Slytherin Archmage

"Please give me your suggestions" Student Party Holiday Update Will not enter the palace Because I really like hp

I feel that many fans who write about Harry will regard Dumbledore as conspiratorial and omniscient But if you think about it rationally, Voldemort's resurrection in the Triwizard Tournament must be beyond Dumbledore's expectations Because once Voldemort is resurrected, his other Horcruxes will not have resurrection reactions And from all aspects of the original work, it is shown that Dumbledore knows that Voldemort has Horcruxes, The Horcruxes appear one by one, and he destroys them one by one. Harry Potter, who had never learned black magic, suddenly showed signs of darkness. Dumbledore also knew that Harry Potter was the last Horcrux. After he executed Harry Potter's justice, the last Horcrux was gone, and Voldemort would naturally were wiped out? Will He take such a big risk and let Voldemort resurrect? The author helped to refine it, thank you 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

This is somewhat similar to Hermione's emotional scene in Slytherin's New Student. Has the author also read 🤭? But the heroine Hermione is great! I strongly don't want a harem! Ahhhhh! Come on author!

Licking the first picture! ! If you don't lick, you will die 😴😴

I think it's good. After all, newbies need encouragement. The writing is to my liking.

Why does every author choose Hermione as the heroine when going to the Harry Potter world? It really made me vomit.

Jason, fly high! !

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To be honest, the protagonist is so strong from the beginning, okay? And there is no explanation of why he is so strong. . Isn't it a bit Long Aotian? . .

Why does Dark Stream have a female protagonist?

I suggest that the author re-write the first three chapters after improving his writing style. This way of writing seems very tiring, and the sense of substitution is zero. It slips away.

Well, why did you buy a wand and get on the train directly? Can Diagon Alley get on the Hogwarts Express directly?

Why do I seem to be reading a translated foreign language novel? It smells like a translation.

Can you please keep Erhuayin out of here? Looks weird

Supporting roles indicate the camp and basic characteristics

As I write, I gradually let myself go. . .

Ah, I am a student party brother, I really don't have time to go back and look up the original work. In the future, please bring up the loopholes in the suggestion building, and I will try my best to correct them.... In fact, I don't have much content about Hogwarts.