Mecha Combat Pro

The design of the machine feels somewhat unreasonable. It's normal for the cockpit to have electronic equipment, but it's not normal for it to have a lot of wires. If the mech is meant for combat, why would it need something like a water dispenser? Who puts a water dispenser inside their tank? There are also driving modes: keyboard and joystick, as well as foot-operated accelerator and brake.

As the title suggests, the problem with this book is simple: what are readers looking for? A wish-fulfillment story where the protagonist joins the Imperial Army and crushes the other two factions? What kind of story is this? The protagonist joins the resistance against Imperial rule? Would someone who wants that kind of story click on this book? And what kind of thing is this resistance?

I only have one thought: could you please stop switching between the male lead and Fang You so frequently? It's really distracting!

Why haven't you updated in the last couple of days?

I understand the author wants to write something original, but this kind of subject matter is too niche. I suggest you write something from fantasy or foreign mythology to urban themes.