There's Some Weird Stuff Mixed into My Book

I purposely finished reading your serial in the daytime, with thirteen chapters and 32,000 words. The following is a book review. ①The character setting is great. Chen Shu, Chen Liang, Ragdoll, and Xie Jianghe have distinct personalities. I can see that you have been brewing for a long time. ②The plot is attractive and does not feel boring. The author must have read a lot of this type of writing. The development of things is always unexpected. I thought the taxi driver really had a problem. Xie Jianghe's transformation was also surprising. These are all necessary for this kind of writing. You did it. ③The ability to create an atmosphere is good, "Young man, we will arrive at the station soon, don't worry." If I read it at night, I would be scared to death (I am timid) ④The comments from *** readers in the article are very interesting and can be maintained. ⑤ One point I don't agree with: Chen Liang has never been exposed to ghosts and spirits before, but he accepted them very quickly. Although it is arranged this way for the sake of the plot, from the reader's point of view, he still feels that there are small flaws that do not affect the overall situation. ⑥Your first chapter made me a little worried. I would like to ask, have you ever cast it internally? Are you sure this won't offend your editor? ⑦ If you can reach this level in writing for the first time, it would be great. However, your writing skills still need to be refined. The clues are beginning to show, but there is no magic pen yet.

I'd better change the first three pictures in detail. The writing style is mature and I look forward to the following articles!

Why is the author missing Chapter 68?