It's Not Too Cold in Tokyo

Although it's not good to say this, I still want to say, author, have you read those episodes? Forced second design? I think this is not as good as originality, at least change the character's name

I haven't read your book yet, so I have no right to comment on how good your writing is, but judging from the introduction, you don't understand what a second hypothesis is. Redesign means adding your own settings while respecting the original settings. Instead of overturning the original settings and using your own settings. The original work of Yinglili's parents brought Yinglili into the ACG world. Her parents always sold her fanbooks at the C exhibition. There is no possibility of breaking up with her parents because of the drawings.

I really just want to say one thing. Please stop the trolls for a while. If you really hate this book, wouldn't it be better to just fork it? Do you have to attack a person's carefully written work? Please think carefully about the impact of saying this on a person before commenting. Thank you.

Yes, it's a light novel. It should be a harem. But I don't really like ambiguous novels. It has hundreds of chapters and it's just ambiguous. Although it's only now, it's already obvious that it's ambiguous. I don't like this. Although it's very nice and warm.

I started to see fanfics of passerby heroines, and they always brought in the settings of the heroine Kato Megumi, and I felt that that was the best way to write them. But after reading the author's novel, I realized that it's not bad if the senior sister is the female protagonist. The characters are vivid and sweet from time to time. The male protagonist is having an affair with some girls, but he doesn't want to start a harem. Unlike other novels where the male protagonist is ambiguous and then becomes entangled and ends up being romantic. After all, a good-looking male protagonist is destined to be favored by many people. Instead of accepting this just because the other person is beautiful, the writing is very good👌🏻 Especially in the latest chapters, the status of the senior is basically confirmed (the senior is very jealous and sweet!!!) I hope the author will continue to write well! ! ! Speed ​​up updates! ! Gkd! ! !

When I saw the title of this book, I had to emphasize that Tokyo is always hot 😜

It looks good, as if the author has become a coding machine~(￣▽￣~)~

This book is okay. I personally think it's still worth reading. I heard that the author is also studying in Wuhan. What a coincidence. I'm also studying for a PhD at China Normal University. I wonder if you're at Wuhan University or Huake? We can chat privately when we have time. I will give you a recommendation vote

It looks a bit interesting, but it's another one that has gone cold. See you later.

First of all, I admire you because as a fan writer, it is not easy to have such popularity. Secondly, since you are a fan, you should not change the original settings. Otherwise, the so-called Kasumigaoka Shiu, Sawamura, Spencer, Eirily and others in your works will become meaningless names. These actions of yours have obviously aroused public outrage (laughing). Finally, I want to encourage you. The writing style is what attracted me from the beginning. I have only read a dozen chapters and I am not eager to read the following chapters. Although I personally think it is well written. To the author: Writing fan fiction, if you are just a non-professional writer, then your current achievements are already very successful, and you have fulfilled your fan fiction dream. This type of article is the most difficult to write. Learning from original works will be of great help to your writing. I hope to see more new works from you in the future. Persistence is the key to victory, come on! Oli gives! First of all, I admire you because as a fan writer, it is not easy to have such popularity. Secondly, since you are a fan, you should not change the original settings. Otherwise, the so-called Kasumigaoka Shiu, Sawamura, Spencer, Eirily and others in your works will become meaningless names. These actions of yours have obviously aroused public outrage (laughing). Finally, I want to encourage you. The writing style is what attracted me from the beginning. I have only read a dozen chapters and I am not eager to read the following chapters. Although I personally think it is well written. To the author: Writing fan fiction, if you are just a non-professional writer, then your current achievements are already very successful, and you have fulfilled your fan fiction dream. This type of article is the most difficult to write. Learning from original works will be of great help to your writing. I hope to see more new works from you in the future. Persistence is the key to victory, come on! Oli gives! Pictures represent positions.

Emm, give the author some suggestions. In fact, it is quite troublesome to write the second set of fan fiction. After all, many people who like the first set may complain about the second set. . . As for making changes to the second design. . . This may be very sensitive, because they prefer the second setting of the original work, and changing or supplementing the setting may cause problems. Actually, the author doesn't have to worry too much about the problem that many people think is different because some settings are not completed. After all, there are currently more than 100 chapters. If it doesn't work, you can try to reset the outline. After all, I haven't written a lot, so it is not difficult to change. Logical problems, in fact, there are still problems, but there is no such thing as "I can't finish it after ten chapters". But the author can actually take some time to review the chapters he has written so far, and he will find that there are actually quite a lot of problems. There is also the setting of character love lines. In fact, there are already a lot of love lines at present, and adding any more will probably make it overwhelming. At present, there are not many two-dimensional novels, and readers are also very picky (well, there are really many, and many masters will be criticized.) In fact, the author has written very well, but some setting issues still need to be paid attention to. Some people are actually right (I will not mention some aggressive ones. If you really make suggestions The tone of the discussion should be at least a little better. If you think it's not good, just delete the book. It won't be a disgusting thing. ), But the tone may not be good, so the author shouldn't take it to heart. For example, some of the comments are actually correct. So many likes show that many people agree with the issues raised. Finally, I hope the author can write better. After all, there are really not many two-dimensional novels, and the daily ones are almost the same. I am very happy to find this one. I hope the author will not be a eunuch. After all, there is someone waiting for you.

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When Hai Hai first wrote the book, he was ridiculed a lot. Don't let other people's trash talk influence your emotions. You wrote very well. Be yourself. Come on! !

I have a premonition that the author is a eunuch, oh, it's over

Except for the slow update, the writing is very good in other aspects.

The plot of this novel is interesting, and the writing is excellent. The only certainty is that the male protagonist is really too cliché, and he loves learning. Of course, this is acceptable, after all, the writing and plot are really interesting. I just hope that the male protagonist will not be the kind of character who only flirts but does not marry, and the female protagonist even expresses her intention and pretends to be innocent. This character is really badly written. I don't know how many times I have seen this kind of stupid male protagonist in novels and anime. This kind of male protagonist who only flirts but does not marry, and pretends to be confused because he understands, is honestly the most disgusting and scumbag kind. What I mean above is not that I want the author to write those explicit and erotic novels. I just hope that if I like it, I will establish a relationship and write it.

Please invest in new book! This is a small account where the author can reply to messages

Maybe her parents knew about Yinglili's publication of the book, and even helped her.

Is this Tokyo you're talking about hot?

Judging from the introduction, it's no longer a second set. It's just a skin of the original character. It's better to change the name and write an original one 😅😅

No, Yinglili's painting book was originally brought by her mother, and her mother sold it. Her father is also a nerd who likes Japanese otaku culture. No matter what the second setting, don't do this...

Hey, it's so difficult. It's so difficult to find a well-written two-dimensional daily comic book. But because of this, readers will cherish it even if it's not particularly well-written. For example, this book has nearly 50,000 fans within a few days of being put on the shelves. This achievement is definitely not bad for Qidian fanfics, right? But the author is actually a eunuch?

First there are saints and then there is heaven. I am as beautiful as a fairy in a painting.

What a eunuch! I think this book is very well written.

Using anime characters, everything is completely different. It feels like except for the same name, everything else is completely different. It's really uncomfortable to watch. It's better to create a new world and be original.

I don't know why I always think about folding sticks

The only hope now is that the author will not TJ

Has the author read the original work? Yinglili's interest was cultivated with their parents, and she also had a cold war with her family. Isn't it funny?

This book was written 5 years ago, but it is still good today.