Qingyun Arbor

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Think of a new title for the book. This title is not attractive. The plot is great. I have always wanted to find this kind of harmonious and loving sect cultivation novel, but the pig's feet in the starting point are destined to be bitter and hateful! Let me ask, pig's trotters are time travel, right? You have buried this foreshadowing for too long. Can't your soul and consciousness be awakened or recalled by relying on Xiaoqing? More updates! More updates! More updates!

I can't read anymore, the plot area is bland and there is no story.

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1. My first impression from the title and introduction of the book was that it was a romance novel. Your novel feels too literary, so the response will not be very good. 2. The three golden chapters are very important, especially for newcomers who do not have their own traffic. They must be carefully crafted to strive for a successful debut. A too warm beginning can easily be passed by readers and editors. It is recommended to write the contradictory and exciting points immediately, so that readers will remember you immediately. 3. It can be seen from the author's writing that the author writes slowly and carefully and feels very warm, but don't write like this, not many readers will buy it 4. There are too many irrelevant things in the first three chapters. It is recommended to delete them. Be sure to keep things that can help promote the next plot. Delete other meaningless things.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group, please update~🙂

The style of this book and the character of the characters are very in line with my taste. It is quite engaging and similar to Taihao. I hope it will not collapse when the layout is fully unfolded later.

Since it was a manuscript borrowed from the Library Pavilion and its contents were so magical, why didn't so many disciples discover it? I have spiritual roots, and my family members also need them. Moreover, the manuscript must be returned. Sooner or later, the abnormality will be discovered, and this hole must be filled.

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The protagonist doesn't like Shuangxiu because he likes to be gay, which can be seen from his deep love for senior brother Sun Xiao.