Back to 2008

I really regret that I subscribed so much at once. The more I write, the worse it gets. When I read the chapters in the past few days, I felt like I didn't want to read them even after spending money. In the early stage, the author wrote about campus love and time-travelers with no big advantages. The pace was quite good. The author himself said in the article that the protagonist can be at the expense of small details but not big ones. I think the author will also adhere to this principle. But as of now, the author has described a man who went from working hard to falling instantly, and he kept justifying himself and making excuses. I can no longer see any of Li Da's merits. I only see his lack of ambition, contentment with pleasure, foresight, hesitation, dishonesty, and disloyalty. In particular, the recent chapters increasingly reflect the male protagonist's inability to reflect, knowing his mistakes but not correcting them, and even knowingly making mistakes and pretending to be stupid. I don't know whether the author didn't write an outline or because of a contract, a new book, or a request for a popular book. It can be clearly felt that the author is writing more and more casually, and will start talking nonsense at every point. The content is arranged more and more unintentionally, and the characterization is increasingly unprincipled, turning an urban novel that can be close to reality into nonsense. Readers can feel your lack of attention to readers. The quality gap between the early and late writing is so obvious, I think serious readers can feel it. Thinking about making money and thinking about good reviews, it is impossible to get it if you are not sincere to readers. I hope the author can reflect on himself.

Complaints, why are there so many coincidences? The plot is all driven by coincidences, various misunderstandings, and cross-channel chats. Once or twice is fine, but if it is too many, it will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue, and it feels like it will no longer feel coherent. In addition, the character of Long Ya is also the same. He knows three things and does not consider the situation of the protagonist at all. This image really makes me sick. The early character image is too separated from the later one. Maybe it would be better to change it to two characters. The protagonist also seems to have been tricked by Long Ya into lowering his head. The inexplicable operation and plot are also very different from the previous character image.

The current progress is really uncomfortable to watch. She was so innocent at the beginning, but she was forced to transfer to the harem with Luo Dongqing's unreasonable assists. Just transfer, Tang Youyou can't accept it. But is this what a harem should be like? One chapter for each heroine? The feeling now is that I am doing mission upgrades, and I am gaining reputation while doing it. Luo Dongqing's reputation is worshiped, okay, I can unlock the new map Tang Youyou, and I worship Tang Youyou again, and unlock the hidden map Long Ya. Long Ya is also worshiped, and there is a new map to be unlocked. This is really the feeling from the beginning. It gives the impression that there is no priority at all. When it is in one person's chapter, other characters are not mentioned at all or mentioned in passing, letting us know that the previous heroine is still alive. However, in a real harem, there will always be an unshakable female protagonist, who appears in the field of vision at any time throughout the entire text, or it can be said that there are two female protagonists facing each other, and the plot is unfolded with some conflicts, not too big or too small. But what about this one? In fact, it can be seen that Luo Dongqing is the C position, but since the geographical separation, it seems that the two people have really separated. After such a long separation, Li Da has never thought about whether he should go to see his eldest wife? Luo Dongqing was obviously clingy and jealous in the past, but he never wanted to come and play with Li Da. Even in these recent chapters, his presence is not as strong as that of his sister-in-law, right? To put it bluntly, the way you write now is at best a stock trading article, not a harem article. But the problem is that stock trading is wrong, and it can't be just one article and another, right? Collecting them one by one is actually a normal way of writing the harem. So in fact, now it is a harem combined with stock trading, it really has a nondescript feeling. I don't know if you just think that way or what, I can only say that it is really uncomfortable.

This turns out to be a harem story. The harem question originally didn't matter, it was just so tough It was too stiff. Originally, the content before the price was raised, and Luo, were sweet and tangy. I think it's quite beautiful too. Some people say that the protagonist's mind is too immature, but I think it's okay. After all, comparing one's feelings with one's own, and meeting a cute girl, even if you have never been in love, will indeed lead to wisdom. The key is that you insist on flirting with Tang Youyou later. The character design in the previous chapter was to focus solely on writing books about saints and sages, even though he was a scumbag, but in the end, he was just beginning to have a romantic interest. It doesn't matter if you are just starting to fall in love. The key protagonist is that he obviously has someone he likes, but he still flirts with other people, and doesn't clarify it with the people around him. He's always ambiguous and deliberately doesn't tell the truth. Deliberately creating misunderstandings. As for the fate of the two people, the protagonist rents Tang Youyou's old home. The plot arranged by the author is a bit bloody, which is understandable. But, if you are locked out, shouldn't you call the nearest locksmith? ? ? Secondly, it is clear that Luo likes me, but he still doesn't know it with other girls in front of her. This is a problem with central air conditioning and character, right? If you like someone, you must learn to reject other temptations and eliminate other misunderstandings. There are books about harems. Those emperors and generals have three wives and four concubines. The changes in the heartbeat of the female supporting characters are at least a little reasonable. (However, I have indeed stopped reading harem stories in the past few years. It's really embarrassing.) It's not that you can't have a harem. At least it's reasonable. It won't make the school committee excited and there will be no discomfort of inconsistency. Just Tang Youyou, a person who reversed his puppy love, fell into love soon after turning around. Awkward! By the way, I saw a question in a book circle and felt that everyone yearns for a harem in life. Yes! I want to yearn for it too! But those are women! Normally, women will not deliberately act mean when they know they are with someone, and they will act mean if they do. A very small number of people are in love but stop in courtesy. Really, the author really insists on it!

Hmm... I gave it up. The author's writing is very good, and the writing also has the feeling of high school. However, the misunderstandings and coincidences in the plot are a bit overwhelming. The protagonist is obviously just a warm-hearted person, but the more he looks at it, the more he looks like a scumbag (don't criticize me, I feel like it). Maybe I am too sensitive. Finally, I wish this book will get better as it gets written...

According to the author, I have to pay to comment. I subscribed for 50 chapters and couldn't stand it after reading about ten chapters. Write some suggestions. If you can see it, you can see it. If you can't see it, it doesn't matter. I'm just a nosy enthusiastic person. The chapters before being released are all good, with personality and good writing. However, the emotional advancement of the short chapters is okay. Reading the long chapters, it is like seeing a mess, with various coincidences creating misunderstandings, and misunderstandings for the sake of the plot. Reminds me of watching Korean dramas. There is nothing wrong with the script and acting. It only arouses love two or three times in one scene. How can I deceive you with so many tears. If you want to write sweet articles, I sincerely recommend you to read them Take a look at Liu Xiahui's control over sweet articles. If it causes discomfort, you can delete it. Farewell.

Actually, I don't like the character Tang Youyou at all. Really, I don't know why. Maybe it's because she doesn't like Uncle Da that much and likes to have a bad temper.

，，，，！ I really like what the author writes (dog food is enough) and I hope it will continue to be of such high quality Come on, author! I can still eat it!

It took more than four hundred and seventy chapters to write down the year 2008. Emmmmm, farewell!

Sweet&Cruel Extras Li Da's thoughts gradually drifted away. This was his habit. Suddenly, the world seemed to have changed. A white light and shadow flashed out of the train window, followed by boundless darkness. Only the sparks of dazzling metal friction spread in this endless darkness. What's going on? When Li Da looked for light from the endless darkness, he saw a hand. The hand was very slender and white. Memories revived in Li Da's mind. Although his mind was still groggy, he still subconsciously held the white hand. Using force, he dragged her to a place where there was still light. It was her, the girl who had just been forced to give up her seat. It's her, the one who remembers Li Da's thoughts day and night. It's her, Luo Dongqing.

The plot is rigorous and layer upon layer. The full text exudes the sour odor of love and the aura of white learning. Uncle Da conquers his deskmate Luo Dongqing, maxes out his flirting skills, and becomes a "love expert". There are climaxes during the period. At first, Luo Dongqing thinks that Uncle Da still likes Tang Youyou, so he takes the initiative to make friends with Tang Youyou and build a bridge. But Uncle Da likes Luo. Tang thinks that Luo likes Uncle Da and dare not confess it, but Uncle Da does not know Luo's love. In the end, Uncle Da and Luo became boyfriend and girlfriend, but Tang hesitated and lost. But in Chapter 310, Tang kissed Luo on the cheek in front of Uncle Da, and was very angry. ... In a word, Bai Xue's situation is really chaotic in your circle.

I really want to have a high school life like this 😭😭 I went to school alone in the United States at the age of 14, and I am already 21 in the blink of an eye. This book describes the youth in my imagination 😭😭 Come on, it will be fully booked when it is released

I thought, write a long review, forget it, my writing is not good, write less. I have only read a hundred chapters now, but this book really moved me. For no other reason than I am just an ordinary person. I can only do it again to make myself less regretful. There are a lot of people like me, so where can there be so much excitement in life? I didn't think about earth-shattering things. I did, and I thought about my fantasies and delusions. These are never recorded on paper. What is recorded on paper is always the trivial matters of life and the ups and downs of emotions. Fallen leaves in old books, notebooks thrown into the bookshelf, a row of youth literature, old classmates who occasionally contact each other, these are the past and memories. Maybe I'm a little bit involved in Li Da's daily life (maybe because we both have the last name Li?). His daily life always reminds me of my daily life, and I can't help but sigh, high school life is so good, and I miss those idiots so much. I know I can only sigh, because starting over, or going back to the past, is a false proposition. So I think this novel touches my heart. I also wrote about the regrets I had in middle school, and the conclusion I came to is just what I said before. If I try it again, I will just have less regrets. I am very lucky to have such a book, and I hope that Li Da will have fewer regrets. Okay, I finished writing, I have to go to kindergarten, bye∽🪖

Personal opinion: I think every reader should respect every person who writes. Whether these words agree with you or not, you have the freedom to leave or stay. When you come or go, you should have a respectful heart. I like this book and this story very much. Thank you for your writing, every word of yours. Finally, I would like to ask the author about the rules for adding updates.

It's well written, with too many personal opinions.

Oh my God, I have to write hundreds of words just to eat pickled mustard. It's really a detail. . . It doesn't advance the plot either! ! I almost vomited while listening to the work~~~

It took me a month to finish reading Chapter 70, so I'd better order it in bulk in two days.

Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No amount of gorgeous words can describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: Your novel is so touching! How about... Another chapter?

Since it is a warm and realistic novel, it is unreasonable to open a harem. I guess the author may create a multi-line ending, which can not only satisfy the demands of the single female leader, but also allow the major parties to obtain their own satisfactory endings.

Divided. So good

As a Bai scholar, I put down the Bai textbook and immediately ordered all of them. Can you please add some details?

Tang Youyou lay weakly on the bed, with tears streaming down her face before she knew it. She slowly recalled everything that had happened in the past, and something seemed to be sprouting in her heart... "Why, why! Whether you know him or confess your feelings first, it's obvious. It's mine, why are you so skilled!" Tang Youyou looked at Li Da and Luo Dongqing in a daze, Luo Dongqing seemed to be angry, lying on the table and ignoring him, Li Da coaxed him with a smile, and he didn't know what he said that made Luo Dongqing's face turn red. "The first time I heard the confession, the second time I heard it from someone else's mouth, it was obviously a double happiness, so why is it so painful when superimposed on everything...?" Tang Youyou watched blankly as Li Da smiled awkwardly at Luo Dongqing. Tang Youyou thought: "For the first time, I have someone I like and a best friend for life. The two joys overlap each other, and this double joy brings more and more joy. I should have had a dream-like happy time, but why, it turned out like this. It was me, it was me first, I was obviously the one who came first, whether it was my deskmate, confession, or being liked. " The ivy-colored photo album "whatever, it doesn't matter anymore. The love that can't be conveyed is no longer needed. Because there is no one anymore who is worthy of love." The photo album that was just sorted was broken at some point, and a deep crack was inserted between Li Da and Tang Youyou, leaving Li Da with Luo Dongqing and Tang Youyou together... "No need, no more... No need."

I couldn't stand it any longer. This is the first book I've abandoned halfway. To briefly summarize the protagonist's character, he has to be both a scumbag and an archetype.

Why can't so many people watch harem stories? Are they all female readers? I wonder, shouldn't all men in reality have the ideal of embracing each other?

To be honest, when I see liberal arts students, I don't want to see them.

U1S1, the first half really attracted me. I haven't read a novel word for word for a long time. Subscribed all at once. But after seeing Tang Youyou accepted, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I really don't think a harem is necessary in this kind of novel. The previous portrayal of Luo Dongqing is too plump and attractive, and forcing a harem will only make people feel uncomfortable. Personal opinion, don't blame me.

Um... I've read a third of it, and I've already started to flip through it in a hurry. How to say it? First, I thought the main focus was career, but it turned out to be about relationships, which was not to my liking; second, it was a bit too procrastinating and long-winded; third, there were too many coincidences and twists and turns. I kind of understand the reason why this book's performance is not ideal.

Qidian Finance Section: The stock price of Dongqing shares rose because Li Da confessed his love to Luo Dongqing and told her I like you. Netizen A: I already said that I have inside information, and Holly stocks will definitely rise. You see, the financial sector has reported it. Netizen B: But I saw a new stock in the financial section - Xue Auntie Stock. Everyone said that this stock will rise, so they bought it in large quantities while it was newly released, and waited for the stock price to rise. Netizen A: But I heard that Aunt Xue's stock has almost no room to rise. Listen to me and sell it early and buy Holly stock. By the way, Youyou stocks can also be bought in small amounts Netizen B: Didn't Yoyo stocks collapse at the beginning, the stock price plummeted, and fell to the limit for a period of time, although the stock price has picked up a bit recently. Also, how do you know that Aunt Xue's shares have no room for appreciation? Although Holly stocks have been rising since the beginning, they have risen too slowly. They hardly rose at all some time ago, and they only rose a little today. Netizen A: You didn't know this, right? Holly stocks are potential stocks. Although they are rising slowly now, they are only in the bottleneck period. As long as they break through the bottleneck, they can rise sharply. The collapse of Youyou shares in the early stage was just a result of the wrong investment direction, which caused the stock price to plummet. Now it has found the right direction and the stock price is recovering. Aunt Xue's stock really has no bright spots and is difficult to rise. Netizen B: How do I know if what you said is accurate? What if I fail? Netizen A: I already told you that I have inside information. Netizen B: Where did you get the inside information? Netizen A: I got the news from the superficial boy in the middle school. Netizen B: It turns out that the boy in the second grade of middle school is superficial and superficial, and he doesn't know the trend of each stock. Brother, how can I contact the superficial young man in the second grade? I would like to ask you which stock to hold. Netizen A: Open the Qidian Chinese website, search for "Return to 2008", vote every day, subscribe, reward if you can, support the author, and you will have the opportunity to see the inside story revealed.

I saw about 400 chapters. The author's writing style is not bad, and I like the delicate daily life, but too much daily life and details gradually become like a running account. In addition, the character of the protagonist is really hard to like. It is hard to believe that the protagonist has been severely beaten by society and reborn. I guess the author wanted to focus on the youthful memories of high school and made the protagonist look too much like an ordinary high school student. It doesn't mean that you have to be the king after rebirth, but at least you will work hard to gain some trump cards to ensure your rights, right? Even if it's for love... Just like Luo Dongqing who has been repeatedly emphasized, although the protagonist keeps talking, he never thought that if Luo's parents really opposed and broke them up, he would really have no power to fight back, and he would have let down Luo Dongqing's wrong belief in vain. In fact, the reborn protagonist is not incompetent, but simply doesn't want to work hard and gambles on Luo Dongqing's trust and love. Of course, with the author's great blessing, he will definitely win the bet. But it gives the reader the feeling that the protagonist is just a lucky guy who picked up a winning lottery ticket. A poor boy who relies on his in-laws to take care of his career will be unpopular regardless of whether he is a man or a woman...

I can tell you that after more than 200 chapters, just hugging the protagonist feels like the progress is too fast. There is also no need to write the protagonist as a reborn person in this kind of Bai Xue Tian School, and it is written as a reborn character without mentioning the rebirth at all, which makes it very frustrating to watch.