The Era of Copies for All

The plot of this book before the five-person team gathers is very good. The world view is set well, with conflicts, dreams, short-term and long-term goals. The members of the team are well described and portrayed, and they all have their own stories without being stereotyped. If I write according to this rhythm and strength, I personally think the results of this book will be better. However, starting from the first copy after the team members gathered, it was completely chaotic. The main plot is completely destroyed, and a lot of words and chapters are spent developing plots with no clear purpose and function. To put it bluntly, the author is trying to make things up, deliberately setting up some plots and pitfalls that seem to be very complicated, but completely abandoning his own advantages and what he is good at. It may not sound nice, but it is indeed a pity. After reading the first part, I was very interested in collecting and investing, but the rest of it went too far off topic.