Mountain and Wild Clouds

😅 Seeing that almost 200 chapters later, the heroine was unexpectedly revealed, she was still a maid, licking her in all kinds of ways, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I asked her to quit. It was originally a healing type of farming in another world, but it turned out to be an immortal cultivation inexplicably, and the layout was expanded to such a large scale that it felt like it was completely broken. Moreover, the creation of the male protagonist's character seems to be a mess. Although the whole text is quite good, the addition of other fantasy elements has no flavor at all. The male protagonist's character seems to be very consistent with the current shield-yong's stubborn appearance, but there are all kinds of contradictions.

I finished reading it in one go and I was a little disappointed. I originally thought it was about survival in the wilderness, but why did it turn into a fairy tale? How uncomfortable! It's not my cup of tea, so I can only bear the pain and say goodbye.

I first discovered this book after reading similar works recommended by Qidian. Com. The type is similar and the content is similar. Although it is not considered plagiarism, there are definitely some references, such as monsters in the big lake, clay pots, bamboo forests, salt mines, bamboo rafts, going down the river to get out of the mountain but being blocked, bamboo houses, etc. The general direction in the early stage is basically the same. I have only read this book so far, so I am looking forward to the following content but also a little scared. I hope it will not be written like Nanshan Yin, which will directly become fantasy. What everyone wants when reading this kind of book is a sense of relaxation, not like the mindless fun of a novice novel, not the kind of brain-burning novel with an urgent plot. What you want is to clear your mind and read a book without stress after a busy work life. I'm looking forward to the author's next content.

It was going well in the early stage. WR suddenly changed from the maid and started to release poison. It is not an ordinary poison... Hey, the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. It is recommended to continue reading from the 200th chapter. Wear protective clothing first... And prepare antidote pills.

Sit down. Your novels are updated too slowly. You update them once a day. You are too lazy. Other novels are updated twice a day and three times a day, but you update them once a day.

I have read dozens of chapters and I really like this kind of book. It's just that the protagonist's name really has no sense of existence, and you will ignore it whenever you see it 23333

I really like the fantasy fairy tales about farming. It's boring to keep leveling up to fight monsters. It's better to fight monsters properly.

I like the current style, it's great!

When will the water last?

Since the little meat ball is born with a disability, it is better to return to the embrace of Mother Earth as soon as possible. Living by the male protagonist's ability will be a burden to the hero and it. Anyway, it seems like this at the moment. The setting should be changed later. For example, this is actually the ability of the little meat ball, but it has mutated and has not been able to adapt 😎😎

What about freedom and equality? It's really annoying to see these slogans. Even if freedom and equality are achieved in today's society?

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Why didn't anyone scold you after you wrote Chapter 209? If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them, otherwise there won't be any. If you really can't wait quietly for Xiaobai's transformation, wouldn't it be better than that Lan Yixiang? Emotions are equal, what did you write? The good soup that has been boiling for 200 chapters+ was ruined by your clever plot, 👴 I threw up. I don't know who asked the author to write a romantic drama or find a woman for the protagonist. They really want the author to die.

One, Our Lady. Second, raising children to be addicted means being nosy. Three, done. The son also needs to erect a chastity arch. Fourth, the inner drama thief suddenly disappears and the sense of atmosphere created is completely lost, that is, there is a drama. 5. There is too much nonsense and it is disgusting. I suggest you read the two books next door: I Just Want to Cultivate Immortality with Peace of Mind and Cultivation of Immortality Starts by Drilling Wood to Make Fire. People are ruthless and don't talk much.

The first part of this book is quite good, but later on it becomes more and more crooked after a woman falls from the sky, and later on it becomes even more confusing with everything popping up. It doesn't have the flavor of mountains and wild clouds at all. If this were an essay, I'd give you a zero. Very disappointed.

The biggest failure of this book is probably Enron who fell from the sky! After this woman comes out, not many people should be able to survive Chapter 30! Arrogant and ungrateful, he even went to show off in front of Xiaobai! What is her identity? Doesn't she have any comparisons? It's just a servant being born! No matter how exciting the sequel is, I really can't accept such a character hanging around in front of the male protagonist every day! ! ! !

I am one of the Erqings who was criticized by the author. I would like to ask the author, since the protagonist is a human, why did he make it a demon? Just to be a reckless hero? Since you are a human being, why not become a human being? Why does White Snake, a local snake, follow the protagonist in his affairs? Merit? Only if you contribute to the human race can you have merit? Is the way of heaven the way of heaven for the human race? Do you write about monsters or do monster things? Doing human affairs? I came here just to write about you as a demon. Then why don't I just read about people and their behavior?

More than 200 chapters: Marrying a maid, extremely poisonous 🥵

Raised it for a long time. . . Then again. . . I haven't finished reading it, and I'm really sad. There are two painting styles in this book. The first one is about primitive farming, with a hint of fantasy. I love reading it. A fairy appears halfway through, and the painting style becomes pure fantasy and cultivating immortals. Readers like you who have been cultivated in the past must be driven away a lot. . . . Oh, my balls hurt

The author's synopsis is crooked, and later it turns into a cultivator from another world. He said he couldn't stand it anymore. Let's read the book review.

Xiaobai's previous setting is that the protagonist is raised as his daughter! Why do you want to do something to your daughter when you see her beautiful face? I lay down in a trough, and my outlook on life suddenly collapsed. I feel that the best way is to come back An Ran and marry Xiaobai. I can't stand the father-daughter story.

The first half of the novel is well written, but the subsequent development of technologies such as Shenma electric cars, elevators, high-rise buildings, etc. Becomes less and less interesting! I still like the kind of articles about cultivating immortals and farming leisurely, so just don't read this book! 😡

Farming turns into fantasy, fantasy turns into cultivating immortals, cultivating immortality turns into romance, it disgusts me to death. That maid married the male protagonist even though she knew she would die. She married a maid just so that the male protagonist could raise her master's daughter. It's so low.

It's not that there can't be a female protagonist, but it just feels a bit sudden. The protagonist's thoughts are also very sudden. It feels like she always wants to get married. It's not that necessary. 😰

I was listening to the book, so I read the comment section because I was poisoned, and found that I was not the only one who was poisoned. This novel started going downhill from the moment An Ran landed. The first thing was the licking behavior. I just looked past it. Anyway, sooner or later, I will die. The problem started to decline faster from the protagonist stabbing Lao Gu in the back, which was a big deviation. In the early stage, God has the virtue of good life, but in the mid-term, you start to play conspiracy and assassination, right? The transformation becomes really outrageous, even Emperor Ruyan has to praise you for your ruthlessness. A character without a spiritual core is no different from a puppet. His morals have been completely corrupted. It's really unfortunate that I could click into this book.

You don't need to read the rest of the two hundred chapters. I can't walk when I see a woman, and I'm starting to lose my wits.

I started to get frustrated after I started charging, but I still paid to watch it. I spend money to read books, not to read your writing. It's hard to make money now! Don't be in the water next book. If you are in the water, I will curse you.

It's really disgusting to fight with others later. He has to wait until his teammates are on the verge of despair before showing up. Do you know how disgusting he was when he came out at the last moment? I can't say it, it's so fucking disgusting

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