Traveling Through the Wilderness, Offering Sacrifices and Burning Incense

It's a book that's obviously so good, but the author is so disgusting. A tribal development story, except for the protagonist, all are tool people, and apart from the protagonist, there is no subjective initiative or personal charm. The entire story is about the protagonist's personal heroism. And it was so awesome that the protagonist was maxed out in every stage, but in the end, the protagonist showed the same combat power as the clown. The most disgusting thing is that every time the protagonist levels up slightly and has just beaten a stage boss and has not yet developed, the next boss that can overwhelm the protagonist to fight will come immediately. Either he has already come to visit, or he already knows where the protagonist's hometown is. From the Xiaoyang Clan, to the Holy Envoy Clan, and then to the Shenghou Clan. Good guy, the Holy Roar Clan hasn't been solved yet, and the Two-Headed Golden Lion Clan has discovered the protagonist's hometown again. And then he was ready to fight against the protagonist, right? The author has already written almost 1 million words like this. What a novel that could have become a million-dollar book was suddenly ruined by hydrology, and now I will be able to read it.

I feel that the male protagonist was so majestic when he broke through, and he was a master of both body and law, but his combat power was seriously inconsistent. In the late fourth level, a pseudo-level five who took shortcuts would have to rely on formations and the fighting will of his tribe to win. I hope the author can write about how powerful the protagonist is in the future.

The author's writing skills are getting better and better, that's right. The updates are too slow and not enough to read.

I think the setting is good, but I feel a little dizzy. After reading the first chapter, I found that after fighting monsters, I found a powerful tribe. I felt that I had been provoking foreign enemies. After fighting foreign enemies, I found a more powerful foreign enemy. It was a bit tiring to watch.

Congratulations to Shan Ren's new book "My Own Clever Plan" for putting it on the shelves. The writing is getting better and better. I enjoyed reading it! Order all to follow up!

The early stage looked very good, I stayed up for two nights and read more than 300 chapters, and it poisoned me step by step The setting and background are actually very good, but the author is stubborn and refuses to listen, and still follows the writing method of more than ten years ago, constantly creating conflicts and enemies that are stronger than him. At each stage, while facing enemies that he can barely cope with now, he also constantly creates enemies that are beyond the protagonist's ability. Waiting behind, the protagonist and the tribe have been dancing on the edge of death, and Golden Finger is just that. The early dozens of chapters were well written, but many of the previous settings were eaten up later To be honest, this kind of writing was mainstream more than ten years ago, but now it is really depressing and unbearable And the theme was originally to travel to the primitive ancient wilderness tribe, and the protagonist became the temple priest. This position is equivalent to a mage priest, who controls and leads the tribe, and is the person behind it. There are always several stages for the protagonist and tribe humans to develop. Time, the protagonist only needs to occasionally attack behind the scenes once or twice at critical moments, and most of the time he does not go out and run away. He just stays in the tribe and leads the development of mankind, allowing others to develop and fight the enemies. The protagonist leads mankind from behind to accelerate development and constantly cultivate more and stronger people to conquer the world Instead of writing in such a hurry, constantly creating various super classes and enemies that exceed the current strength, the rest of mankind cannot keep up with the strength, and the only way is to let the protagonist become A warrior who rushes in the front. Every time the protagonist is asked to eliminate the strongest enemy, other humans come to occupy the territory and reap the harvest. The enemy has just been eliminated at one stage, and the others have not yet caught up with their strength and have to face new super-class enemies. The strength of the enemies should be based on the strength of others. The current enemy is beyond the strength of others, but they can barely cope with it. At the same time, there are enemies behind whose strength is beyond the protagonist. This situation is stressful, so work hard to develop. Rather than the current enemies being based on the protagonist's strength, which is far beyond the protagonist's strength, the other players are significantly different from the protagonist in strength, and the protagonist can barely cope with it with plug-ins. After barely wiping out the current enemies, the enemies behind them become new ones that are beyond the protagonist's strength, but they are barely able to pull it off, and at the same time, new enemies are established that are far beyond the protagonist's strength. Others can never keep up, nor do they have the time to develop to catch up.

I abandoned the book when I saw three or four hundred chapters. Various settings were used to read the book, and the routines were still the same from more than ten years ago. Originally, this kind of novel was supposed to be a stable farming novel, but in the end, it turned into an abusive main character novel like an ancient online novel. The protagonist faced enemies far beyond his own strength throughout the whole process. It took a lot of effort to develop a little and expand. To expand the world view, knowing clearly that one's own strength is insufficient, one still goes out to hang out and seek death, and knowing that the human race is the target of being captured. Instead of focusing on development and growing up as quickly as possible, one just wants to go out and hang out in front of various hostile high-level races and cause trouble for oneself. What big role does it have to go out and develop? That's okay. In fact, going out to develop is of no use to the protagonist. Faced with this situation, the human race and the protagonist should find a corner to hang out with. Only after the protagonist develops to the eighth or ninth level and becomes truly powerful can he develop the human race. Even the most basic cause and effect relationship is not fully understood. As for the development of the human race in the article, It's useless. It has no effect other than causing trouble for the protagonist. As the strongest combat power, the protagonist doesn't want to break through to the high-level strength of the wilderness first, but only thinks about developing the race. If you don't have a strong enough race, the more people will care about you. It's a good setting. The author also said not to use poison. I saw a bunch of poison spots at the back. You deserve your bad grades

After being advised to eat enough, I have long asked the author to write tribal novels, which is the author's strength. So it is said that if you don't hit the south wall, you won't look back.

I used to tolerate the typos in the pirated version, but now there are typos in the original version, and I just discovered that the pirated version actually fixed the typos in the original version, which is fucking outrageous

From the time when the human alliance was found to be building a large formation, to when the fifth-level Pu tribe on the border informed the other fifth-level members of the royal court, these chapters made me frown. When the protagonist is at the early stage of the fifth level, a fifth-level alien enemy with a sixth-level backer is arranged to come out, without any time to develop. The reason why he was discovered is also quite funny, because of the starlight. By the way, can't the formation be switched on and off at will? Can't you open it after the creation is complete? Is it because you are coveting the benefits of bathing in starlight to improve your understanding? Compared with the risk of being discovered by outside aliens about the current status of the Human Alliance, is this advantage more important? Or is it that if the formation is not activated in time, Xuanniao's injury will get better quickly? If this were the case, the protagonist wouldn't have to do anything and just wait to die. Not to mention the reason why it was discovered so quickly... Since the protagonist expects to be discovered, why not deal with the fifth-level Pu tribe in the border area in advance, first use the "Great Memory Technique", and then use the three-headed tribe's secret method of seizing the body. In this way, he can not only inquire about information, use the resources of the Pu tribe to develop himself, but his own news will not be leaked. Even if he wants to fight this Pu tribe, he can reduce the damage of the battle (the boss of the enemy is me, how can we fight this battle?). As a result, the protagonist's magic operation is: let it go, and when it is discovered, let the spies take back the fabricated news and forge the place where the formation is inherited. If the worst happens, use the formation to talk to Zhou Xuan with the sixth-order forces behind the Pu clan. This... Puts the fate of the entire human alliance in the hands of others. What kind of funny and stupid behavior and idea is this?        ，？       ，，？ If the protagonist is at the late fifth level or at the peak level, it is fine, and the process of the Holy Envoy clan should be copied. Although it is a matryoshka, as long as the writing is more exciting, the problem will not be big. It is better than the current situation where there is no development time and the wisdom is too blunt.

How can I put it this way? Before this bookworm disaster, things are going smoothly. We originally thought that we could use rune technology, rule the roost with formations, and then dominate one side. After the eighth level, it would become the ancestral land, which would give us a sense of refreshment. We have been holding back for a long time and finally can we rise? Oh, but not. When the insect plague comes, the world view expands, the level of power rises, and the protagonist's tribe becomes a small Karami again. Little Karami's outlook on life is to have both sides, and then continue to lurk as a grandson. Then continue to apply the previous development model. I was thinking about what I subscribed to. I created a book list earlier and talked about it a lot, but suddenly I ran out of ideas.

I just became the boss in an area, and I immediately became the grandson. It is impossible for the human race to develop according to your logic. If the top boss can see through the cause and effect, some people are strong and some are weak. The boss will directly destroy possible threats. Because no one will do anything for the sake of a dead person. They cling to this and that every day, making it like a gangster. There is someone above me.

After reading your last book, you subdivided the Golden Elixir Perfection into several layers. What was missing was a chip, a wisp, a thread, a little bit, and finally it was reached with great difficulty, but it was not counted until all the mana was full, so it was forgotten. In the end, was it necessary to reach the peak of body, soul, and soul? It's totally unreasonable for you to write matryoshka dolls like this.

This book is like this. Every once in a while, the protagonist's development has just caught up with the version, and the tribe has developed a little bit, and then the version will be refreshed and a new big daddy will appear. The protagonist suddenly returns to his original form and turns back into meat on the chopping board. What I like most is to suppress the protagonist. The protagonist will always become the weak one.

You can simulate and deduce for hundreds of thousands of years just by staring at the black bird statue, but then when you go through the tribulation, the plug-in will be useless? I can't even write when I'm having fun. I'm always trying to beat the competition. No wonder I can't subscribe.

Reading this book sometimes gives me a headache. Why don't you check it yourself? The data is always wrong. One moment the tribe had 3,000 people, and the next it became 2,000 people. One moment there was a shortage of 75, and another moment it became 72. To be honest, I have read your other books. Are you older and your memory is declining now?

It's poisonous. I originally had hope, but now it's too poisonous. Everyone understands.

It was okay at first, my eyes lit up, and the further back I went, the protagonist slowly became a person being chased, level 4 versus level 5, and then I wrote about the meeting place, and the caves and so on. This level 5 has just begun, and there are level 6 running next to me. At least two level 5 are looking for Xuanniao. On the other side, there are sacrifices or something to look for with plenty of energy and blood. Yes, you are not a double fat man. The protagonist's tribe will not be discovered later, and then level 5 will fight against level 6, and then the small ones will come and the old ones will come. During this period, the land will be conquered, and the tribe will develop greatly and its strength will skyrocket. There will be no chance to breathe? Tribal article? In fact, it is a personal invincible article? No wonder it is still level 5 after writing so many books.

Nanny article: It is very difficult for the protagonist to be promoted, but the promotion of subordinates is natural. Once the protagonist reaches that level, that level is cheap. There are always enemies higher than the protagonist's level, but the protagonist has not been killed. An ant race has great individual growth and is not conspicuous. You directly promote the entire race for fear that others will not know that you have a treasure. Others are just like blind. Do not try to strangle or rob.

The protagonist has the ability to deduce, so as a time traveler, the direction of deduction should be towards fantasy and immortality. Creating a system that is different from other original styles is very contrasting! Also, the recent emergence of three to four hundred Hakubu Shenzo clan leaders has simply overturned the previous settings. What kind of rise is the owl clan in front? Why threaten Yongyi? The most problematic thing is, if nothing happens, what kind of avatar will you create? This is the worst character to write, the most unlikable and easily poisonous character! Also write more about life, changes in the lives of tribal people, spiritual outlook, activities and festivals, and economic development! Don't just mention it in one stroke, people's lives have become better. The protagonist not only changed the tribal situation by force, but also has a life! This is so refreshing compared to other primitive tribes! In short, I personally feel that this one is not as good as your Eternal Patriarch!

It doesn't matter if the overall suppression creates enemies that cannot be resisted, there is no problem with overall suppression. The effect of the golden finger is too useless. It is probably not as effective as other people's random treasures. Seeing the locust crisis coming out later, I really can't stand it anymore. I would like to call it the real Ollie.

It looked good in the early days, and now it's not impossible to write 1 million words, but the problem is that the author has started to write a novel. A bunch of useless psychological descriptions and nonsense. And now we are writing about a big battle. How dare the author talk nonsense in the climax of the plot. Aren't you afraid that readers will run out? Just the chapter where the weapon spirit chats with the protagonist. Most of it was filled with water. It is said to explain the cause of Bohou's demise. In a few sentences, the author can write half a page. And this is a war of genocide, can you feel a little bit of a crisis? Anyway, the last few pictures are really bad.

The more I read this book, the more frustrating it becomes. There are people everywhere who want to eat people. Every time the protagonist breaks through, before he can pretend to be a slap in the face, a more powerful enemy appears. It happens that after the protagonist explodes, he can hold it for a while, then deal with it, and then breaks through to solve the crisis before the enemy reinforcements arrive. It is so frustrating. No wonder the results are getting worse and worse. The subject matter is very good, but it is a pity that the author narrowed the path!

1. Sacrifice Sacrifice is one of the oldest and most common cultural phenomena in human civilization. It originated from the ancestors' awe and prayer for nature, ancestors and unknown forces. At present, I think it is very good that the protagonist is not in the direction of deification. It is closer to people in terms of senses and more suitable for the public. I really like the solemn and strong atmosphere of sacrifices in literary works. This is the best way to show the overall strength of the tribe. I hope to see more types of sacrifices, more specific and solemn sacrifice scenes, such as (sacrifice dance and witch plus buff, etc.) Hahaha I hope the protagonist can tell the story of the sacrifice, witch and blessing lineage and discover an eye-catching plot 2. Master and apprentice The simple dialogue between the master and his disciples is brief but heart-warming. The master's role is now over, but I am also looking forward to the follow-up epic story between the protagonist and his disciples. As the tribe develops, people familiar to the protagonist will pass away one by one. Only the protagonist is immortal, and his disciples and descendants may provide some good plot experiences. 3. Worldview The worldview of this work has been initially revealed, and we can also see the author's ambition. In the plot of the human race, a corner of the world is revealed. In the future, the three-legged Golden Crow tribe and the giant Kuafu tribe will have more interesting stories about the interaction between the ethnic groups and the human race. The main line of the future story roughly revealed by the term "human race ancestral temple" may be a branch line. 4. Tribal Chronicles Although the tribal historians are mentioned in this book, I hope to add a statement at the end of the chapters about major inventions or historical nodes to briefly explain their historical role and significance, which may make it more immersive. 5. Future Outlook As a tribe, how can we not have wonders? End 6. Personal evaluation Brief comment: The writing of this book is concise, easy to understand and organized, suitable for the majority of book lovers who like farming literature. I saw the update before I knew it, and I was surprised that there are not many books that meet my taste. Meeting is fate, and if you do it, you will cherish it.

The battle pressure is so fierce, the plug-in is just like FW, it will turn off when it comes to business, and it can't even be used at level 8, which is incredible.

Are you still watching? Got it today. I have given up reading for a long time

As long as the protagonist is promoted, the promotion of the people below is as easy as drinking water. Especially the formations arranged by Juyue Mountain are unbearable. The human race lacks strength and is reluctant to develop. It also arranges formations to expose itself. It is afraid that others will not know the same thing. The entire human race is betting that it will not be attacked by a powerful race. 8,000 Years have passed, and it seems that if the formation is not arranged immediately, the black bird will come out. If you don't understand the situation of the black bird, you just gamble with the entire race. This kind of thinking has been exterminated long ago.

It was a pity to finish the book in a hurry. In my personal mind, the strongest tribe in all time is the pinnacle, and it is a worthy article to be placed at the starting point. It is a pity. Keep up the good work, author!

I read more than 500 chapters in one go. I'm a little tired and not feeling refreshed enough.

I have read 600 articles, and I feel that this one is too confusing. The book is okay, but there are many logic problems in many places, and I can't read it anymore.