Going God Mode Starts with Suppressing Bandits

I just read this book and finished the free chapters. It feels like the author wrote it for his own enjoyment. The protagonist, not to mention the whole thing, barely has any screen time for at least a third of the time. There are no highlights in major events, the minor plots are not very satisfying, and he never manages to win a major victory against any respectable general.

To be honest, the Three Kingdoms period is a very difficult subject to write about. Every boy has a dream of martial arts and the Three Kingdoms, and everyone fantasizes about their favorite strategists and generals who roamed freely in that period of history.

After reading the comments, it seems the main character is a non-celebrity? I couldn't bear to watch the Yellow Turban Rebellion from the beginning, for personal reasons. First, there's the issue of the protagonist's personality. He's not exactly a goofball, but he always seems a bit eccentric.

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I feel the protagonist has too little screen time. Many scenes are described in great detail even though the protagonist isn't involved, and his character's progress in strength is a bit slow. Even though it's a game, the quests should at least offer an opportunity to complete them.

I think the author focused primarily on the game itself, paying less attention to the protagonist. In other words, the author wanted to write a game story, not just a protagonist's boasting tale. Those who say the story lacks focus probably only want to see the protagonist and require the entire book to describe him. Although it's a freebie, this book is really good.

The first twenty chapters were quite interesting, but after reading over 50 chapters, it got a bit annoying. There was just too much nonsense. Putting aside whether it was filler or not, the endless awkward atmosphere was very likely to annoy readers. 😎

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I suggest the author not make the protagonist so unlucky; those of us with great luck here find it hard to connect with the story.

You can write about supporting characters, but only briefly, maybe one or two chapters at most. However, the author has written too many supporting characters, which doesn't help the main plot at all. I don't know if I'll be able to keep up with the updates. Writing stories about supporting characters means I'll have to nurture them, and they're easy to kill off. Of course, if the author wants to indulge in their own fantasies, that's fine too.