Pokemon: The Dark Child

. . . . The plot is OK, but the knowledge points are messy. Shadow Ball fights the normal system, Meditation Fire Fist, Sword Dance Dragon Wave Dragon Star Cluster, Hu Di fights the Hot Monkey because the fighting attribute is very tricky. Gotha Duck uses water-based skills to grind down Longlong Rock's HP. Longlong Rock's special defense HP is basically gone. Gotha Duck's water-type four times restraint is basically gone.

I would like to make a suggestion, if the protagonist is really Banmu's son, I think he has a bit of affection for the protagonist. I don't think even Banmu would be without the kind of care and teaching that a father has for his son, right? Considering Sakaki's character, we can actually add some subtle concerns and vague dismay at his son's good performance, which may make the character a little fuller. Now this is completely the way my superiors deal with their subordinates, which makes me always wonder if my son's identity is fake, or is it a foreshadowing?

Why change the messy settings? I have endured the first-level god Arceus, and I have endured the third-level god of space and time! God damn Guraton, Rayquaza, and Kyogre are the third level gods? ? Mew is a fourth-level god? Do you understand the fantasy beast? The most outrageous thing is that the 3 lake gods are level 4 gods, and xyz is a level 5 god? ? ? Have you actually seen Pokémon? Now that you're done, can you say again that all the other mythical beasts can be recovered? 🤔🤔🤔 Why are Wind King, Lugia, Sun and Moon Necrozma and Black and White Dragon all champion Pokémon? It can still be recovered by humans. I am speechless! Is it okay to just ask him to quit? Waste of time😅😅😅

Author, can the conversation between the pig's trotter and the elf be divided into sections so that it can be more comfortable to watch?

I'm confused. The protagonist only has one friend so far. It's too fake. Besides, don't write everyone as hostile, okay?

Strength persuades me to retract the article. I voted for Cathy on the earth at the beginning. I can bear it. The rain is fast and swimming frogs can bear it. Mosquitoes and tadpoles have all said goodbye to the rain.

The Ankylosaurus is the quasi-god of Alola, right?

What to say. . . Looking forward to the next one, this one can only be said to be readable. The setting is great, the plot is okay, and the details are terrible. There are quite a lot of conflicts in many places, and then there are a lot of bugs in the simplest skill learning and attribute restraint, and I haven't checked the information. The most profound one is. . . I remember that in the evolutionary chain of mosquito-repellent frogs, isn't it true that only the mosquito-repellent frog king has rainfall properties? Why does the protagonist have rainfall properties from the mosquito-repellent tadpoles to the later evolutions? . .

There are too many typos. Can't you correct it from scratch?

After reading a few chapters... Casey's triple attack and Gotha Duck's teleportation are a bit outrageous. The author is just pure YY.