I'm Very Low-Key

I judge that this book can become a small seedling with potential. The story is light and interesting and relaxing to read. Humor can make people laugh. From this, I look forward to the author's subsequent efforts to make the protagonist's experience more exciting. I have read very little systematic literature and am not capable of making more comments. I just express my feelings. However, there are two points that need to be mentioned: 1. Punctuation must be correct. I think there can be bugs in words and phrases, but punctuation must be used accurately, otherwise it will affect the reading experience. For example, commas are not allowed at the end of paragraphs, and the punctuation of conversational sentences must also be standardized. 2. The protagonist should not spit out fragrance. I personally think this is a poisonous point. He is okay with killing people and cheating, and he is okay with swearing and quarreling, but it is not good with swearing. (Of course this is all personal opinion.)

Great imagination and interesting story. Come on.

I'm thinking about 🤔how to pour water in the next chapter

I hope this book can make everyone relaxed and happy, and I hope that people who read this book can give you some valuable suggestions. Thank you!

Minor issues with typos and symbols. The writing is a bit new and there are many water spots, which is good for a newbie. It's just that the character of the protagonist is not very likable. It's okay to be a silly character, but he won't be popular if he turns into a loser. The dialogue and writing could be a little more mature. Already collected, I will come again when I have time, come on.

Well written, but a little lacking! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

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I'll vote for you, come on~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~