Start with the Celebrity Wilderness Survival Show

Disgusting batch! Drive high and go low, all kinds of poisonous points! Let's analyze the author's emotional description! Poisonous point 1. In the early stage, the names of the guests were replaced by various nicknames, such as Yahuazi and Milk Tea Lun! Can't we use homophony or originality? Poisonous point 2. During the writing of the 300 chapters of the desert island chapter, I had various ambiguities with the female guests! Not up, not down! Use various vulgar writing styles to build a memorial for the protagonist's scumbag! I thought my writing was good! Poison Point 3. After the entertainment chapter opens, the protagonist directly transforms into a stallion! After confronting Yahuazi, confront Tietie! After quarreling with Tietie, go abroad to quarrel! I still have to be criticized for understanding him I read 500 chapters of the book and couldn't stand it anymore. A very good book was ruined by the author!

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The first time I have to survive, I have to speed up. I am tired of aesthetics after writing it. We readers are also a little tired. It is better to end the writing quickly and do some daily work. For example, isn't there a foreshadowing for making a movie? This is also an idea, but the length should not be too long and the timeline can be longer. , And the fact that Fat Tiger's strength cannot be increased and needs to be suppressed. Now I feel a little jumpy. What is the concept of 20 minutes of anaerobic diving? This is not a fantasy, it is a daily novel. The most important thing is that the relationship in your book must be a scumbag. You wrote the three beauties so uniquely and then look back.

Before I even read the updated update, I saw a little red dot of unread chapters 30. What kind of treasured author is this? ! 30 Chapters a day, a breath of fresh air

Quota I

Take in Jiaduo too

The book is good, but the name gives me a toothache!

Another Wilderness Survival Gold Finger gives food directly and poisons it to death. The biggest drawback of this book is to survive in the wilderness and rely on the entertainment section. It would be better to change to singing skills or even story-telling skills. If you look at the book next door, the competition is about survival ability, and you can't even copy it well. A common problem among studio writers: writing independently, relying on what you want to write.

Don't she look good with her teeth?

Yahuazi

I feel like it started to collapse after charging. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's so embarrassing. The interaction is very much like a brain-twisting youth drama. Secondly, the two groups of three female celebrities like the protagonist. Why? Handsome than Hu Ge? Are you more talented than milk tea? Still in better shape than Wu Jing.

It's uncomfortable. I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore halfway through watching it. Why did it suddenly lead to a harem? Don't understand😰😰

Sissi

This protagonist's strength exceeds the limit of the human body. It's so rubbish! How hard is it to pick something weighing 300 kilograms? Unfortunately, the author also said that the protagonist is extremely powerful, is that all? We know that when rice is harvested in rural areas, any strong man can pick up 3-400 kilograms of rice and walk several miles of mountain roads home, and not just in one trip! The protagonist's power beyond the limits of the human body shows that even rural men cannot compare! It's too poisonous!

The protagonist participates in the second season of the survival show, and the author keeps suppressing the protagonist's abilities. It's really awkward to watch! Grandmaster-level martial arts, strength and physical strength beyond the limits of the human body! His performance is inferior to that of a rural man! It's so oppressive!

Small thoughts: First, can the names of celebrities be more normal? Yahuazi, Tietie, etc. Made me confused, so I went to Baidu. And these names are so ridiculous. Can you make them up randomly, or make them homophonic? Now I still can't figure out who they are and can't watch them anymore. The second question is whether your wilderness survival progress is a bit too slow. There is an ancient book called "Return to the Valley to Farm". People can survive on an island without any plug-ins. They start with a knife. After a month, they have a house and live a self-sufficient life.

This season's program arrangement has obvious logical flaws. The production team chose a wild survival location where there are large carnivorous beasts. If something goes wrong, a helicopter will immediately fly over and collect the bodies.

Did the author forget that the protagonist's power breakthrough has already broken the world record? That's it? Can't even compare to a strong rural man!

After the survival show ended, the plot became more and more watery and toxic. Before I even started to write my horoscope, I was telling people everywhere that I wanted to make a game or a short video, and that was just a game. Is it difficult to make a short video? What kind of people are around celebrities? They spend a lot of money looking for projects, but what they lack is good ideas; Also, renting an office, but the agency recommended itself, and the protagonist accepted it. Then the next day, he was taken to the protagonist's home and contacted the protagonist's circle of friends. I really wanted to spit blood on the author's face. If I keep writing like this in the future, I don't plan to subscribe.

The writing was good at the beginning, but in the middle stage, the stallion breed was reduced to wisdom, and it was abandoned.

It's outrageous to force birds to be raised. It's disgusting. The previous articles are all very good. I'm not going to subscribe to this book even if I read it.

I can't stand the end of the Six-person Shura Field. There are some flaws in the front. In fact, Doumen accepts it. As I write it, it becomes a harem story. I can't accept it, so I won't order it and abandon it.

This book's early classics and mid-term trash. Late waste

Let's look at survival in the wild, and the result is a loser male protagonist who goes around making fun of and complaining about the system 🙂 Isn't this character really interesting?

Don't die from reading

Although I prefer this type of novel, I still want to ask if the heroine of this novel is really a slut. Although I can't say I like it or hate it, but if it is true, I may not subscribe to it in the future. I feel that the heroine is not as good as Tietie.

I saw Chapter 300, all about survival in the wilderness. The ambiguity and some dialogues are okay, but the author has no knowledge of diving, breath-holding, geography, distance, and typhoons, which makes it a bit ridiculous and dramatic.

From the beginning till the end. It's over. . . Suddenly it felt like something was missing. . .

Is the author in a hurry? Rush, from start to finish! A running account, why is this? ! Daily life is also full of diary, would it be better to write more about dialogue, psychology, etc.? The article is full of "then". That's it. I don't understand what I mean by writing this running account.

Not to mention the various poisons of Stallion in the later stage. In the early stage, if the popularity of the plug-in is not worth the skills, you have to buy songs to sing. To survive in the wilderness, you don't choose tools and choose shower gel. What kind of thinking is this?

Is it possible to add finesse?