An Infinite Journey Starting from the Big Pirate

Since you are a Celestial Dragon, don't eat the Golden Fruit at the beginning. It is much better than the Golden Fruit. You can easily get it as a Celestial Dragon.

The author's skill is obviously insufficient, and the pirate's purpose at the beginning is too obvious: to obtain fruit abilities and open a harem. The Jinjin ability has been developed very strongly. In the future, the infinite flow will be carried out. In order to ensure that it does not become an invincible flow, the only way is to suppress the Jinjin fruit or increase the enemy's ability. In addition, the harem has been opened, and the future can only follow the writing without opening the harem. The result is this vicious cycle that kills the book.

It's half a chip, the idea is very good, but there are a few poisonous points that cannot be ignored, such as the golden fruit, which cannot be written highly and coolly, and since it is a Tianlong people, it is best to start with the mainstream of cool text, but it is a pity that I did not see it, it is a pity

The protagonist is a rebel, you are a Celestial Dragon, and you actually let the fishmen go to the Holy Land to free the slaves? Do you know what a stance is? Do you know whose resources you are using? Do you know how the Celestial Dragons are hated by the world? Look at the treatment faced by Mingge's family when they left the Holy Land, don't you understand? Once the Celestial Dragons lose power, all the Celestial Dragons, men, women, old and young, will be killed, regardless of whether you are good or evil, because the world only has ill intentions towards you Celestial Dragons, flee the Holy Land? Seeking death, the protagonist's head is made of lard

The advantages of the Celestial Dragons are, first of all, the heavenly gold provided by the world's alliance countries, as well as various devil fruits, secondly rights, and thirdly money. I am confused, the protagonist actually ate the golden fruit? Are you kidding? Xing Lei is still on Sky Island. It's 800 years since World Z. I absolutely don't believe that there are no natural, animal, phantom beasts, or superman types with high upper limits! The article says that the navy will not be given to the Tianlong people. Is it funny? Will the world join the National Bird Navy? Will the items they submit be inspected by the Navy? What's going on? To be honest, I really have no idea. What is the use of the golden fruit? Wouldn't it be a good idea to accept what you cultivate in the future? As long as you are strong enough, why are you afraid that your subordinates will rebel? 🤫 Rebellious Tianlong people, so funny!

The protagonist has split personality🤤🤤🤤

I'm an old bookworm. This book is much better than other pirate novels. I read it in one day.

So fucking awesome. What the hell is that Luna? Why does the routine feel so discouraging! Playing a kissing game with a child and being pinched by a child, are you still an adult?

I originally thought the author could write something a little new, but it turned out to be too cliche.

Can you please stop using the image of Ultraman? It's too dramatic and ugly →_→

The Jinjin fruit is not as good as Kidd's fruit, which can also be used as a weapon to return to the clan.

Those who write about infinite worlds are lying! ! ! !

To be honest, it's okay for the protagonist to hate the Celestial Dragons, but his approach is too childish.

A time-travel fanfic, but the protagonist is killed by the main body? This is too poisonous

It's the first time these two fans have seen so few people.

Why do you reject the identity of Tianlong people? There are only disadvantages and no benefits in running away.

Introduction: I won't be invincible. Here comes the problem. I read the third chapter. I accidentally released the overlord color Haki when I was a baby. When I was two years old, I developed the armed color Haki. Uh ⊙∀⊙! I would like to ask the author, what is the concept of invincible flow in your eyes? According to your way of writing, seventeen years old is not invincible, which is not normal. After all, you can show your overlord color when you are a baby, and you can practice your armed color at the age of two 🤫🤫🤫. Does the author think that being able to destroy the world with a single sneeze as a baby is considered an invincible style, and the others are not invincible styles? If you understand it this way, it is indeed not an invincible flow.

After reading it, let me share my thoughts This is a rare pirate fanfic with new ideas, a good book. Because the current update just happens to be a ** ending, and the early foreshadowing has been explained clearly, so I have to say that the setting and creativity of this book are indeed rare among current One Piece fans to have new ideas For example, the identity of the Celestial Dragon and the plot of Tiger , the fruit of Eneru, etc. In the early stage, the protagonist ate the golden fruit. Many readers asked why he ate the fruit that lowered the upper limit. I also thought at the time that the identity of the Celestial Dragon should not be used well. If you create a natural or fantasy beast, why eat the golden fruit? But with the appearance of (Carlo) and the acquisition of the Thunder Fruit, the combination of gold and thunder became exquisite. If replaced by other natural types or fantasy beasts, it would not be so eye-catching Then why go to Sky Island? In addition to the Thunder Fruit, after reading the latest chapter, it suddenly dawned on me that there is a foreshadowing here However, there are also problems, such as the tragic death of the maid sister [It's really tragic. , And because it has the element of infinite flow, the plot is compressed, which leads to premature exposure to the ceiling of combat power, and the protagonist is beaten several times in the early stage, which makes some readers who like the protagonist invincible very annoying... Then what I personally feel uncomfortable is that the protagonist does not have a harem, and then I write that several young ladies are interested in him, but in the end... This kind of description is worse than a harem! ! ! Obviously the feelings in the world are not only love, but also friendship, sisterly love [brotherly love? ] Can allow the protagonist to establish a bond with the girls But overall, this book is really eye-catching and innovative, and there is no old-fashioned toothless system. The combat descriptions are also pretty good. There will also be laughs in inexplicable places. I want to laugh to death and inherit my flower... I just don't know why it is not very popular... And I don't know how the author set it up later, but after leaving One Piece, I can come back after experiencing other worlds-because I like the background of One Piece the most, and I want to read more about One Piece. Would you like to suggest the world behind Naruto and Gaoying? Because I either haven't seen the others or don't like them very much. Finally, I wish the author better and better results.

Isn't the richest man the leader of the Tianlong people, Yimu (is that his name?), And then the protagonist took off when he was his son. It's funny.

The final boss is of course Im~!

Since the author defines the male protagonist as a dual personality, but it seems that the writing is too inconsistent and one of the poisonous points I recommend the author to refer to "Global Movie King" written by Black Heart Match to learn how to write multiple personalities.

If you hadn't already written so much when I found your book, I hope you would use some of the plots of One Piece in this book called Infinite World Exchange Group. Luffy stopped being the pirate king and changed his career to become a navy. He has become a navy marshal. Can you believe this? He is also a talented author.

There are several female protagonists, just two or three, preferably those who can help the protagonist, not a vase

I just can't figure out why you always express your dissatisfaction with the Celestial Dragons in your words. If you don't like everything, then why are you still wearing Celestial Dragons? The author is too subjective

Part of the reason why Bai Yena was written to death was because she didn't want to have a harem.

The Golden Fruit is perfectly restrained by Magneto It is also material, and is perfectly restrained by all object control systems and physical immunity systems The Thunder Fruit is more suitable for Infinite Flow and cannot be restrained by the controlled object system. Thunder can also defeat evil. If it is bigger, it can protect the soul and attack the soul. If it is stronger, it can develop a magnetic field. In comparison, the Golden Fruit is shit.

Golden Fruit, does the protagonist have to carry gold with him in future fights? To be honest, it is not as useful as the animal type.