Building a Pirate World

When I saw Aaron, I felt like it was a good book!

The writing is very good. Please give it a try. Will the book become popular?

It's well written. It's the first time I've seen such a pirate article. Come on, the author. Please give me 500 to support it. If it's published, I'll order it all.

How to say it? Because few people read it, I thought about it and decided to revise it all directly. Therefore, I have to start over, and the first chapter has been revised! Thank you for your support🙂!

Can you add some semen 😁 I want to experience what it feels like 🪖

I have lost interest since the chapter of rescuing Ace. All the characters have changed their personalities, and Ace must die. If not, a new wave of pirates will come out to do evil.

Looking forward to the author's next book establishing a republic in Dragon Ball. PS: What if we set the time point 300 years ago, when the Big Devil Piccolo was in rebellion, and then developed black technologies, such as the positron city-breaking cannon, GN particles, etc. In Gundam, or the development of super powers in Academy City, Devil Fruit, magic, soul, quantum technology, intelligent life, human gene development and cell evolution, space manufacturing and time jump, etc., Just like Dr. Chen in a certain novel developed it, what would happen 🤫. Of course there are still things I haven't thought of, I'll add them when I think of them 😁

The writing is very similar to Naruto, but I think the author did not distinguish the difference between Naruto and pirates. No matter how bad the person in Naruto is, he is for peace, so Obito is not easy to clean up. However, in the last book, Obito had no chance to become a black man, so the protagonist accepted it. One Piece is a scumbag. Death like Aaron 100 times is not too much. You still have to accept it, so forget it. You have written n chapters. Even if it is red, not everyone can be reformed. Where can the death penalty come from? Forget it, I won't read it anymore, I look forward to the author's next book.

The gap is too big. And according to the setting of One Piece, the navy cannot interfere with the affairs of the nobles of the participating countries. Not to mention a king.

I think there is a sentence from Joshua in Star Travels that is very appropriate. The crown will make the wearer superior to others, but its real meaning is that when disaster falls from the sky, I will stand in front of you and always let you see only golden hope.

I'm about to give up on the book. I originally watched the main character push through everything, but now I can't see what's so exciting about the book. It's boring and uninteresting.

Have you ever considered the issue of heavenly gold¿ When you take over the Kingdom of Goa, you must offer gold from heaven. If you offer it, it will be a huge burden. If you don't offer it, you will be kicked out of the country. Has the author ever thought about this issue?

As a new reader of this book, I think it is necessary to say a few words. First of all, I have only seen the first few dozen chapters. Some of the contents are not fully summarized. Please don't criticize me First of all, let's talk about the fishmen. In fact, I am quite I like the content of reforming evil, but because the author wants to focus on describing fish-men, he neglected Nami, the protagonist of this incident. I can't say neglected, but he was the protagonist of other books, and one thing he would not do is not help Nami get justice. Why? Because the protagonist needs the ability of a fishman, this book has some political elements in it. I am not saying that it alludes to the country, but it has political practices in it. I can only say that those who only want to watch blood or farming are advised to enter with caution Let's talk about Colonel Mouse, in fact I really hate this kind of person who is in an official position but preys on the common people. When other authors wrote about him, they would write him off or put him in jail, but the author did not, because this person has value and seems to want to be promoted. It can only be said that interests with political factors come first. As for the method, I don't know if the author has written him to death, I haven't seen it yet In fact, I think Nami should call the fishman and admit her mistake in front of her, or give Nami a gun and let her make her own choice, but this seems a bit old-fashioned, and This is just a personal opinion. Let's see how the author writes it To sum up, this book is the kind of book where interests come first, which is the protagonist's approach. There may be more or less political ideas in it. This book is not suitable for people who only want to read passionate books.

Before reading this book, you must first read the author's previous Naruto fanfic, otherwise the enjoyment will be reduced a lot.

This book is really well written. As for the next book, I don't think the subject matter is important. The most important thing is to carry forward Redism. I just chased the protagonist's red glory. I don't know why this book has such a bad score. It obviously doesn't have any bad points, and it was quite enjoyable to read, not boring at all.

I had just finished reading Uzumaki no Kuni and was planning to read this book, but then I saw that the author said pirates were rationalized? How can you promote red when pirates are already reasonable?

I don't know what the hell I'm writing about. The world of Datong doesn't need pirates, but you save this one and that one. Some pirates look innocent, but for the sake of the civilians of the entire world, a little sacrifice is worth it. Besides, the Whitebeard Pirates have never killed civilians?

Do you, book friends, have any books like this that promote the color red and liberate productivity? Asking for introduction

I like it. When the author finished the book, he said that he might open another fanfic, and suggested that he open Conan. I think the author's writing style is suitable for daily writing. I personally feel that the author can also use a similar writing method to this book to write a historical farming article, such as the Three Kingdoms. Personal suggestion, haha😁

It looks a bit messy. . . .

Not friendly to people who don't watch Naruto, it makes them confused.

I feel it's a little worse than Naruto. The Naruto book is more detailed, but this one is more vague.

Niubike wax silk 🙏

Emmm is it over? So fast! Only a few months ago there were only over forty chapters! This hand speed...

This one is not as good as the Naruto book.

Finished spreading flowers and re-entering after Naruto

Invincible from the start. Not a punch

Everything else about this book is good, except that the mouse colonel and the murlocs are too unfriendly. The author emphasizes that the murlocs have been treated unfairly to show that there is a reason for the evil dragon to become evil. However, no matter how justified he is in harming them, it is not the people of more than 20 villages in the East China Sea. So I think this is not the reason for the protagonist to forgive the evil dragon for its eight-year reign of terror on more than 20 villages in the East China Sea. In the past eight years, the evil dragon has destroyed so many families and committed so many crimes, but the protagonist actually just let the evil dragon and his gang serve for a few months and then promoted him to the leader of a legion. I think it is really ironic. Just by promoting the evil-doing pirates into a regular army, I feel that at least in the more than 20 villages that were once terrorized by the evil dragon, the protagonist will never gain any reputation. There is also Colonel Mouse, who is even more disgusting than Aaron. In the protagonist's book, Aaron at least repented and became the commander of the army and apologized to the people they had hurt (although I think he did not die to apologize and had no sincerity in apologizing). Maybe my sense of substitution is too strong. As an ordinary person with normal outlook on life, when I saw that paragraph, I was not a dragon or a mouse colonel, but a civilian. So it was a bit unbearable. The last time I gave up the book was because of this. This time I picked it up and read it again. In the end I found that I still couldn't stand it. Let's read the other half of the novel written by the author. It seems to be about reform. The reformer is Naruto. I don't want anything else. I just want that book to not let Danzo go.