Begin from Douluo and Be Invincible in All Realms

The beginning gave me a feeling of a 10-year-old writing style. I was so scared that I looked at the time. Fortunately, I didn't travel through time 😥 Will there be a plot twist later on for the woman, knowing that the protagonist cannot break through the situation and intentionally kills the protagonist, send him away 🙂 and then fall in love with each other, right? If this is the case, please allow me to vomit for a while, and then run away like a fool 🤐

It's such a cliche opening. It's about being betrayed by your beloved again. Can't it be written in a different way? It makes me want to vomit. There are too many such openings and there is no innovation at all.

The beginning is old-fashioned, but the rest is good. It's one of the few good books written by Douluo fans.

Six years old and level 38, you might as well be Invincible Wen

God's all-out attack is even more powerful than a 500-ton nuclear bomb

The speed of a six-year-old can exceed the speed of sound. Even if a strong man is reborn and can practice, don't be so exaggerated...🥵

Reading your book has kept me depressed, and my mood has never relaxed. Why don't you come up with a joke to liven up the atmosphere? It started off well, I thought it was a good book, but then it started causing trouble everywhere, just like a naughty kid.

The writing in the fanfic is pretty good, I hope it will continue! Come on!

I only have 2,000 collections after finishing all the books. It's really miserable.

It's GG if it's well written, it really kills cells 🤐

This is the only good comment I've seen so far, let me take a look 😁

This book is so depressing to read. I am either offended by this or that, and there is no end to it. How long has this been a routine? And you won't alternate between relaxing plots and depressing plots? Looks terrible

What are you writing about? I can't understand

I always feel like the author is insulting my IQ Absorbing a thousand-year-old spirit ring directly transforms a six-year-old child into a 12-year-old boy. The original novel dared not write this. If after absorbing it, he looks like a seven or eight-year-old boy, I can still understand it, but you directly become a 12-year-old boy, which is a bit hard to understand here As mentioned before, the first spirit ring of the martial spirit is a black ten-thousand-year spirit ring, and when the fight begins, it directly turns into a white ten-year spirit ring?

Why do we have to have universes and planes?

What did you write? This is for people to see

Why doesn't the author update it? Update quickly

Update, my dear, I really like this fan fiction of yours. I have read it three or four times. My dear, I am still a student and don't have much money. As long as you update it, I will definitely beg you.

If you don't update, I will come once a day.

Dear author, this is my first time tipping. Please update, please.

The author will update it soon