My Fighter Is a Pocket-Dimension Treasure

It features high-tech fighter jets and fantastical martial arts techniques. Then, out of nowhere, a pair of sisters appear, immediately deterring viewers. What a waste of a wild idea...

The concept is okay, but it's a bit wordy.

The novel is filled with a bunch of useless psychological descriptions. Is it appropriate to start with such a weak opening? The twins are really unlikable, and the forced logic and the "pretending to be weak to deceive others" trope are just ridiculous. It's rare to find a Star Wars novel that's genuinely bad.

The book has a good concept, but its biggest flaw is the sadistic and eccentric twins. Orphans can be kind or selfish, but where did this sadistic and eccentric character come from? They mistake ignorance for cuteness from beginning to end! Goodbye.

It was completely baffling. The specific function of the "golden finger" wasn't explained in detail at all. They talked a lot at the beginning, but later we learned that the user received a legacy and an evolving fighter jet. But what is your original cheat ability?

Since you're upgrading by consuming materials, I think your initial approach is flawed. Since it's all about consuming materials and then molecular recombination anyway, why not just buy discarded parts? Why insist on new, usable parts when you're so poor? Saving up money to buy parts feels like building a fighter jet—too low-class, lacking any of the sophistication of a cheat system!

Dude, put yourself in their shoes. How would you feel if two random women spent all your money? And they acted like crazy! Do you know you're a time traveler? You trying to write something heartwarming? This is clearly just abuse!

Kill off all the female characters in a few chapters, turning them into Jarvis-like assistants, and that would be perfect...

The childhood sweetheart relationship wasn't well-developed. If the author isn't good at writing romance, they should probably skip it; novels without a female lead are still quite popular. The author could delete or shorten the earlier romance scenes, otherwise it's very off-putting. That's my impression after reading the first 10 chapters.

This novel uses a fact to tell us that a good subject matter does not necessarily lead to a good novel. The fusion of fighter jets and cave dwellings, the encounter between the witch clan's techniques and interstellar space. However, they collided with two stumbling blocks: a creature known as a "lickspittle," and the mighty Water Emperor who shook the heavens. That's fantastic! 🙄