Hogwarts Day up System

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

Come on, it's already collected, let's visit each other's houses.

Did the author delete the post? There are so few comments.

Come on, come on 👍👍👍

Dear students, if you have any comments about this book, you can leave a message here. I'll watch it every day. Thank you all for your favorites and recommendations. Refill~~

Hmm, I feel that the progress is slow in the previous part, and the protagonist cannot be awesome. . I will speed up the process as soon as possible and write out the rest of the story. Thank you all for your recommendation votes, collections, investments and rewards. Thank you so much.

Not bad actually. The unsatisfactory part is Dumbledore and the protagonist. There is absolutely no need for Dumbledore's coordination and a lot of cumbersome psychological descriptions. I advise you not to write too much about Dumbledore-related plots, because the writing is poor.

5 Votes are given, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Dear author, I think your writing is very good! The protagonist has a clear personality and the setting is very good. Grindelwald is also worth exploring. Besides, when writing a Harry Potter fanfic, you don't need to follow Harry Potter every step of the way. Many people have already written about this, and many people have become the Dark Lord III just by writing about it. They also claim that they have been misunderstood by everyone and are not the Dark Lord. As long as the protagonist has a central goal, "I want to become a white wizard", "I want to become a black wizard", "I want to work for world peace", "I hope no more innocent wizards and Muggles will be sacrificed", "I hope to be a capable person who can help others". A book with a central idea will not be written in a mess. These hopes may be a little mid-range, but having hope, a bottom line and a goal is a happy life. People who are walking dead and following the trend may be able to live without accidents, but I think deep down in their hearts no one wants to live like this.

Come on, come on, come on! The book is very good and I really like the setting of the main character so far! (Secretly sharing, I also feel that Hogwarts is very irresponsible as a school, with first-class facilities, uneven teachers, and a fourth- and fifth-rate system)