Walkers in the World of Heavens

Ip Man's part was really full of expectations, but full of disappointment. I thought he was a king, but I didn't expect him to be a loser.

Planning to go longer? One year? Two years? Three years? Why does a book have to be so long?

Make room for you and speak freely!

Don't just talk about the world, but also talk about the world missions? Many times there will be situations where I know the world but can't remember it when writing. The forgotten world. They may all be better, so which world you think is better, please leave a message! ps: Please feel free to leave a message, this is the author's trumpet

Ten years of preparation in the world of Ip Man. In the end, when the Japanese came, they didn't even dare to fight. The sense of anticipation has been reduced to zero!

So what, does the author have any misunderstanding about Si Mi? Nowadays, the height of a building is only three meters. The protagonist jumps on a four-meter-high stage in front of everyone, which is higher than the height of a building. Isn't it a bit too smart for such an awesome person to dare to provoke like this? This is not how you pretend to be cool, and now I don't dare to write Shuangwen like this! I say with my own conscience, if you see a strong man with big shoulders and a round waist who can jump four meters high, let alone learn Sanda, unless you go to practice immortality, it is almost the same. I really hope that the author can handle the details better, so that the work will be more beautiful.

About the parents asking the protagonist to call his ex-girlfriend to beg him back, otherwise they would not let the protagonist go home, which made me sick.

It starts with emotion and ends with etiquette. The author himself likes the image of Zhang Yongcheng in "Ip Man 1", but the protagonist in this book will not have a relationship with her. This sentence comes from the end of Chapter 30. Is the author a slap in the face?

Chapter 137: The protagonist's parents don't side with the protagonist and they actually get angry🔥? If your own son doesn't believe it, who will you believe? It's really weird,

In Ip Man's article, you have people digging tunnels all over Foshan, so why can't you go to the Japanese base to plant bombs? You have to fight on your own, and then drag tens of thousands of Foshan people who came to support you to die together with the Japanese army. It's poisonous. You have been laying the groundwork for so long, and you have pulled out a large number of soldiers. Team, as a modern person who knows the historical form, he could obviously cause greater losses to the Japanese army, but he took the initiative to seek death in the early days of the Anti-Japanese War. Was the author in a hurry to write the next article? It is so messed up that I don't want to continue reading at all ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ

Let me talk about my own feelings. The first world of Medicine God is over in just six or seven chapters. The plot is over before everyone's emotions are lifted. If the author of Medicine God has nothing to write about, he can delete it without affecting it. After all, he is following the flow of all heavens and worlds. Each world must have its own purpose. In the first world, he only learned quickly. I think it will not affect the first world or not. In the second Ip Man world, Pig's Feet mainly focuses on martial arts, aiding the Communist Party, and feelings about family and country. In fact, I think this could be expanded and written a little more, which is good, but the author understates it and passes it by, floating on the surface, and the emotions cannot sink in. To put it bluntly, there is no sense of substitution, and the sister-in-law also insinuates, which is unnecessary. The third one entered the prehistoric world, and I was confused by this one. I began to think that I wanted to lead the primitive tribe to rise, but I didn't know that it was just a matter of survival in the wild. I don't know what the author's purpose was in arranging such a world, just for three eggs? Or some other factor? There are also things you can bring with you for survival in the wild. Why not bring a magnesium rod, a magnifying glass, and a lighter to make fire? Still using wood to make fire? The sense of immersion in survival in the wild is so important. The main character even ran to a prehistoric wild stream to drink raw water. It was really the aura of the protagonist! I wasn't afraid of prehistoric parasites and viruses at all. I just found some fruit iron salt and ended it without explaining how to survive. The Fourth Galactic World: To be honest, the mystery operation. Reading between the lines, the two women, Wang and Zhang, both liked the protagonist. Later on, Wang and Ma unexpectedly got married without any warning! Too blunt! At least give it a little too much, right? It's so naive to use pig's feet to blackmail the underworld. Do you really think that the underworld doesn't dare to kill people? There were a lot of guns among the people in that era, and if you were provoked, they would definitely use them to kill you. In those days, for a few hundred dollars, some people took desperate risks. Forget it once or twice. If you engage in extortion many times, the underworld boss doesn't want to lose face? The biggest impression I have of this world is that of blackmail, using classmates to carry out bricks, blackmailing the underworld, and then ending it in a huge time span. To be honest, it has nothing to do with the plot of the main drama of Galaxy Cram School. A talent that seems to be of little use at the end. That's what I saw here. The overall writing style is too flamboyant, and the reader's emotions cannot be taken in. It just gives people a feeling of following water. As far as I can see from these four worlds, I feel that there is no need to go to some of them.

Ip Man World uses learning and development training to buy weapons. More than 7,000 people spent 25 years preparing. What on earth are you doing? The Japanese will not resist when they come. They need people and guns. What on earth do you want to write? The fight with the Japanese ended with Cao Cao. You might as well not have written it in the first place, there are some things in the plot of the movie that make people uncomfortable. What is written here makes me feel even more uncomfortable. Even if you write more mindlessly, it is still a cool article, but it has no beginning and no end and is not useful.

I feel that the author has little social experience and has no plans at all for the protagonist. I haven't done much research on the information, so I just write based on my imagination -_-||

One more thing, when writing about the heavens, don't write about women in particular.

Where is Ip Man's wife? What do you want to express? In Ip Man's wedding, the protagonist made trouble in the bridal chamber and slept with his wife? Are you so horny that you even slept with Ip Man's wife? If you didn't sleep, where the hell are you trying to express by flirting with others? Really convinced

Damn -_-||My parents' success disgusted me 😰

It's a good show, a world of mental patients has been turned into a world of advanced immortals and demons. I admire it~ but I don't understand what you want to express? Don't you think the sense of violation is very strong? Is it necessary for the protagonist to contact the supernatural in this world? So embarrassing...

Pig's Knuckle has no sense of existence at all. This book is an observation article (or a Green Slave novel). All the fun, love, love, etc. Are taken care of by the supporting characters. Pig's Knuckle just watches the development and changes of the plot with pure appreciation... I can't go on and I'm so sick that I want to vomit.

If you haven't read it, I suggest you read Chapter 137. If you can accept it after reading it, then continue reading. Anyway, I was really disgusted. If you don't know how to deal with it, don't write it. Who would be disgusted if I wrote it?

I would like to make a suggestion. I hope the author will consider the readers who have never seen the movie. For example, the first world. If you have never seen the movie, you can say that it is confused and completely anecdotal. It does not move anyone at all. It can be said that it only moved the author himself. 😅 For example, there is no introduction at all to several characters in The God of Medicine. Who is Huang Mao and why should he be saved? Who is Zhang Changlin? Why are you so surprised when he joins (the latter part can be seen a little bit), what happened to the leukemia, and so on. It is completely the protagonist who changes the plot rudely, but these changes are completely indifferent to the readers, because it doesn't matter if Huang Mao dies, and what is the concept of selling your medicine for 800, 600? In summary, it is completely written for fans. If you continue to write like this, then every world will filter out a group of readers who have never seen the movie. . That way the reception area is really very narrow, so it would be impossible🔥.

Pre-selected world one: "A Good Show" Huang Bo's performance is very good. It tells the story of an isolated island. It is a wonderful world to go to. Pre-selected world two: "Snow Leopard" This world will make you cry. Choose one and reply 1, choose two and reply 2, I will determine the next world through the reply As of the 99th floor, the ratio of the two worlds is: [A good show] 38:45 [Snow Leopard]

It feels good, but it's a pity that the investment is used up

Ip Man is green! If you like tauren, you can watch it!

It looks pretty good. Please give me some support. I'll think about what worlds to send to you and see if you can add them.

Running account, nothing new.

Is the protagonist in Ip Man actually gay? It looks so disgusting

It feels pretty good so far.

When I saw Ip Man's place, I couldn't tell whether it was good or bad, so I felt strange. The author is not suitable to be an author, and feels a bit condescending to write online articles. The beginning is inexplicable. Not every protagonist is a cuckold at the beginning 🤤. We really don't have that sense of involvement.

AI wrote it well, and the plot is very messy.

At the beginning of the first world, I felt that it was written very familiarly. Until the second world, I was finally sure that it was copied from the book All Heavens and Worlds, which has a good score. Many plots in it are exactly the same. No wonder the more I read, the more familiar it becomes. Slipped away