The Era of Unlimited Copies

It was too self-indulgent. The protagonist turned into a fighting maniac for no apparent reason. He was kind to others for no apparent reason, but also had bad intentions for the protagonist for no apparent reason. The transition was too fast and far-fetched. It felt like the author was writing whatever came to mind in his own mind. The self-pleasure was too much, and I looked at all kinds of embarrassments. The book was well written, but there were too many areas for improvement. I'll leave, and I'll see you again when I get the chance.

Alas, the first copy looks pretty good. The world view of the second dungeon was overwritten, and now the plot is dragging on. It is estimated that one hundred chapters of a mission world cannot be completed, and a book only has several chapters. . . The latest update has been delayed for two or three days, and readers' interest has completely disappeared. I wish you well

This dungeon can be considered completed. It's really procrastinating.

It's so procrastinating, I have to write more than 100 copies for one copy

The second dungeon is too long, with more than a dozen copies, and it's still in Huyue Stream. This is just a small side mission. The crisis in Daxia has not been resolved. Calculating, I have to write more than 100 copies of this dungeon. I think it is better to end this plot as soon as possible, and then complete the world of Daxia as soon as possible in conjunction with the previous foreshadowing. Actually, the world you wrote at the beginning is quite interesting, but after all, it is just a copy, not the main world. It feels a bit top-heavy after all. Of course, this is just my suggestion. The most important thing is to follow your own ideas.

The writing is poor and the logic is insufficient. It has the feeling of being weird and mysterious for the sake of being weird, but it is on the lower side. The author of the first The World of Executioners and I have different views. I think the executioner is innocent because he is protected by the fate of the country. Including soldiers, police, and scientists who conduct destructive experiments.

In the Lingxiao Palace, Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords gently, and said with emotion: "When I gave you this natal magic weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time, and you didn't have much money to buy materials." He stared deeply at Xuande and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this point, and even have 90% of the power of the Xuanyuan Sword!" ... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it's just a tiny bit behind! " Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish. "Awesome! Awesome! " Qihuo clicked his tongue and praised, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword? " Xuande was silent. He knew all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. "The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that there was no change in his expression. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, the Hunyuan Flame, the Fengluo Flame, the Tianxing Flame and the Sith Flame. ... Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! ! ... Do you understand? Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have the last four. ... The only thing missing is the first one. "The Jade Emperor was stunned. How is it possible!? Those four divine flames... How could he have them!? Is it Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the crystal flames?" Xuande nodded and said yes, I came here just for the water experience. Also, come on, author!

The author is too ambitious, and wants to write the Infinite Stream, and wants to add demons to change the Three Kingdoms, and he also writes the List of Gods. . . You're going to break your writing now

I really like the subject matter, but I feel that the author's writing style is a bit poor. There are many places in the first copy that I couldn't get the point across. Personally, I feel that it ended too quickly, and many places that should be written in detail were not written to convey the feeling. For example, the little female ghost has a good beginning, but the ending is too sloppy. It almost only mentions why she has two souls in one body, why the village chief deliberately killed and controlled her... And other questions are not clearly written, leaving a lot of doubts. Also, the wine the village chief invites the protagonist to drink at the beginning is too obscure. If it weren't for the equipment that exploded later, I wouldn't be able to guess what the protagonist is drinking. And why the village chief feeds the protagonist this kind of wine, and the reason why he is a male, the whole story cannot be over and the readers have to guess. For example, when the protagonist discovers that the village chief is the mastermind behind the scenes, it is too sudden. It almost comes to mind as soon as he slaps his forehead. To put it simply, there is no foreshadowing and it is too abrupt!

Come and burn some incense🙂

Why does the protagonist have to practice Buddhism? Isn't it good to have other things like becoming a saint? The physical body becomes one, the Tao body becomes one, and spiritual power can also be used.

The protagonist wants to go solo and says he has a big secret. Where is the big secret? I haven't seen it for a long time.

How can I put it? The author's writing is too convoluted. How can I put it, it feels a little careless and careless, which makes people feel a little grinding.

In fact, it's okay, it doesn't give people a toxic feeling. The more I write, the better it gets. Come on! Dungeon-type novels are actually difficult to write. You need to control the main and branch plots more, and don't let the side quests overtake the main quests. The first dungeon is a bit short, and does not reflect the difficulty of the yellow-level dungeon you mentioned, and is a bit rushed. The second dungeon is well written in the early stage, but after the Three Evils, the later branch plots overwhelm the previous main plot. As for the mission, you can definitely enter the dungeon. The main line is to help repel the enemy country, and the three evils are the side lines. This will be better. As for the survival level dungeon, the protagonist can be a little more difficult. The third dungeon is not finished yet, so I won't give you any evaluation. Just work hard and change it. After all, that's what it is in the dungeon, isn't it? Don't add too many jokes, too much will make people very boring. Too many books will add too much messy things. It's okay to add them occasionally. Details are very important, and readers will like it more. It's my personal opinion, I'm wrong, please be considerate! 🌹

Hmm. Pretty good. There are a few places that seem a bit stiff, but after reading the comments, is this the author's first time writing a book? That's okay, just write slowly and you'll be fine. Come on. ＾0＾~

Unlimited copies, the author plans to write tens of thousands of chapters! The second copy is too self-proclaimed, and the readers are confused as they just write whatever comes to mind! Don't say you have an outline. The plot jumps occasionally and the explanation is unclear. The protagonist's mentality is also inexplicable. The supporting characters are even weirder. There is a beginning but no end. It is obvious that there is a foreshadowing and then there is no more. If you dig a hole without filling it, you are not afraid that the reader will crawl out from the other side and run away without looking back?

It's been 4 days since I stopped updating, am I a eunuch?

The author has a bit of a bad taste and likes to torture the protagonist and readers. If you can't stand this anger, I don't recommend reading it. I worked hard to complete the task, but there was no sense of reward. The plot is also a bit boring.