Rebirth of the Great Era of Fighting Waves

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less! The senses are so bad! Moreover, if a business owner wants to grow bigger, it is fundamental not to abandon public service for private reasons! A foreign exchange earning enterprise! All the channels for earning foreign exchange are controlled by a few women who are not familiar with them, and they even resort to intercepting payment for goods or even misappropriating public funds to speculate on currency! So blind!

Momojiji, if you want to write business, then business, if you want harem, then harem, just pick one, and it will be ok if you want to write an enjoyable article. As a result, the writing now is awkward, with a hammer in one place and a stick in the other, which is not smooth!

The feelings of family and country are in place, and the private life is quite affectionate and harmless.

I fast forwarded and read about sixty chapters. They were all talking about women. It was quite vulgar. I deleted it.

Lao Duan, let me give you some advice. Are you bloated? Nowadays, you are not serious about writing books. You have typos all over the text and sentences that don't make sense. You even get the chapters wrong! Don't you even proofread it? We love your books and keep reading. But you must also respect the readers! An old reader!

I love the book and have ordered it all. It would be better if there were fewer typos.

Lao Duan's books are still so readable, with unique humor hidden in the seemingly plain text. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. Some typos are probably intentional, please understand.

This is a small romance novel

1. The parents divorced at an early age, remarried and had children from the remarriage, and asked the protagonist to take care of the children they brought 2. As long as a woman is not clear about it, she can go to bed, and she will immediately develop the attribute of licking 3. Constant preaching. It sounds like a person in his 40s or 50s. Some issues need to be said once. They are said over and over again. I don't know if it's the reader's poor memory or the author's problem. 4. Attributes of the Holy Mother. I have feelings for this, I have affection for that, haha

The story of this book is quite good, and its biggest advantage is that the female characters are well-characterized. Among the novels with multiple female protagonists that I have read, although this book cannot be said to be the best, it can be considered top-notch - some books are more vividly written than this one, but there are not so many female characters. The shortcomings are also obvious. The author's knowledge level is not enough, and there are many flaws in this aspect: for example, when it comes to computers, I feel that the author is almost computer illiterate, and writing related content is naturally full of loopholes.

The novel is more exciting to read, and the taste will come out if you read it carefully.

I think that although the first few chapters are a bit cliche, the later chapters are well written, the emotional characters are well described, and the characters are well established. Why are there so many bad reviews?

Hello, I am an old reader of yours I would like to express my opinion. The male protagonist should not be too omnipotent, otherwise he will become a stereotype. A bunch of second-generation people regard the male protagonist as a great god and revolve around the male protagonist. Moreover, the male protagonists even sleep with each other and do everything. Come on, don't go back and give that Hong Kong liar and your own stepsister. The male protagonist can do anything and has become a god in the eyes of a lot of people. Teacher Bai has actually been with the male protagonist from the beginning. Since she has a child, there is no need to hide it. The male protagonist should also know, and Teacher Bai has paid a lot and received very little, less than anyone else. Also, who is plotting against the male protagonist this time? You must know that the Li family has also done hurtful things here, what else can the male protagonist do? Bring everything with you, it's impossible not to give some lessons, and you can't be picked on every time just because you have a child. Children are not a universal magic weapon. If it's good for you, use it, and if something goes wrong, hide away. If it doesn't work, just ask the child to block this or that. That's too much. Also, the male protagonist has almost slept with her, so there has to be some limit, it can't be a woman, just that.

I took a rough look at it for a few days, and it felt like it was just so-so. I forgot about it after having some fun.

I can't stand it anymore. Rebirth teaches you to open a factory? It's all about the details of factory operations, how to recruit workers, there are 50 chapters in total, right?

I always update my period, once a month, quite on time. 🤓🤓🤓

I have read more than 30 chapters, and the writing is pretty good, but the main character has basically done nothing serious except stock trading. She is all about writing about various women, and her mother confesses at the beginning of the chapter that she was emotionally injured in her previous life. Doesn't it look like her mother was emotionally injured? Like a horny male dog, his eyes are all on women, and all he writes is about women surrounding him. Reborn to pick up girls?

The flag at the beginning is so awesome, it doesn't involve romance or feelings, or buy a house and collect rent as salty fish. I thought it would be a twist, such as being hurt in a past life, being transformed by an infatuated person, and then a few close friends, but I didn't expect that I would end up entangled with various women, and I was speechless! What kind of entanglements are created by wealthy women! Gorgeous young teacher, infatuated female classmate, etc., What the hell are you talking about? . . It's also called Wave of the Great Era, I think it's fitting that it should be renamed Little White Dragon in the Wave of the Great Era!

This Yunshen was so annoying when he appeared on the scene, but now there are signs of being a heroine and she has slipped away!

If you want a harem, just sneak into the harem. Don't accept someone who wants to reject you. What are you pretending to do? Compared to scumbags, hypocrite eunuchs are more disgusting

There is one poisonous point that I have to complain about. The protagonist abandoned the protagonist for more than ten years and went out to work without even looking at her. Later they met and the relationship eased. This is normal. The blood relationship is there. But later, his mother got married and supported a university teacher, using the protagonist's money. She knelt down every day and even gave birth to a child for him when she was so old. Seeing this, I feel like the protagonist is being raped, which is uncomfortable.

The readers have evolved, the noobs have evolved into the old ones, but the author is still the same, still doing the same routine. . .

How to put it this way, I thought it was a serious business article at the beginning, but after reading dozens of chapters, several women came out, including two who went abroad, a teacher, and a white classmate. The most important thing is that it is too serious. Either you are a really serious person, or you are a scumbag who understands. Don't just copy what others have written because it is popular. Take a look at how many people have imitated his writing. To be honest, well-written urban novels all say that you need to know both astronomy and geography. Especially now that I have read a lot of them, the most annoying thing is that they are both arrogant and independent. It is not a problem, the key is that you have to write clearly, and you have to write well for the scumbag. As long as the heroine is well written, you can even criticize the protagonist🔥. But now there is only one book on the Internet. To be honest, without talking about other issues, most of them fail at one point. To put it poorly, they are both arrogant and independent, and they are bitches. Nowadays, I have read too much. I just want to find serious business articles, or entertainment articles, romance and romance, etc. To be honest, I am not interested now. I have so many complaints and I don't know what to say. If any book friends have good books, remember to recommend them!

Personally, I think what Lao Duan wrote is true.

Just a few pictures can make you sick. The author's protagonist makes people feel sick. The plot is really rubbish. The most disgusting thing is that the rich girl moved to your place Your protagonist hates such a rich girl very much. Afraid of causing trouble. Others even moved in on their own initiative. Can't you afford to offend or hide? ? ? If you let others move in together, isn't that just pouring shit and pissing on yourself? ? Can't explain clearly? ? ? If she doesn't leave, you can't leave? ? While saying that he didn't want to have any intersection. Don't want to mess with others. While agreeing with others to get together, at the same time saying that they don't want to have a relationship. Don't believe in love. At the same time, he messed with a few women here and there, some teachers, some dusty beauties. What kind of classmate loves you to death? A bunch of them are coming. This is really disgusting.

When a girl pursues you in college, don't wait until you get married and divorced to accept her. Can you get results by writing a book? A few people are willing to watch. It doesn't matter to me whether the women's ones are original or not. But writing this way is really to persuade me to quit. In the front, I write about my career, but later on, I go there one after another every day for a few days, and then wipe my butt with a lot of bullshit. Nothing can be better than this book with such good writing style.

After reading four chapters, I felt that the characters in it were boring and unlikable. In fact, I felt that the character named Yun was crazy. As for the male protagonist, I just felt that he was sick. He was a group of self-feelings. In fact, he was very bad.

After reading the beginning, the protagonist didn't want to have anything to do with women. I thought it was great and thought it was a good business war story. . Unexpectedly, I read dozens of chapters and had no idea what the author wanted to express. . The several women who appeared are more vicious than the last. It is really, really hard to read good business war stories now. . Most of them are romantic dramas disguised as business wars. .

A group of elementary school students, let me tell you this, in reality, all rich people have a harem.

The author is not young anymore. I just want to ask you if you are going to be reborn and just think about falling in love all day long? After reading chapter 30, I started thinking about women. Is this a romance novel? It talks about keeping a low profile, saying that it doesn't want to talk about relationships, and then writes all the emotional scenes.