Konoha's Death Surgeon

Is this a book from ten years ago? What the hell, someone is taunting you and cutting off your hands and feet for two games, and then connects in reverse? The dialogue is also a super novice routine, and there is a bit player who pretends to be a slap in the face, Uchiha, the bully of Novice Village? Obito and Kakashi take the exam together? Did you know that Kakashi graduated early?

After reading Chapter 12, I was persuaded to quit. Let's not talk about the timeline issue. The characterization is all zz, and the protagonist is licking Konoha like crazy

You dare to show off the power of surgery, are you stupid, or Orochimaru can't lift the knife?

I want to say something, how much the author likes to use the word "this", this person, this thing, this woman... Don't you think you should also say this: This child is so scary?

A slap-in-the-face text about a brainless alien from another world wearing the skin of Hokage. . .

Let's talk about the bugs that have appeared recently. Part of it is indeed due to lack of research and errors. Because there are many characters in the Naruto system, it is not easy to cover everything. In addition, due to the needs of the plot, some ages had to be adjusted. There is a big difference between the original work and the age. These two points are inevitable, and they will definitely exist in large numbers in the future. If you really can't accept it, I can't help it. My time for coding every day is limited, so it is impossible to spend a lot of time verifying each character's experience and age in each time period. To be honest, just conceiving the plot takes a lot of time. Considering my handicap, it only takes over a thousand words in an hour. All in all, this is a fan novel that will entertain everyone in their spare time. Just read it with a relaxed mood. It is meaningless and unnecessary to follow the original work. In the final analysis, this is just a novel that cannot be put on the table. There is no need to take it seriously.

The problem is that after the first mission... I'd better forget about the Sharingan and do something else. Burning Release is also fine.

Damn it, the combat power has collapsed. Shadow level and super shadow level are just a joke. In the Land of Snow, there are super shadows in places with bigger butts. Every ronin warrior I meet is a shadow level. A tree has the level of a six-path immortal. The combat power has collapsed like this at the beginning. Will the boss later fight Pangu, Nuwa, who opened up the universe in the ancient times?

It's true that this author used the method from 15 years ago to write novels. I was really drunk on the upgrading of the alien system. Have you ever watched One Piece? Could it be that he searched Trafalgar Law on Baidu and then copied the move descriptions in Baidu Encyclopedia? Good skills are modified by the devil and they are called upgrade flow. A heart shock is divided into first, second and third levels. In fact, it is just to improve the number of words, right? I feel like vomiting after reading this. Please, before you write a book, can you read how people in 2020 write novels?

This is a no-brainer. You just show off your abilities when you first get them. The first task is the blood ring eye. That is a wrongful conviction. Also, you are a ninja graduate and you captured a jounin alive. You didn't beat up the Kyuubi😊

Has the author really never watched Naruto? ? ? It seems that even the pirates didn't look carefully, right?

This is a self-advocacy article by the author, so be careful when entering the trap.

Writing about Naruto, you still compete with the main character of the original plot for a woman. It's very speechless. Just write about a random person. It's very annoying that you know that this world is very dangerous, but you still don't do it. You don't have the strength to save your life under Danzo, but you reveal your special ability, and it's just for women.

It hurts -_-|| Let's not talk about the fact that the main character is an adult and doesn't have any plans. Later, he said that he couldn't live without Lin? Furthermore, if the protagonist is written as such a loser, why can he enter a ninja school? And he's in the same class as Obito and the others? And in terms of the age of the protagonist. At Kakashi's age, he has already graduated and become a ninja! Will Konoha let him enter a ninja school? And that's not to mention how the waste attributes set by the author were admitted! And as soon as you get the ability, Uchiha comes up and gets slapped in the face by you? And I always feel like I'm a bit abusive towards the owner￣^￣゜￣^￣゜￣^￣゜￣^￣゜

The Weasel God? Isn't it considered a ferret to kill a whole family or even an entire tribe?

The start is very vicious. A bunch of people are slandering an orphan. There is absolutely no need to be jealous. It's not Kyuubi.

Let me start by saying that this is not an argument, it is just my personal understanding and thoughts. Readers who have different opinions can leave a message below and discuss it together. Those who do not have a brain can ignore it and swipe right. I read the previous chapters, and the protagonist was brought back by the fourth generation, which means that the protagonist has the support of the fourth generation. Not to mention being a godson, if he can at least be related to the Hokage, he is not considered a civilian. If the protagonist can live in the village, he is not considered a member of the Leaf Village. When the fourth generation brings him back, the third generation will definitely make people pay attention to the identity of the protagonist. Then Lin, the character of Lin was described by the author as a bitch. First she expected Obito to become Hokage, and once she said that her dreams were all Obito, then the protagonist talked to her, and then focused on Kakashi. The protagonist's heart was still attached to Lin, and the protagonist had to say: I can lick well, and I can lick well. Then, Lin finally died in the third battle. The protagonist just had the fruit. Can he fight Madara in one year? It was Madara's idea to kill Rin and blacken Obito. If it were written like this, by the time Madara and the protagonist confront each other, the protagonist would have gone beyond the shadow, and the book would be finished, and there would be nothing left to write about. There is also the boy who made shit. The protagonist is a fourth-generation man. If he can survive, it means he is clean, and his family died because of the war. He is just a marginalized person like a commoner. Maybe only a dog will bark at you, and no one else can sympathize with you. Just like the author, if there is an orphan at the door of the author's house, and it is brought by the property, you will give him some candy, or tell him to go away. The truth is the same, but I think the author may do the latter. Finally, if Obito is the last one, compared to Uchiha, do others dare to laugh at him? At that time, Itachi and Shisui had spread the name of Uchiha genius throughout the world, so he seemed to be a talent, but his popularity in Konoha Street was still good, could he compare with the poop-making boy? What's more, the Uchiha family was not comparable to civilians, but according to the foreshadowing, could Minato's class have become five people? This is even more ridiculous. Why are there three genin instead of four? It has always been like this in the original book. Or there are two people. It is not just traditional, but three people with aggressive character. The convex shape is stronger than the square shape, and the triangle is more stable than the square shape. The following is my speculated plot analysis.

A book piled with shit,

Please tell me what shit is written💩😅😅😅

The fruit of surgery is already a very powerful ability. Why bother with such a mess of blood?

I can't stand it anymore. Author, why don't you go and see Naruto? The more you look at it, the more you look at it.

There are many poisonous points. First of all, the character of the protagonist is not very good. Secondly, the setting of the Devil Fruit is not very good. Finally, he is a standard Uchiha villain. The main attitude of the Uchiha clan towards other people is arrogance. Unless you make you like him, he will communicate with you on an equal footing. This is rarely the case. What's more, there are people in the Leaf Village who ridicule. There is no need to show that the protagonist is a waste. He can be the protagonist. After the training failed, the narrator said that the celebrity was because Danzo was behind it. Even if you can say other things, you still need to know that civilians and ninjas are on two levels. From the perspective that the protagonist can use chakra, he is a ninja. Although it is stated later that they are all from the ninja school, they are not that ****. I only saw the child tiger part, and did not read the rest. It is full of dissuading power! ! !

I saw that it became more and more poisonous and he died from the poison

Naruto is more difficult to write in fan fiction. Each character has an independent story. Cheating is allowed, but at least it must comply with the original ninja level. The timeline is also confusing. In the early stage, I didn't have the ability to directly show off and quarrel with Uchiha. Do you think Danzo is just watching the show? Uchiha is not capable of killing a kid, but he is still an adult. I think he is mentally retarded and does not have the strength to bear it. There are cheats and other things to become stronger. It is not just a casual play. After reading a few chapters, why are the quality of today's novels so poor and still recommended?

It's completely gratuitous. The author doesn't understand Naruto at all. He wrote many things wrong. He also likes to make up characters that don't exist. Bad review (*｀Ω´*)v

Except for a few names and events from the original work, the whole book is full of a strong flavor of a novel about cultivating immortals.

The author probably just watched Naruto briefly and looked at other people's comments. The author didn't watch Naruto seriously at all.

After reading this novel, this is the only one that made me give up reading it after just two chapters.

Essentially, I read this book just to see Luo's abilities, the fruits of surgery. After reading the article, TND veterans asked the author, where is the system? The system made you eat it? The title of the fruit of the operation is only available in the first dozens of chapters. Can't TND just write a blood sacrifice and don't mess with the system or anything like that?

Two monthly tickets for hundreds of thousands of words, I already know the reason