I Have a Portal in the End of the World

The plot has twists and turns and is so well written!

People who read this comment. I wish you happiness. Similarly, I am a funny book here. You can take a look or not.

It's only chapter sixteen now, you asked me to start reading from chapter fifteen 😅

Let's put it this way, for my crappy novel, it can be popular, and I can become a god with one book, I have to lose half of my lifespan. 🙂

Damn it, an investor signed a contract and made a lot of money.

Giao is very angry

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Start reading from Chapter 15... It's a bit baffling (suddenly the plot becomes like that), and it's not acceptable to use pure dialogue to promote the plot (it's more or less action and environment description) I don't know how to say it, the author should write more first. It's too dry to form a story with the current writing style. Unless your story is really, really good, the overall look and feel is really useless It is recommended to read the answer of Banana on Zhihu. When writing, emotion is the core. How to mobilize readers' emotions to resonate with your words is the most important thing. The ultimate purpose of all text is to express what you want to convey to the reader. It is clear which parts of the text must appear and which ones can be discarded, otherwise it will look like hydrography. There is also the character's IQ... I really don't know how to improve this aspect. Should I read more mystery novels? That is, people's hearts in this world are very complicated and not so simple. Moreover, when a person is in different environments, his psychology and behavior will reflect the characteristics of that environment. Hmm... I like the author of Power for Love very much (because I am too, my grades are much worse than yours, the niche genre + weekly updates are the fault), come on. Probably every old reader of Qidian has his own dream of writing a book.