Zodiac Signs

How can I put it this way? The first volume is indeed too bland. It makes you want to skip chapters. The creativity is not bad, but some descriptions are not in place. You must pay attention to exaggerating the atmosphere and don't skip some words. Otherwise, the reading will be confusing. As for the meeting chapter, I didn't understand who said these words. Don't dig too much foreshadowing, otherwise it will be very tiring to read. Personal opinion, please forgive me if there are any errors

Very well written, keep it up＾0＾~

Why do I feel a bit like a dragon?

Seeing that the author is so incompetent, I will write you an introduction, hum hum hum, please add more details Zi Shu Luo Zi, eleven people in the world. The ugly cow opens the sky, and the gods descend. Haizhu deceives the world and conceals all living beings. If there is a vacancy in the divine position, it will also be available for mortals. In this worst of times, how should we choose? It is to take refuge in the gods and survive for half a century. It is better to rush to the battlefield and seize this peaceful age. I only use the skeleton knife in my hand as light, to fight a bloody path in this eternal night. Feel the pain and swear by my blood that I will be resurrected here.                                         ——· ， Those who plunder the gods must pay the price.                                 ——  ，                                       ——Twelve Halls Finally, I would like to ask, can I give more rewards?

Does this novel have a single heroine, no stallion, and no ambiguity?

This is my first time writing a long review 2333. Please forgive me for the poor writing. First of all, I want to complain about a contradiction. As mentioned before, Bethune, the Rabbit King, and the Dragon King are the three most divine. Then the president of the Rat God has a divinity of s Bethuan's divinity must be higher than him Then we assume that Bethune is super s And the previous article said that super s's absorption of the divine source is 100% And at the beginning, Bethune Upgrade after eating two pieces As mentioned later, Bethune should upgrade after eating one piece Then there is a missing setting Here I compare the four wings and the two wings Is the divine energy of the four wings the same as the two wings? If it is the same, then why did the kings later grab the divine source of the gods If it is different, I hope the author can make up for this setting The specific level conversion ratio, four wings are equivalent to several two wings There is also my personal guess about the identity of Bai Bai The author actually said that Bai Bai is not ordinary Then Dad Bai must have an identity Let's assume that Dad Bai is a member of the Twelve Halls If Dad Bai was a member of the Twelve Halls before going crazy, then I don't think his identity is too high If he is a high-ranking person, there will be hints when Bai Qiuan enters the Twelve Halls and investigates his identity Dad Bai is gathering to kill you all, who are you referring to? Combined with the world view, it is either God or the Twelve Palaces If it is the Twelve Palaces, then Dad Bai is the attendant of God? I personally think this is unlikely Then the target of killing is a god I think Dad Bai may be someone from the government Because I don't trust the monitors sent by the Twelve Palaces After all, IQ is super high This way, when checking Bai Qiuan's identity, the reason why Dad Bai was not mentioned can be solved (begging the author to slap him in the face) The descendants of gods were brought down by the Rat God only after his own death So it is unlikely that Bai Bai is a god It is impossible to arrange twelve wings Ten wings are not b-square awa Finally, I begged the author to send sugar and essence Monthly vote, recommendation vote has been voted, why no one has read such a good book 23333

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When I first read this book, I thought it was quite similar to The Power of One Person, but I was wrong. From now on, the author's books are as realistic as ever. Although they are not as handsome as the previous one, this one is more realistic. Like The Power of One, I stopped reading it after Overlord came out. I felt that the author seemed to have started to follow the same routine in order to cater to new readers after he became popular. But this book feels purely tight. The kings' plans keep the protagonist in the palm of their hands, and the villains and gods' plans are also very rigorous, with each link following the other. This book is like a sadist, but it is not a sadist, but a reality.

Did the author really delete that comment? I have passed by this book two or three times, and every time I want to take a look, I am attracted by the third post. After reading it, I found that they are all criticizing the harem, or single heroine, no heroine, etc. It is too disturbing to people's mood. The mood of reading is gone instantly.

Why is this good book not read by anyone?

The setting of this book is very good, but the details of the description are too poor. The dialogue between the characters is also a hammer and a stick. I don't know what they are talking about. The author should be trying to say something mysterious and vague. For some reason, I became more and more irritated as I read. Sometimes I kept turning back and forth. It's a mess

The dialogue setting is very annoying. A bunch of dialogues are put together without any continuity in the middle. At a glance, sometimes you don't know who spoke first or who said which sentence.

"Dragon" sense of déjà vu. Is it my imagination? The four monarchs became twelve zodiac animals, and the protagonist was the dragon slayer.

I suggest changing this introduction to "The Tragic Shura Field Between the Immortal Me, My Friend and My Girlfriend"

I thought it was similar to the main character having Holy Lord abilities, but it turned out. . . It's a pity that this kind of disapproval has been abandoned. There is nothing to say. Bless the author. I wish you will become a god and have more than 10,000 subscriptions.

It doesn't matter if the author plans to finish it. Although I personally hope it will be longer, I still respect your plan. After all, it is not popular in the first place and it is not easy to persist. But I hope the author of the last volume can show his previous motivation and spirit. Not only for us readers, but also for the author himself. Since writing this book for a long time will sap your energy, then let's take out this energy now and write an ending that feels most satisfying and random to me. No one will read it anyway, and I guess I will accept the ending that I wrote as I pleased. This ending should be acceptable to us. For the author, it is also a way to experience the freedom and enthusiasm when writing books before, instead of being confused. Perhaps such a happy ending will put the author in a better position to prepare a new book. No more to say, I'm looking forward to the new book, come on

The results of this book are indeed dismal, but I like it very much. I have voted for the monthly recommendation. I don't ask for anything else. I just hope that the author can feel that the world is full of love, send more electricity, and don't be a eunuch. It can be seen that the author is also very attentive, come on!

Tens of thousands of updates have been released, the masterpiece is back, I will chase you to the end!

Why are there so few people with such good books?

Three comic coupons, if you don't add more, I won't be done with you, and if you don't write well, I won't be done with you!

I read it all day and night I like this style very much, even if it may be because of the rush to the street, the foreshadowing is not very good, Bai Ba's hole is not filled, and too many people died in the battle and sacrificed But, The sense of substitution is too strong, too real It is so real that when I see my comrades die, and when I see the thousands of people pointing at me, I always have the urge to draw the sword. Then there are tears that cannot be left, but the heart is bleeding Looking blankly at the rising sun Patting his trouser legs and moving on The process is a bit hasty, and the ending is a bit hasty, which is really a pity I hope to continue to work hard, and after the new book becomes popular, I will have time to come back and work slowly, and complete this masterpiece that uses love to generate electricity Sincerely

What, the setting is so good, and the writing is not bad, but then I was inexplicably persuaded to quit. I felt dizzy. I didn't even know what was going on and didn't want to read it. I feel that the author is bad because of this feeling of being unspeakable.

To be honest, the story has a lot of content, but it has no plot and is very delayed. You Phoenix only has one resurrection. What's the use? I don't understand.

I still remember my joy when I read "My Brother", but this one didn't attract me that much. However, who asked you to write this book? It's so well written, I support you. Come on, come on——

I would like to ask the author, what is the original identity of Pa Bai, and how strong is the heroine?

I finished reading it in one sitting, it was very enjoyable, but the ending was too rushed.

It's really, really good to read. You can see the feeling in the last book. It's almost like a dragon. It's really one of the few books that can give you insights into life. I don't understand why it's so popular.

I just want to know what happened to Dad Bai.

I just read the paid chapters and heard from my friends that the ending sucked. It seems that the book reading circle also said the same thing. I would like to ask if the ending is a sucky ending and is the synopsis complete? Have all the holes been filled?

It's been 22 years. It's a book I like very much. I'll come back to commemorate it.