The Rise of the Carp Clan

The author, I have a suggestion, don't write pure villains. The villain is not a heinous bad guy. He can compete with the protagonist normally. He does not need to use sinister or dirty methods. At most, he is a person with different ideas (ಡωಡ)

This article is quite good, but why did you turn the protagonist's brother into a sister? Such a coincidence? Or are all these great gods wrong? This routine is a bit poisonous. Could it be that all the protagonists can only have younger sisters?

Good luck to you all. Congratulations to the boss robot WALL-E who just gave this article a thumbs up for being crowned the 2019 Starting Point Twelve Kings

The more I read this book, the bigger the structure becomes, and I gradually become unable to predict the subsequent development of the story. The structure is so big that I'm afraid that the author won't be able to control it, and if it fails, the book will be in vain. If you feel a little strenuous, slow down and don't write about ancient secrets. This way readers won't feel too depressed when reading the book. The truth is like a goddess slowly taking off her mysterious cloak one by one to be interesting! If readers know the general outline of the story in advance, their expectations for the book will be lowered. Just like the king, I gave up the book after the two mysterious people appeared. From that time on, it showed us a mysterious and vast world. How to put it, it was like one just let nature take its course and the other abruptly jumped into another world and wrote another book. Ou Shen also wrote it well. Just refresh the copy and that's it. You have to do something to play with the planes! I'm lost when I go to other worlds to pretend to be 13. Why don't you write about the revival of spiritual energy and give me a fake astronomy?       :,,,,, "",!!! I gave up the book, so it is too important to be consistent. Let nature take its course and don't be fancy. I can't write a book, and I may not even be as good as someone who writes short stories, but I have read a lot of books, and I can tell at a glance which book is going to be popular. When the author's story takes a big turn, I can feel whether the book will continue to be popular or become a hit. Alas! I just kept talking nonsense and said that if you don't understand, don't criticize me. I have never written a book and my education level is not high, so I can't express the feeling in my heart. This is a summary of the books I have read for more than ten years. In eight words: follow the same origin, let nature take its course.

|･ω･`) Where can I eat it?

Hey, I finally found a more serious novel Those light novels are all shit You will die if you don't show off The fandom is insulting the original work Who knows how I found this novel I browsed the starting point book list for two hours Aren't you cool?

Thanks to LV5 boss Wall-E for the chapter recommendation!

Come on uncle, I will order again when I have money.

Congratulations on the launch! Two chapters have been ordered! Chapter 345 please! It is a routine operation to put on the shelves five times!!

People are good, gold and silver are precious, I admire the peach blossom fairy The fairy plants peach trees and picks flowers for wine money Sits in front of flowers when sober, lies down and sleeps among flowers when drunk I am willing to die for the sake of wine, and will not bow in front of carriages and horses