Quan Song World

The author deliberately made the protagonist to be born in the Kingdom of Jin, in the entanglement of Song, Jin and Meng. However, the protagonist is a time-traveler who even knew that the city was destroyed and the country was in danger. He still took his whole family to stay in a small village more than a hundred miles away from the war center. You are not a native and it is difficult to move. Because of this, his sister and brother-in-law were killed by the Song army in the Northern Expedition. A time-traveler is still there in a daze. The Song Dynasty has become his enemy. The disgusting literary youth disease. Liang Xiao is still a native after all. Where do you, a time-traveler, get your view of history that was crucified on the butt?

The author's knowledge level is not bad, and the slow unfolding of the plot is reasonable. If the subject of the book is a farming novel and an official novel, then this slow start will not be a big problem. It can even be said to be better than many sloppy novels that start chatting and laughing with the emperor and prime ministers in just three or five chapters. But this book is set in the late Southern Song Dynasty. Mongolia is about to go south and destroy the Song Dynasty. It is already difficult to turn the situation around. The protagonist has no money, no power and no golden fingers. It is not suitable for you to be leisurely in the village. It is about the end of the dynasty, so just do it quickly. Then there is the issue of the setting of the protagonist. Maybe the author wants to express the protagonist's ideological struggle and growth process, so the protagonist hesitates back and forth between seeking refuge in Mongolia and the Southern Song Dynasty. Unfortunately, he cannot immediately express his position on the Han Dynasty. This is not right in the eyes of many readers. It is very likely to cause abandonment of the book as soon as it starts. Moreover, the age of the introduction is too young. In this period when every second counts, there are really no more than ten years for you to grow. Also, the protagonist should be the main character in the early stage of the story. Don't make the reader confused and confused as to which character to assume. At least wait until the protagonist's image is completely established. For example, the deserter in Chapter 3 who has nothing to do with the protagonist is not worth arranging to appear at that time, let alone spending so much time describing it. The early stage is very critical and determines whether the book can retain readers. There is not so much space to waste. Maybe you want to describe different characters and interweave their stories to construct a story with a grand enough background. However, it is recommended not to try this writing method before you have enough strength. It is too easy to write. Even if it is at the level of Alexandre Dumas, not everyone can read The Count of Monte Cristo. However, this book should be the author's first book. I am quite optimistic about the author's future and hope that he will gradually become stronger.

It's hard to keep reading. Can a person like the protagonist change history? Don't believe it.

I don't read novels that talk about slowly polishing the protagonist's character. The vast majority of people have character flaws, which cannot be changed by slowly polishing them. A country is easy to change, but a true nature is hard to change.

Brief comments on this book 1. You don't need to read the first 150 chapters. The 150 chapters are all about anecdotes, traveling through time, getting to know people, and following the Mongolian army to attack the Southern Song Dynasty. There are very few parts about growing up with pig's feet. The bedding is too long, the foot wrap. 2. Because the foreshadowing is too long, there is no real part in the development of the story. It is all straightforward. When I saw chapter 200, I felt that the author was not writing a story, and I didn't know what to write. It was similar to an expository essay. 3. Don't be fooled by the fact that the previous story about Pig's Feet seems very realistic. The story behind it is even more powerful than Long Aotian's. Four historical figures took the initiative to support a teenage soldier and did nothing. Then I met the eldest son of the Mongolian Khan and wanted to sworn sworn sworn friends. I was so poisoned that I didn't want it anymore.

Why have I read more than 300 chapters? There is always a feeling of using the name of the Han people to restore the Jurchen country 🤫

The author's writing style and description of the battlefield are still good, but unfortunately the plot setting is too poor. First of all, as a time traveler, how could you not avoid the risks of war? Once again, does a Han man sit with his butt crooked?

After further reading, I discovered that the author's research on history took more than a day or two. From the grand description of a cruel war scene to the small and detailed descriptions of the size and structure of each weapon, the clothing of each character, and the style of each building, these historical realities will make you constantly impacted by knowledge points. I can only lament his too serious writing attitude. The protagonist Zhao Quan travels from modern times to the late Southern Song Dynasty. His identity is the son of an ordinary family in the Kingdom of Jin who was destroyed by the Song Dynasty during the war. In that turbulent era, he could not stay out of the war. In order to protect himself and his loved ones, he had to work hard to survive. He was pulled into the Song-Mongolian battlefield and became a member of the Mongolian army to fight against the Song Dynasty. And he carries clear memories of his past life, that is, the modern Han people's deep sense of national shame for the destruction of the Song Dynasty in history; and the hatred of the Jin people who had their family and country destroyed in this life. Faced with the cruelty of war, the dislocation of identity will inevitably cause the tearing of human nature. This is the most unique and vivid angle that the author gave to this character in this novel. This angle is not a gimmick. I think the author worked hard. He wanted to have a calmer, more objective and more humane interpretation of the war from the perspective of historical concern. Such a good novel, don't you read it? Such a good novel, please like it, dear friends!

A few words about the comment area: First, the fifty-six ethnic groups we pay attention to now are one family, and each one is so angry. Have you considered that the author may be a minority, have you considered that the readers may be a minority, have you considered that the officials in the censorship department may be a minority? Second, do slave owners still care about the skin color and race of their slaves? Whether or not to vote for Meng Yuan depends on the situation and the interests! The establishment of the Mongolian, Yuan, Manchu and Qing Dynasties was indispensable without the support of powerful Han landlords and aristocratic families! The so-called nation is just a tool of the ruling class! For thousands of years, dynasties have been replaced by aristocratic families. Generation after generation, there is endless wealth, and generations are slave owners. Third, to be honest, unless cheating, the situation in the late Southern Song Dynasty, to put it bluntly, is waiting for the change of dynasties. Those with integrity will look on with cold eyes, those without integrity will rush to serve the new master, and those without bottom line will be ready to push Zhao Song to death. Everyone, you have traveled through time and become the head of a family. You have to go to the ancestral grave to see the black smoke. How can you be so stubborn as a family head? Do you insist on dragging your family and Zhao Song to be buried with you? Do you have to die to be happy? It is very necessary for the protagonist to consider whether to vote for Meng Yuan. Is it something that qualified families will consider? Fourth, just vote. As long as you don't make your reputation infamous, what can Zhu Yuanzhang do to you a hundred years later? No one will care if you voted for Meng Yuan, because everyone alive does this, including Zhu Yuanzhang. The fact that he was born proves that his ancestors also voted for the obedient people! No one will make a fuss about this, it's the rule! When the dynasty changes, your family asks Zhu Yuanzhang for people and money. How can Zhu Yuanzhang treat your descendants badly?

I have seen ** modern people, but I have never seen modern people without ambition. It is impossible for such salty time travelers to exist.

I just discovered this book recently and spent a few days catching up on the latest progress. It is quite well written, with smooth writing and exciting plot. The student party has little money, so it can only support the full subscription + monthly tickets. I hope the author will continue to work hard💪 Another question: Judging from the plot direction, the protagonist is likely to be a multi-ethnic force in the future. Although nationalism has not yet risen, language and discrimination are still big problems. I don't know how the author plans to solve it. Little Fatty doesn't know when he will mature. Although they are all children, there is really no time to wait in troubled times, especially now that the protagonist has begun to develop. Finally, let me talk about the problems I think this book may have (I don't care personally, but I guess others will) The first is the issue of the protagonist's ambition. The protagonist is a passive character who is always pushed by the environment. He just wants to stay in his own little world and not think about the outside world. Although it is fun to watch the changes and growth of the protagonist, but over time, there will be a problem, that is, it makes people confused about how the protagonist wants to develop and what route to take. The readers are confused about the direction and what to expect from the plot and the protagonist. Many people may not have the patience to wait until the protagonist figures it out. There is also the problem of the little fat man. At least so far, he has shown a negative effect, which is not to say that he has no contribution, but that his contribution is negligible but he has caused a lot of trouble. In his usual description, he looks like a naughty child. From personal experience, many readers of Qidian are very unfriendly to trolls, especially trolls who are not popular and are not girls (but the fact that they are boys is a bright spot for me personally, after all, I am tired of the routine of the protagonist bringing a sister, a lolita, etc.). Many readers will lower their patience with little boys. Of course, I believe that most of them will not be entangled in this point. To summarize, I thought that the problem might be the pace. The pace in the early stage is slightly faster, and at least there is a clear mid- and long-term goal, so that readers will not run out of patience and leave in confusion about "what is the protagonist going to do?" The above are personal opinions, or guesses🤔 Happy New Year to the author😆

Literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured! The best is electroshock therapy! The growth of the ridiculous protagonist, who has the time to watch you fight against the loser protagonist and grow up?

Is the author's butt crooked? It is wrong to talk about the alliance with Mongolia to destroy Jin, but Jin wants to defend the north and invade the south, let alone mention it. The golden lotus is a white lotus. The Jin wanted to attack the Song Dynasty, and the Song Dynasty destroyed the Jin Dynasty. One way was to avenge Jingkang, and the other was to seize the territory. There was no problem with the strategy. When I get to you, I become gold and white lotus.

Look, author, there are many modern words in Liang Shen's passage, and there are many more. I won't take screenshots. The reason why I mention these is because this book is well written. I hope there are no such small flaws!

This is a magnificent philosophical book about the rights and wrongs of human war. I have low education and cannot understand it. Only masters with profound skills can study it thoroughly. Goodbye!

This comment gave me the impression that the protagonist is an indecisive person. Then don't watch it.

I've read over a hundred chapters. It's so messed up that I don't know what to write,,,,, and I don't distinguish between priorities.

The subject matter is good. I originally thought I discovered fairy grass, but in the end, what the hell... If you don't have the writing power, you shouldn't write about the emotional fluctuations in the characters' hearts. Although I vaguely know what you want to express, many of the activities you wrote are disgusting. . And don't wear a trap, and you don't know anything if you don't open a golden finger... Also, what do you want to write, and who should read it, there are so many poisonous points, I don't know where to start,,, the daily guide is really a daily guide, and it lives up to its name.

Is the later version of this book very good? Why do you have so many fans? It seems that there are too many poisonous points in ten chapters and you can't stand it. It's because there are too few subjects like the Battle between Song and Meng, so you insist on reading more than ten chapters. But are there really too many poisonous points?

This book is well written, but it is too slow to warm up. It is not pleasing to a newcomer. I hope the author will stick to it. Come on.

The fact that some people read this type of book shows that the author's writing still has merit, but the readership is fixed, and the basic base is so large that it is difficult to expand. If you don't open a small account to write,

This book is great, author. Come on😊

It felt like I was reading a TV drama script, with the romance line being the main focus.

Let me first ask, does the protagonist of this book invest in the Song Dynasty, invest in the Jin Dynasty, or become independent? The protagonist's surname is Zhao. Is it related to the Song Dynasty?

The powerful people have stood up since then!!!!!

The author's writing style and knowledge are relatively good. Maybe it's because of the first book. The writing is not passionate enough, the story line is relatively scattered, and the protagonist's presence is not strong in many chapters.

I have read dozens of chapters and I have no idea what is being written.

If this continues, Kublai Khan will die even faster. People's hearts are completely lost