Harry Potter and the Lucky Boy

I don't know whether this book is about Harry Potter or about the protagonist. There is no sense of immersion. It feels like the protagonist has no life of his own.

Author, I don't know if you read book reviews, but I still want to point out a big problem here, that is, the author paid too little attention to the settings of the original work, and also added random settings and understanding of the settings. The most obvious thing is that among the people who got off the Hogwarts Express, Neville In this paragraph, the setting that casting a spell in a crowd is disrespectful is acceptable. It was a second setting based on understanding the original work, but why did the author add such unclear words as "if magic is used for everything, then magic loses its original meaning"? It sounds like a forced paragraph. Looking at the original work, magic exists to make wizards' lives more convenient in daily life. Wizards rely more on magic, so this sentence is completely redundant and abrupt, leaving the reader with a lump in their throat. In addition, the boat that crosses the Black Lake can carry 4 people at a time, not 3. I won't list all these small problems here. I personally think that writing novels, especially fan fiction, must be rigorous in line with the original settings, whether it is the character, world view, or world. The world view derives from humanities, living habits, and every move of the characters must be consistent with the original work. The author must have his own understanding of each character, rather than knowing what is happening and not knowing why. Only in this way can the written things be vivid and have the power to move people's hearts, and the characters will not be stereotyped.

The protagonist is a bit schizophrenic! Hermione was stopped from looking for Harry on the train, so why not continue during the sorting! He even went to Gryffindor, his behavior was abnormal! If you want to date Hermione, shouldn't you go to Ravenclaw yourself and abduct Hermione too?

Come on, hero, be tough and don't get kicked in the face by Hermione all the time. You're only in the first year and your wife is in strict control. How are you going to live the rest of your life?

I would like to ask if anyone has a lion as their patron saint when using the move of summoning a guardian spirit. I really hope that there is someone from Glandolphin who has a lion patron saint.

The world of Harry Potter still feels like there are many bugs, such as why some people die when they die, some people become ghosts, and a potion can change your fate for a few hours.

It's okay to have contact with a threesome, but don't be a babysitter. . . .

I didn't notice you and you showed up. Isn't it nice that we give you votes for our update?

It's been a long time since I've updated ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ). Is it getting cold?

Another recommended ticket bought! ! He also recognized the protagonist as his father