Journey to the Immortal Martial Plane

Bland is really bland, but stable may not necessarily be stable. The way he acts is more idealistic, with neither the characteristics of the times nor the personality of the character.

It's like playing a game according to the guide, it's so boring

It doesn't feel like anything at all, everything is too bland. If you want stability, you can write more details and improve the logic, but you don't have these, and it just feels a little better than a running account. If you don't change it, it will probably be ruined.

I've read a few pages of this novel and it's really boring.

You don't know anything about the plot. You've crossed a line and the protagonist looks like a fool.

Create a spiritual space and dry your hair. I didn't want to watch it immediately. Bye-Bye

The author is great. It really looks very bland and has no feeling. Sometimes the tasks are too abrupt and I accidentally get up to my waist.

From the beginning of Xiaoao, as soon as I could travel to the next world, I told others that I came from time-travel, hey! It's extremely poisonous!

I can't learn any special skills, I don't want any beauties, I practice all day long, but my martial arts skills are mediocre. I don't know what you wrote.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Yi Tian. The author has basically made Jiu Yin Jiu Yang Dou a mainland product, Wudang Emei, and Mingjiao. I'm really speechless when I look at it! ! !

The author must have graduated from a university of finance and economics! The novel is also full of anecdotes! Talent!

Appearing in Putian, Fujian, it will soon be Shaolin in Songshan, Henan

The writing is too bland and there are almost no fighting scenes.

I can't stand it anymore, it's really disappointing.

Traveling for the sake of traveling, plain and simple

It is recommended that the protagonist or his incarnation or projection travels back to the world of the TV series - Julian Cheung's version of Tathagata Palm (can be projected as Duan Fei). I think the Tathagata Palm and Tiancan magic power in the world of Cheung Chi-lin's version of Tathagata Palm, as well as the Seven Spin Slash, One Finger Zen and Shaolin Temple of the Changli Sect The Sutra of Changing Tendons and Marrow Cleansing is very powerful, and the special effects are pretty good, especially the shocking Tathagata Palm and Tiancan Magic Technique. The power of the Tathagata Palm and Tiancan Divine Technique in Zhang Zhilin's version of Tathagata Palm World is many times more powerful than the Tathagata Palm in the movie Kung Fu. Especially in the last episode of the TV series - Zhang Zhilin's version of Tathagata Palm, the Fire Cloud Evil God - Ancient Sword Soul was poisoned and was injured by Ou Jinghao's Tiancan magic skill in a sneak attack. He used the ninth form of Tathagata Palm - Ten Thousand Buddhas Chaozong to directly destroy two giant mountains in an instant. It was spectacular. There is also the Tiancan magic skill which is also very domineering, infinitely powerful and unpredictable. So I suggest that the protagonist or his incarnation or projection travels to the world of the TV series - Julian Cheung's version of Tathagata Palm to practice and comprehend or even integrate Tathagata Palm, Tiancan Magic Power, Seven Spins, One Finger Zen and Yijin Marrow Cleansing Sutra. The protagonist can also give Tu Xuehua, Tu Xuejuan, Sun Biyun, Sun Jinling, Liu Mingluan, and Liu Piaopiao to the harem.

You don't even have ** when writing a story. This is the most important part of the story. There is a basic framework for writing. Don't write based on your feelings.

Such a bland novel, it doesn't have that feeling

Cut off the roots of worries with one knife, and step into the imperial gate with two feet!

It is recommended that the author take a look at the insights about internal energy, chakra, and ninjutsu in "Multiple Worlds of Martial Arts". He explained it very well, and I agree with him that chakra is just a rubbish external force with low potential, far inferior to Chinese martial arts. If you are writing about Naruto, I suggest the author learn from "Multiple Worlds Martial Arts" and let the protagonist or his avatar or projection use the body of a native Hokage. Or even if you have a body of a native Hokage, you can reborn and transform your body like Retsu Kazama and give up the world of Naruto. The bodies of the natives of the world gave up chakra, a garbage power with no potential that was restrained by Otsutsuki Kaguya and Momoshiki's will, and instead practiced Qi and martial arts, and used Chinese martial arts to brutally beat and crush ninjas, tailed beasts, and the Otsutsuki clan. The author is recommended to watch the classic animation Space Knight. Many Japanese later animations and American science fiction films directly borrowed and plagiarized the image of this animation. It is recommended that the protagonist go to the world of the classic animation Space Knight to become a Space Knight and marry Aki, Miyuki, Millie, Fangli and bring them into the harem! The author is recommended to read "The God of Cooking Gourmet System" and "The Strongest System of Initial D, the God of Cooking System of the Chinese Little Boss", "Become a God of Cooking in Japan, Reborn in Japan as a God of Cooking", "The Mid-Autumn Festival in the Field of Shoji, and the Food Factory of Shoji". The author takes a look at the new information and opinions I sent you, such as "The Legend of Martial Arts in the Multiple Worlds, Naruto: The Strongest Hulk". It is recommended that you go to Jisu Comics website to read the Hong Kong comics Legend of the Emperor and the Emperor 6, Divine Palm, Divine Palm Dragon Jianfei, Warlords, War Records, Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon Part 1 and 2, Iron Generals 2012, Heroes of Spring and Autumn, Legend of the Emperor 8, Mowudu, Shaolin Temple No. 8 Bronze Man and Side Story, Four Famous Catchers, Peerless Two Prides , Wen Rui'an Heroes Part 1 and 2, Legend of the Frontier, Qin Qin Ji, Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, Rain and Clouds, Clouds and Rain, Legend of the Great Sword Master, Legend of the Condor Heroes, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, Journey of Knights, Eight Parts of the Heavenly Dragon, Jade Dynasty Version of The Deer and the Cauldron, Chronicles of the Gods Part 3, The Invincible Little Sword Fairy, The Invincible Sword Evil God. The author is recommended to read the new book Dragon Tiger Gate and its related comic series such as The Legend of Fire Cloud Evil God 1 and 2, The Legend of Wang Fenglei 1 and 2, The Legend of Shi Heilong, The Legend of Wang Xiaolong, The Road of the Emperor, The True Dragon of the East, and the movie version of Dragon Tiger Gate Comic version, The Killer, The Great Sage King, The Eight Immortals, The Prequel of Ip Man, The Dragon and Tiger Five, The Divine Wentian, The Divine Weapon of the Three Kingdoms, The Divine Weapon of Creation, The Thunderbolt Dragon, the new book Tathagata Palm, Drunken Master 2008, the new Drunken Master, Sea Tiger 1 and 2 and 3, Martial God Phoenix, Martial God Ultimate, Wesley Z, Super God Z, Evil God 1 and 2, Domain of the Gods, Fist Fighting, Yiyongmen, Six Paths Heavenly Book, Kung Fu, Legend of the Emperor 1, Legend of the Emperor 2, Legend of the Emperor 3, Legend of the Emperor 4, Legend of the Emperor 5 , The Legend of the Son of Heaven 7, The Divine Weapon F, The Divine Weapon F2, The Divine Weapon Xuanqi 1, 2, 3, The Divine Weapon 4, The Divine Weapon Xuanqi Gaiden, The Divine Weapon Xuanqi Prequel, The Legend of Shenzhou Qixia, The Legend of Heroes, Peerless Unparalleled, Fengyun 1, 2, 3, Fengyun Jue and other Hong Kong comics. It is recommended that you first read the Hong Kong comics The Emperor and the Legend of the Emperor 6, Wen Rui'an's Heroes Part 1 and 2, God's Palm, God's Palm Long Jianfei, Iron General 2012, Spring and Autumn War Heroes, the new series of comics related to Dragon and Tiger Gate, The Great Warlord, Peerless Twins, Legend of the Emperor 8, Jade Dynasty Edition Deer

When I saw the main god's space, I immediately gave up the book!

The update is too poor😭

The first twenty-five chapters are average, but you can't read them after that.

It was a little bit better in the front, but the more you charge, the more water there is.

Instead of writing about so many martial arts, I want to write about the Golden Servant

Now that I saw Swordsman, I just passed it.