I Am the God of Ninja

Author, please accept Madara, Hashirama and Madara are a couple anyway.

This book is too slow to write and the plot cannot be fulfilled.

,,, You are already in the middle of the pillars, are you still afraid of being cheated by the big pillars? Let's talk about Gill's basic method.

This is one of the better fan novels I have seen recently. It has an online IQ, a clear main line, and the difficulty of ending major events in troubled times. The Golden Finger Wood Escape makes people look forward to it. Compared to some brainless fan fiction readings by some six or seven-year-olds who guide a country, it is not more than a little or two (yes, it is 9102 years old and there is still such a domineering Naruto fan who kneels before the elders).                                                          The protagonist's IQ is online, the supporting characters are not bad, the character's character respects the original work, and there is no magic modification. We often say that a good novel has the moon as the protagonist and the stars as the supporting role. Even if the protagonist is afraid that he will be more powerful than the sun after time travel, the author still respects the position of the second-generation ninjutsu master and inventor of ninjutsu.

Naruto, a family ethics drama with a passionate battle, also known as Black Zetsu's story of rescuing his mother, the legend of Gomura's eyes, the need to form bonds even after death, the political characteristics of Konoha Village, how to rub balls, my brother called Shunyu fell in love with a man who did not come home, Asura's rebirth as Naruto, the tears of a physicist, take the beloved to heart, let me be your eyes, the temptation to return to the village, *Tamaru's revenge, etc...

4396 Words, are you paying tribute to someone?

The protagonist should have been a virgin before traveling through time. I wrote 4 chapters of the inner drama of killing a bandit, and almost got hacked to death.

The protagonist uses the ninja method from beginning to end, which is very boring, very indigenous, and a time traveler! What does it mean that you don't know how to move outside the market at all? The easiest way to make money is to buy explosive charms! Does the author intend to complete Hashirama's Warring States history? I suggest the author to read "Building the World of Naruto" to see what people call time travellers. It does not mean they know how much of the plot, but they do not use ninja methods to solve problems with normal people's concepts. They do not rely on killing, not relying on ninjutsu, relying on imagination and physics! The protagonist traveled through time and did not become mentally ill. He should be a strong-willed protagonist! But why are you so incompetent at doing things? It's like a boss asking an employee to do work. He will only immerse himself in the work, not look for materials, and use the best way to do it. The protagonist came to the scene and was worried about his brother and girlfriend, so I became suspicious. Is the protagonist a time traveler? Aren't you ready before the battle? You have to compete with ninjutsu like a native, and know ninjutsu, and fight! It's not a competition, no matter what the means, victory is the key! The protagonist can't do mustard gas, nor can he do any poison? Can you try it first? He doesn't know how to use poison, he doesn't know how to make firearms, he doesn't know how to make money to buy explosive charms, he doesn't know how to use tactics, but he can use ninjutsu to be reckless on the battlefield. This kind of person has also received nine years of compulsory education! To survive in that kind of world, generally speaking, you should do whatever it takes to keep yourself safe, instead of relying on prophets to fight for your life on the battlefield. Obviously, after learning so much about war history, is the protagonist illiterate? Illiterate people also need nine years of compulsory education! Just say that if a modern person is thrown into another world now, he should first think about what he will return to, and then how to survive through his own skills! I wonder why the protagonist thought of ninjutsu in the first place! What he is most capable of is not mathematics, physics and chemistry! It's okay to risk your life in times of crisis, but can't you learn a lesson? Once you make enough money, you can just buy your enemies over directly! Ninjas are just tools to perform tasks. How easy it is to pay Uchiha to die one by one. They obviously have brains, but they don't know how to use them. Too childish and unlike the normal world. No cash is mentioned in all aspects, only ninjas are mentioned. The protagonist's perspective is only limited to ninjas, and there is no concept of a complete society at all!

To be honest, the Eight Gate Dungeon has really been blown away. When Kai opened the Eight Gates, Madara could kill him countless times. The back swing is too long. In Naruto, the longer the back swing, the faster the death. There is no fourth generation to back up. I want to defend Dao Yu. What do you use to kick?

Chapter 7 is so pretentious that the old author still makes this mistake. Does he really think he can write this kind of plot with profound connotations? In the end, he has to start. This kind of pretentious inner drama can be brushed off without any impact. If you continue to do this in the world of Naruto, it will just look annoying.

I can't stand the latest one anymore. The protagonist and a group of people sneak attack the enemy and beat the enemy with such difficulty. It's the Thousand Hands clan's fault. Just cut your own neck. The writing is really illogical. The sneak attack at the beginning is a direct hit of AOE, and it is depressing to watch it even more powerful. Moreover, the main perspective is not with the protagonist, and there is no sense of immersion. There is something wrong with the writing! It feels like the author takes it for granted and thinks that what he writes is good-looking, but not what readers think is good-looking.

The following is my opinion (you can call it nonsense): The protagonist has already been confirmed to have super potential and good strength, so why should we follow the original plot? If not to kill Madara Uchiha, why would he still be there? What are you doing if you are indecisive on the battlefield? So-and-so is not treating guests to a meal, he is bleeding and making sacrifices. He develops in a wretched manner, internally communicates with a group of children such as Tobirama (shaping the three views), contacts clan members who are dissatisfied with the war, and trains them into teammates with similar three views (direct troops); externally, friendly relations with Uzumaki and others can win over the family, and establish meritorious deeds by attacking opposition groups such as Uchiha. When the time comes (with power, power, and strength), you will succeed in ascending to the throne. Build walls high, accumulate grain widely, establish bases, ignite a spark, and then it will start a prairie fire and then be carried away in a wave, The red torrent has formed. After that, he went to the moon to capture Kaguya, studied it with Tobirama and others and transformed it into a power source, and quickly rushed towards the "four modern hua". After writing it like this, seventy or eighty years passed, the protagonist died of old age, and the whole book was completed. I'm writing some extras or something, perfect!

I think the protagonist should reform the ninjas from now on! Start educating your own brothers first, and then the children in the family. This is the team that the protagonist can strive for! When the protagonist grows up, he strives for recognition from his tribe and becomes the patriarch to reform his own ninja clan. Change from ninja mercenary survival mode to farming mode! Reforming his thinking, Tobirama became a ninjutsu scientist and strategist, and his other brothers became generals. Other tribesmen became the middle and lower-level managers of the force, absorbing civilians, establishing towns and then absorbing other ninja tribes, and educating civilians to form ninja armies to balance the power of the ninja tribe. Then he overthrows the Kingdom of Fire and builds the country to become the leader of the country. Don't become a famous person or emperor! Be republican! These can fill 500 chapters! After ten years of national peace building and education, Black Jue secretly promotes other countries to jointly attack the protagonist! The first ninja war begins! Black Zetsu secretly collected tailed beast chakra to save his mother and save her remaining health! The First Ninja World War ended, and the protagonist defeated other countries to unify the ninja world. I can still write five hundred chapters! Then after a few decades of rest, Princess Kaguya leads the 100,000 White Zetsu to join forces with the ninja clan who are dissatisfied with the protagonist to launch the Second Ninja World War! Kaguya is defeated! The protagonist is injured and passes to Tobirama for treatment, and then writes about the influence and growth of the unification of the ninja world on Naruto and Sasuke, and then the third ninja war when the Otsutsuki clan attacks! Then Tobirama studies dragon veins and discovers other worlds. Write another five hundred chapters! Travel to other lives and learn other powers and technologies to enhance the civilization of the ninja world! Demonic transformation of the ninja world! Conquer all realms! Write another five hundred chapters!

My brain hurts when I look at it. You are kidding me. Hashirama can clearly become six paths without being afraid of black Zetsu. No matter what Madara does, he directly digs out Madara's eyes. Izuna is also a kaleidoscope. He combines one with one and then captures all the tailed beasts. Not only the Six Paths, but also the sealing of Black Zetsu unified the ninja world. The most incomprehensible thing is that there is no bond with Madara in the first place. Why can't he be killed just to tell the truth to Madara?

I read Chapter 7. I don't understand why so many people talk about poison? Isn't it normal? A young man of about 20 years old who has no experience in the world traveled to the world of Naruto. Even if you were to kill a dog and eat dog meat in the real world, you would still feel a little unbearable and would not be able to do it. Not to mention killing people, the protagonist just didn't act cruelly. Can't we give the protagonist a process of acceptance? Are you all murderers?

How to say it. . . The protagonists of the books you write always dress up as the original characters or directly use the original characters as the protagonists. No matter how you look at it, it seems a bit out of place. It was originally a good book, but the sense of immersion has plummeted.

I think the reason why Naruto is scolded the most is not because of the collapse of his combat power in the later period, but because he counterattacked from a hot-blooded ordinary boy to become a powerful ninja, and turned into a pretending to be the son of the Six Paths ancestors with a strong identity and background. I think the protagonist should be like Xiao Li, relying solely on hard work instead of relying on background and bloodline (this is my own personal opinion, try not to criticize me.)

It's really a lot of nonsense. The author takes it for granted and explains some things in one go, but every time he has to explain a bunch of nonsense in his heart, it's really annoying.

After reading dozens of chapters, the most profound thing I felt was the poor sense of immersion. I keep mentioning the author who has written two fanfics or various characters from later generations. I feel that the author's ability has not only not improved but has significantly declined.

Should novels pursue truth❓ If some contents of novels are untrue, readers will say that they are divorced from reality; while some contents clearly pursue truth, but they will still be criticized by readers. Do you know why? My answer is that the criterion for judging the content of a novel is not "whether it is true or not" at all, but "whether it is interesting or not"! Anything that will reduce readers' interest in reading should not be written. On the contrary, you should write whatever can arouse readers' interest. However, giving up the pursuit of truth does not mean giving up the pursuit of logic. Logic must still be self-consistent, otherwise it will greatly affect reading. So as long as some untrue content is logically consistent and interesting, you can consider writing it. Content that, although true and even logically consistent, is not interesting and will offend readers is not worth writing about. If it is unavoidable, it should be brushed off at most. Do not expand or write in detail, otherwise it will only be annoying. ‼ ️Note: The above-mentioned need to write content that interests readers does not mean that everything should be closer to "enjoyment", because interesting is not the same as enjoyment. For example, Lu Xun's articles have almost no exciting elements, but they can make readers find them interesting and classic. Of course, the reason why people find it interesting may be complicated, and may be the result of multiple factors, and this is the most worthy of our study. [Addition of similar reasons] Similar reasons often appear in film and television adaptations of original works. Adaptations are likely to be criticized and said to be disrespectful of the original works. But in fact, this is not a question of the degree of restoration of the original work. It is clearly a question of whether the audience finds it good-looking or not. If the adaptation is really good, no one will pay attention to whether it matches the original work. It's just because I think it's not good-looking that I use the original work as a reference. After all, the reality is that many film and television viewers may not have seen the original work. A typical example is Journey to the West. In the new version of Journey to the West, there is actually a version that is very consistent with the original work, but it is still criticized for not respecting the original work. On the contrary, most people actually adapted the 1986 version of Journey to the West, which was more beautified, and most people approved of it, and few people said it disrespected the original work. So in the final analysis, the most important thing is whether it looks good or not. If you say you don't respect the original work, it's just because the adaptation is not good enough.

I feel that the Uchiha brothers from the Warring States Period are more suitable as the ups and downs of the protagonists of the story, and the reversal of the story content can also be more attractive! The author's writing is good, and I really want to read the story of the Warring States Period, but Senju Hashirama as the protagonist makes me uninterested! Mu Dun is very strong but really low.

It's the same as the original work. Isn't it great to watch anime? You can watch some fan fiction without any creativity of your own.

The coffin is lifted, the grave head jumps up!

Author, please write the next book about Hashirama.

Why the Otsutsuki clan can use the planet as a field and travel freely in the universe is because they are born with the blood inheritance net, white eye, reincarnation eye, and reincarnation eye. They don't need to practice. As long as they keep planting trees, they will never die. It is no exaggeration to say that the protagonist should have known the moment he became Hashirama that the world of Naruto is much more powerful than ordinary people and is not even a species. Why should he follow the rules of ordinary people since he has become a high-level creature. It's like a novel about cultivating immortals. Is it appropriate to ascend to the immortal world and also go to the lower world?

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There are so many inner dramas. You are on the battlefield of the Warring States Period, either killing people or being killed. Why do you always think about the scenes behind the original work?

The author should finish the book. Many times when I see this kind of serialized book and it hasn't been updated for several months, I don't want to read it. Since it's already finished, why not finish it

There is no sense of empathy, which is very dramatic, and the male takes the initiative and uses present nouns, which feels very silly.

Naruto fan fiction is not popular because of setting issues. Many people have not watched Naruto and cannot even figure out the combat power. You have to set a limit yourself, but basically it requires a very deep writing style, not to mention a master level, at least an elite. Now it's like ghosts are not ghosts and people are not humans.