Fake Gods in Primitive Tribes

Lao Tie 666, send me the address of crocodile fishing and organize a group fishing!

It's okay in the front, but I don't understand it in the back Why do we have to cling to the eggs of pterosaurs After all, this is not the only kind of creature And the number of pterosaurs is so large that it may overturn And the article emphasizes many times that it can't stand the death of the tribe Then it leads the tribe to commit suicide and I don't understand After suffering a loss once, it doesn't last long, and the memory is still thinking about picking out the eggs.

What to do (⊙o⊙)! After watching the fight with the saber-toothed tiger tribe, I felt a bit like I was about to be poisoned. . . . . . In the farming novel, why are enemies appearing one after another all of a sudden? Can't you slow down the pace and write about developing the tribe with more details? You used to write fantasy novels, are you used to it? The previous background is set to the earth tens of millions of years ago. You are the author and you are the biggest. As long as the setting is not random, I can completely accept it. Grabbing pterosaur eggs can also be understood as meaning that life safety is basically guaranteed, and the sense of superiority of being a time traveler explodes and begins to waste. But in the part about the saber-toothed tiger, it feels like you are giving up on yourself, right? Completely abandoned the farming story and changed it to the hegemony story╮（╯＿╰）╭It's so different from the previous one╮（╯＿╰）╭

I hope the author sees that your novel is not too poisonous. You hope that the boss will write it well twice a day. This book is still good enough. Some book friends have mentioned the poisonous points in the past to you. I want to say that the protagonist should not be too pretentious in the future. The world view is written as an alien world, and there is no need to eat eggs to death. Since the world is so dangerous, I hope the author can learn from it. My senior brother is too stable. The protagonist of this book is both dog and stable. Don't do anything you're not sure about, and you'll be able to get away with it even if you're not sure. The more you prepare, the more you develop, and you're prepared. It is as motionless as a mountain, and it is easy to break bones and raise ashes. There are also articles about weapons and so on. Don't just pop up. For example, where to write about bows and arrows, you can first write down the knowledge of bows and arrows. What are the bows and arrows, long bows and short bows, and what are their characteristics? Which ones are easier to make first? Which bows and arrows should be chosen due to the environment? Chinese bows and arrows are too troublesome. You can first make a simple English longbow from abroad. You can talk about those trees in another world. The earth does not have anything that is hard, tough, elastic, and suitable for making a bow. This knowledge of bows and arrows is enough for you to be able to read and write in Braille. You can develop it step by step to make the logic clear and reasonable. The sense of immersion is also strong, and the sentiment is much stronger than your sentimental soliloquy of poisonous white water. Book lovers can also learn some knowledge about bows and arrows. For example, if you don't write about the process of cement, you can write about discovering a large plant or tree and identifying that the glue is very sticky. Used to catch food. Used to replace cement. Similar substitutes not only enrich the dangerous alien world but also solve the problems that are inconsistent with logic. Otherwise, whatever comes to mind will pop up, and there will be no development process. It will be very interesting to watch.

I don't know who the author is, and there are many typos, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Just dug it out, it belongs to the eunuch. . . . . I feel so fucked up

In order to eat tomato scrambled eggs, I went to the pterosaur group to dig out eggs. Is it bloated?

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore. We can think of many things that the author didn't think of? Look at the protagonist, he looks like a 250-year-old

Is this really about God? Damn it! Forced plot pterosaur egg! What follows is another scene of fear of death.

The level is so bad that I can't watch it anymore. It's all poison, and totems appear in all of them. I have all the power of Qi and blood, but I still think that I am in normal ancient times and have no brains.

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Will I be able to see it finished in my lifetime? 😭 It's really beautiful.

Is it a fantasy novel? If it's a fantasy novel, I won't fall for it. I have no interest in fantasy novels. I still prefer farming and making a fortune in silence.

There are a lot of poisonous points. When testing the blood core, it was divided into ten parts. The animal couldn't bear it. If it was dead, it couldn't be considered too much. If ten parts didn't work, it couldn't be divided into a hundred parts. Where is the author's brain?

I feel that the sense of substitution is not strong. Most of the pig's feet do not regard themselves as members of the tribe. For example, when pig's feet can cook meat at the beginning, he said that he will not eat such food, so what does he eat every day? Is it okay to just eat that little fruit? Also, the writing is not detailed and too rough. I just read it and these are some of my feelings.

There is no atmosphere of primitive tribes, it is all about human beings fighting back and forth, and there is no atmosphere of desolation at all. The kind of inheritance passed down from generation to generation, the kind of proud and powerful force that walks with natural disasters and continues to be passed on, does not feel a breath, and all is selfishness of the protagonist.

The old author doesn't want to update anymore, so I would like to give you a happy word.

It's over! The author sucks! 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

I feel that in this battle with Huya, Huya is really unjust. After all, no matter how you look at the protagonist, they can't win. The protagonist also said that crossbows cannot hit totem warriors. Comparing the strength difference between totem warriors and ordinary warriors, remember the one on the wing? From this comparison, he really does not deserve to die. Forget it, anyway, the protagonist with the halo of the protagonist cannot die, and losing the abusive master will not have a bad impact. I know that the author wants to write about the strength of the enemy to set off the protagonist, and by the way reflect the cruel reality of that era. But I really feel that Huya was wronged and died in a plot killing, although the author of this plot killing gave him a fairly tragic death. . . In fact, it is more cost-effective for him to survive in this situation than for those few totem warriors to survive. . . If the author wants to create a better supporting character, like the brothers with tiger fangs and tiger claws, then please don't let them die so miserably. If he died because he was not strong enough and was plotted, it would be acceptable. There is no reasonable explanation for this plot killing, which is really uncomfortable. . . The protagonist's clan members can die, and the protagonist can also be unlucky, but important members of the protagonist's group really cannot die, otherwise the abuser will easily persuade some people to quit. Moreover, once unlucky things happen, it is easy to persuade them to quit. Why can't the protagonist take the initiative, or even invade actively? Don't use such a pale excuse just for food and drink. After all, the protagonist has changed, and there is no need to wash away the unlucky excuse. It is normal for so many protagonists' personalities to change. People's hearts are biased. So what if he actively invades and exterminates other tribes in order to better make the lives of the tribesmen who believe he loves him better? After all, what is your relationship with me? This is the rule of this world. There is not much right or wrong, it is just a matter of stance. What is wrong is the environment that is difficult to survive. But in this regard, the world just doesn't want to raise so many people to avoid resource depletion, right~ By the way, weirons are very good for fishing. In terms of construction, rammed earth buildings other than Sanhe soil can be used. In terms of food, noodles can be made with something like foxtail grass. Then, In other respects, if you find sulfuric acid lakes, excrement that produces nitric acid, etc., As well as the use of glass and resin that travelers must make in ancient times, and the strong electricity problem mentioned above, water power, wind power, and charcoal burning are inconvenient. Human power generation is quite cost-effective for those primitive people. It should be quite simple to find copper wires and magnets among the protagonist's things. If ferric oxide is found, it will be rich in resources. Since magic is not good, let's develop industry. Use science to challenge magic. Who is the most powerful? It's just a little reference for the author. The author doesn't need to pay attention to it. After all, this is a personal complaint. .

This book has been discontinued for three months, and it looks like it's TJ!

It's okay, but I feel like the protagonist is a little less human and doesn't have a strong sense of involvement.

In my eyes, the Chinese dragon is the most domineering (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)