The Sadness in Lao Wang's Trouser Pocket

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

After just reading a few chapters, I feel a bit like Liu Zhenyun's style. The author can try submitting it to a literary magazine or something, but I always find it difficult to become popular when writing online articles like this. . .

Most of them are now available 😍😍

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The writing style is not bad Quite interesting realistic themes I have a problem Suggestions Too many long paragraphs Tiring to watch Pay attention later

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Happy New Year! 🙏

I like DaDa's writing technique of telling stories in a eloquent way, which can make people's minds peaceful. DaDa, this is a pure land 🙂 Great Love

Already collected, we care about each other

Happy New Year🙂🙂

Come on! Visit each other and encourage each other.

I feel like you write like a short story writer. You can write something and post it on various forums.

Collection support, hope to visit again and collect, thank you!

Come on, collected. Welcome to visit each other.

In the morning, I read several chapters from the opening part. The writing skills are profound and worth learning. However, there are still areas that need to be perfected. The tone is darker, the main melody is blurry, and the main line lacks ups and downs and layers. This reminds me of the movie "A Hundred Birds Pay Attendance to the Phoenix" and the recent TV series "The Age of Era". The craftsman's ingenuity and original intention remain true, and they are a strong mark of the times. I hope the more you write, the better.