Pokemon: The Dark Child
精灵之黑暗之子
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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856Chapters
1.2kRecommendations
9.9kFans
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The plot is alright, but the factual points are a jumbled mess. Shadow Ball beats Normal-types, Calm Mind and Fire Punch, Swords Dance, Dragon Pulse, and Draco Meteor. Alakazam is tough against Magma Monkey because of its Fighting type. Golduck uses Water-type moves to whittle down Golem's HP; Golem's low Special Defense and HP are easily taken down by Golduck's Water-type move with a 4x weakness.
I have a suggestion: if the protagonist is truly Giovanni's son, I think he would at least have some paternal affection for the protagonist. I believe even Giovanni wouldn't be completely devoid of that kind of fatherly love and guidance, right?
What kind of ridiculous setting is this? I can tolerate Arceus being a first-tier god, and the three legendary Pokémon of the Time and Space era being second-tier gods! But Groudon, Rayquaza, and Kyogre are third-tier gods?? Mew is a fourth-tier god? Do you even understand what a mythical Pokémon is?
Author, could you please break the dialogue between the protagonist and the elf into paragraphs? It would be much more comfortable to read that way.
I'm just wondering, the protagonist only has one friend so far, it's so unrealistic. And please don't portray everyone as hostile, okay?
This is a story that's seriously discouraging readers from reading it. I could tolerate the opening scene of casting Casey on Earth, and I could tolerate the rain and fast-swimming frogs, but now even the mosquito coil tadpoles are raining down—goodbye!
Kommo-o is a pseudo-legendary Pokémon from the Alola region, right?
Well... I'll look forward to the next one. This one is just readable. The premise is great, the plot is okay, but the details are a mess. There are many major conflicts, and even the simplest things like skill learning and type advantages have a lot of bugs that I didn't check. The most striking thing is... I remember that in the Poliwag evolutionary chain, only Poliwag King has the Rain ability, so why does the protagonist have the Rain ability from Poliwag Tadpole to all his later evolutions?
There are too many typos, can't you fix it from the beginning?
After reading a few chapters... Casey's triple attack and Golduck's instant teleportation are a bit outrageous. Is the author just making things up?