increase later on, but the descriptions were very clichéd, which I feel is related to the character of the heroine. Now the heroine gives people the mentality of a little girl who just fell in love. It is a bit inconsistent with the domineering style in which the protagonist donated 800 million at every turn and raced in the city. The co-pilot woman yelled and the heroine remained unmoved. Has she become a little woman? It's easy for a player like me, who is deeply influenced by young women's **, to watch it. Since we have a single heroine now, it is better to write the emotional scenes in one stroke, as there is nothing new. It is recommended to create a counter-routine and a sense of contrast. I recommend the emotional drama of Ji Cha Lao Shi. For the pretentious part, it is recommended to increase the number of scenes with the opponent and the onlookers. It is much better to use side descriptions to heighten the atmosphere than to go straight to the point. A glimpse of the whole body is the correct posture for pretentiousness. Wouldn't it be more interesting to leave 10% half-covered and let readers figure out the rest? Last point, this pantheon of gods is so ridiculous. I hope it can be changed, some suggestions.

The old bookworm has finished testing the poison, a high concentration of toxin that kills violently. I suggest you try reading three chapters and don't complain about me.

I think the protagonist is not a general. He is either an undercover agent or a single-handed fighter. He has no team spirit. Why do you have to give him the official position of brigade commander and choose so many elites? What do you think, author? ? ?

The integration of various movies and TV series is good, and it is very comfortable to watch. The only shortcoming is the fantasy part. There is really no need to write it. Two portals, one alien race and one call of duty. Even if they are completely eliminated, it will not affect the plot. The writing is not very good, and it has completely pushed the book down several levels. How many book friends have already dropped out of the group as soon as they saw Portal. The author can completely make a streamlined version, delete the two alien worlds of portal and call of duty, and slightly modify the plot of other related things.

After reading this book, I have no interest in reading other books of the same genre. I hope that the heroine will interact more with the protagonist and appear more often, so I have a small suggestion: the protagonist should give his girlfriend a tablet that can be used to browse learning materials online. The plane ✈️ made by the protagonist should be related to the heroine's profession. In this way, it can not only cultivate feelings but also help the heroine improve her professional skills. As for how to write, the author is the professional. Hope this suggestion can be adopted. Finally, I wish this book can become platinum🙏🙏🙏

I really like the author's writing of special forces fan fiction. Anyway, when you look at his works, you have a sense of it, you can take it in, and it's not too exaggerated. Other special forces fan fiction is either about cultivation or superpowers. Reading Nalan's novels is very comfortable, refreshing, not abusive, and not mindless. Come on, I hope to read your new special forces fan novel next year. Come on come on

Let's be honest I haven't read much of The Second World since I discovered it, so good military writing (in my opinion, I can't stand a lot of military writing) suddenly turned into fantasy? Another world? I have saved sixty or seventy chapters, and last night it seemed like there was a new world? Author, you paved the way too much. I kept jumping to read it later, and I found one thing. The outlines of the second world and the third world are almost different in content. The vernacular is the same routine. I really can't stand it. To be honest, if you don't like it, delete it. Although I mean it sincerely.

The first chapter is about poisoning, the main character's psychology and attitude are simply disgusting.

Ma Liu updated, this chapter is so broken that I hate it! The monthly vote has been cast, don't pledge yourself to me, you are too arrogant, please add more!

I have a suggestion for homework. As soon as the portal in the United States appeared, throw the virus solution into the portal that is as big as a washbasin. The portal cannot be expanded anyway 🤭

In these days when the Spring Festival Gala is getting more and more ugly, I rely on your books to celebrate the New Year. 😭😭😭

I just looked at the first few dozen pictures. I know I'm not qualified to say anything, but I can't stand it any longer. I just start pretending to be awesome. Are you really not afraid of your account being banned? All kinds of special forces experience cards are forced to show off, and if they are leaked, they will not be dragged out and sliced ​​up?

I'm finally back on my most enjoyable writing journey, please keep updating! The monthly pass will save you enough!

Let me tell you what I think of this book. I have only read a few chapters. When the system first came out, the protagonist kept saying "Holy shit" one after another and I didn't want to read it anymore. The main character seems to be very stupid. "Holy shit" appears several times in one chapter! I don't know why this book scores so well. As a bookworm for 6 years, I think this book is "not" worthy of its name.

It's a very interesting book. I actually cried when I read the postscript. Maybe it touched something in my heart.

A typical novel written by a novice. The author's output is amazing, and some knowledge points are full of errors. However, because it involves a wide range of knowledge, it is difficult to cover everything. It is also understandable. It is better not to take it seriously. It is a good way to spend time in the book wasteland. The latest plot opens a map of another world. Although it is a bit abrupt, it is refreshing. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development.

Damn it, if you don't write 2000 chapters, would you be embarrassed to finish it?

The author's writing style is very good. Compared with other systematic military novels, the content is novel and attractive to readers. But if you watch the content where the protagonist is too invincible for a long time, some people will inevitably get tired of it. I personally think that letting the protagonist experience some minor setbacks can increase the dramatic conflict and make the protagonist's image more three-dimensional. Support the author! ! ! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

This article is worth following Although the pretense is stiff and there are cheats But the protagonist's will is real, and his feelings and spirit have pure power The poisonous points can be ignored, and the plot setting is also quite interesting.

I really like reading this book, keep up the good work

[Final Chapter] Looking at the tidal gluttonous army, Jiang Yanhai clicked commands on his mobile phone in vain, but there were still no reinforcements in the distance outside the city. It seemed that today's update could not be waited for, and the author should have the next chapters in his hands. Jiang Yanhai's expression became serious, but there was a faint smile on the corner of his mouth: Ruobai, the author is not ten updates, don't wait, remarry...

Let me tell you, as a bookworm of nearly 7 years (only the age of the online book, not counting the physical book), this book will undoubtedly be very controversial when I first read it. To be honest, the first few chapters or even dozens of chapters are indeed quite poisonous in terms of content. But nowadays, generally speaking, there is a book shortage, and I like to read without thinking. I have survived from the poisonous point at the beginning. Ignoring the plot of the TV series at this time (I have forgotten what the TV series is about anyway), I found that the author has begun to get better. When I first saw the previous content, I thought it was a vote, but after watching it, I felt that it was not bad. Whether it is the plot or some jokes, it is quite thoughtful, and the writing style is gradually getting better. So please ignore the poisonous points and the emphasis on reality, you will find that this book is okay, very good, anyway, I voted for recommendation

There are various reasons for not being able to read. I am because "it's not". I didn't care at first, but after repeated reinforcements, I became more and more uncomfortable with it.

I remember that there was a book about military life that was quite good. It was about armed police, but it was taken off the shelves. I forgot the name and the author's name. It seemed that I had a marble with me, but it wasn't the book with bullet marks. I hope it can help me find it and recall it. Thanks.

Suddenly I realized that no matter how many chapters I post in a day, it's not enough!

Can the author take his time when writing a book and take a look at the updated content in the past few days? As he tells the story, he will give you a whole chapter of inexplicable paraphrases. This paraphrase will appear every once in a while, and the meaning is pretty much the same. If you have nothing to write, you won't be so stupid, right?

As an old bookworm, I have to say that this is a very good special forces novel. I won't talk about the battle plot, but I will talk about the emotional line I have read a lot of special forces novels There are a lot of books where the male protagonists are studs and the powerful female protagonists can form a football team. The heroine's identity is, um, the daughter of the war zone commander and the richest man in the country. They all pounce on the male protagonist as if they are in heat. I skipped such books.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             being a soldier. Immediately pick up the gun and go into battle, why, because they are people from two worlds, and the world in their eyes is completely different. The female protagonist is a princess in the ivory tower, and the male protagonist is a knight who cuts through thorns. Every battle of the knight may be the last battle in his life. As the male protagonist's status increases, those who want to kill him are very likely to take action against the female protagonist, so the male protagonist wants to treat the female protagonist to 9 meals, so that the female protagonist can think about it carefully during this time period. This kind of responsibility towards the heroine moved me deeply, and I hope they can be together forever.        ，，，10，，

I don't understand why it's written that he went abroad to be a spy, and why the pantheon of gods dug so many holes, and even genetic modification came out. Nalan, what you wrote was about military affairs, not espionage?

Is there a book group? Since my grades are so good this month, why not start a book group? ? ? If you want to complain about the author's tentacle monster, there is nowhere to go. . .