I Am in the Full-Time Hunter Krypton Gold Game

I feel that the author still has his own ideas, but he does have a lot of points to discourage: Creating a time traveler or local system-related content, no matter how reasonable the writing is, will always dissuade many people; the intermittent writing method of writing about the protagonist and Xiaojie at one time is immature and messy; some settings, plots and content are a bit strange, such as Hisoka's bug-like resurrection, the protagonist can kill Hisoka in a surprise attack and then becomes much stronger but then says that he is definitely not a Feitan opponent, there are too many and repetitive content related to the system and telekinesis, some functions of the protagonist's skills are not included, etc. There should not be many readers who can accept it, and for readers who can accept it, it should be at the lower-middle level of the same type.

If you are in the same world, don't engage in time-travelers anymore. You are still the same player as the protagonist. It is easy to collapse

Jay's plot is too much and boring

Shennong's comment: Although I don't know why, I always feel that the author is not writing a fan novel. The protagonist's foresight flashes across the cerebral cortex. I can't say there aren't any, I can only say there are, but not many.

It collapsed. It was extremely painful to watch. There were too many poisonous points. Even the old hunter couldn't bear it.

Let's reopen it and stop cheating. It's too much.

The author is a fan of Hunter. The upgrade system is similar to the martial arts game system. It's a bit interesting. Come on, come on, nine votes are given.

After reading forty chapters and still not sure whether the protagonist can practice telekinesis, I feel so uncomfortable that I have no desire to continue reading. Can the author be more flexible? If you can cultivate telekinesis, practice it quickly. If you can't cultivate telekinesis, just use the system to make it stronger. Don't use the system to suppress the protagonist's telekinesis ability.

I taught Xiaojie how to read the hunter's license that I haven't gotten yet.

To be honest, this is probably the worst Hunter fanfic I have ever read.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit unsteady, always thinking about going home, and his telekinesis ability and internal strength are not well coordinated.

The golden finger is too strong, it is better to develop a characteristic that is immune to all negative effects of thoughts, a body with unlimited potential.

I think the author's strength is the description of combat. But throughout the book, there are very few fighting scenes. There are only a handful of them. Reordered.

Great writing! Although some parts may not seem so acceptable, I think it is worthy of praise if you can write it down and have your own thoughts and ideas! Come on! ! It will get better and better

Chapter 3: Use Hunter World money to recharge Goldfinger, and then sell the items in Goldfinger to Hunter World. The key is to sell super-class things like unlimited backpacks, which will cost you more than a billion. This setting will directly persuade half of the people to quit.

Chapter 10. Not to mention the collapse of combat power, Hisoka's head was smashed, but he could still rely on the after-death memory to forcibly restore and resurrect him. The post-mortem memory has become a BUG resurrection coin.

Based on the time I deliberately stuck at 23.50 To read the book, the author has only read more than 60 times. It can't meet the standards for being put on the shelves. In other words, this book cannot get the perfect attendance reward. Is the author full-time or part-time? I seem to have read somewhere that the author is here full time? I feel like I can read books too. Although there are some flaws, when you look at the back, many unreasonable things in the front become reasonable. Just like Hisoka's resurrection. Like why do other people have systems too. Also why the author did not recover the pickup truck. Here, I will give some spoilers for newcomers. The protagonist travels through time 30 years ago. He goes down the mountain and eats a poisonous fruit, which will kill him. I also met that great-grandmother. Depending on what the author meant, the great-grandmother was also a trap, and it was also a trap for eating people. When the protagonist encountered it, it was an existence more terrifying than death, and then he was so scared that he awakened his initial ability and hid in a different space. Time in different spaces stops. But the subconscious mind should never stop. So there it is, the ability is based on the subconscious mind, directly copying a game that the protagonist is most familiar with from memory. Then the initial thought ability independently generated the game ability system based on the subconscious thoughts and gains. For games, there are always closed beta tests, internal beta tests, open beta tests, and official servers. Players should be born during this period. The game applies a concept. Ordinary people's Qi will float from the top of their heads to the sky and disappear. But we all know that energy will not disappear, it will just be converted into something else. The game uses the energy of ordinary people. Constitutes a giant Mobius-wide local area network. Then all the unreasonable oaths made by the protagonist were shouldered by other players. . . Holy shit, this reminds me of when I used to fly a plane with DNF. You secretly flew a plane, formed a team to enter the game, and were banned together. Then appeal and it will be unblocked. On the contrary, the unlucky guy in the team was banned for three days. I was once the unlucky guy. Then the development time of this game is 27 years. At this point in time. Jin Fulisi found a travel atlas of a different world in the protagonist's pickup truck, and Jin determined it based on the atlas. New Century East. Authenticity. Then Kim 12-year-old determined the future direction. Also sold the protagonist's car. So the protagonist can't find the pickup truck. So when the protagonist woke up, he thought that only two days had passed. In fact, 27 years and two days have passed. The protagonist's system was partially explained in more than a hundred photos. Worri. Whose golden finger wrote more than a hundred pieces before starting to explain? When I use golden fingers to close the front, there are all pitfalls. Goldfinger has three modes. One life mode, this one cannot be resurrected and cannot learn reading. There is no way to use Qi, so I can only strengthen myself, and there is an additional DND increase. The protagonist is in this mode If I remember correctly, I seem to have told you that it can increase more than 20 times? I did the math myself. Now the protagonist can hit 700 tons with one punch? If my calculation is correct, pushing the protagonist's attribute points above 10,000 times 20 times seems to be able to hit 1.5 Million tons with one punch? Awesome, right? Convert it to reality. One stone weighs two to three tons. In fact, 150W is only the amount of a small hillside of tens of meters. Looking at it this way, it seems that it has no power. . . . Normal player mode That's it. Ito, who I thought was also the protagonist, is in this point mode. This mode can learn reading skills. There is also an increase, but only 3 times? Is it 3 times or 4 times. ? But this may make it impossible to learn life-saving skills. I want to mention here that the one-life mode can be recharged. Can learn life-saving skills. Still 6. Furthermore, the money the protagonist recharges can also be used in a similar way to go back in time, allowing people who have used this note before to awaken the system and become players. This is what it means. Then we come to the last mode. Visitor mode means that special groups of people cannot become players, so through random methods, some skill characteristics and some item characteristics are compensated for these people. Let them have some small skills of the players? So I suspect that The reason why Hisoka was able to resurrect was because he had drawn the life-saving skills in the game system. This game ability is still a paid game. Obtain the right to play the game by automatically deducting the player's physical strength. Just like before we bought some cards to play games. The author must be an experienced player to know this mode. So, I boldly speculate here that the more players in the game, the stronger the ability will be. In the later stage, all players will definitely counterattack the Dark Continent. And this is also linked to Yu Yu Hakusho next door. Surprisingly, it is not inconsistent with the original work. There is actually a wanted order for Fei Ying. I'm sorry, I've never read a book that carefully. Now it is written that Jin once captured Pappu, a nurturing beast. The author is also very creative. Fu Jian just let out a little anger and said that there were two disasters outside. We know that one is beating up the enemy, and the other is directly placed in Jin's hands in the author's book. Probably that many. I didn't want to watch it at first. The writing was average and the plot sometimes had inconsistent twists and turns. But there are no good books to read now. After reading it patiently, I felt that it was okay. Now I feel that it can be determined completely, but only if I have such a reasonable mind. He is a newcomer after all. I want to say come on. Alas. I also read the author's last book. Imagination is OK, but I guess that book didn't even have a contract, what I know was written down directly by the author. I would be disappointed if this book was not on the shelves.

The increase will be doubled on the original basis. Will the protagonist train himself in the future? I just read the first few chapters.

I saw Chapter 10. It doesn't feel like it was handled very well. If you want to give up as well. It's better to find a chance to have a fight with the president first. And since the protagonist knows the plot, he should also understand the president's character. What the hell is it that makes me suddenly feel angry in Chapter 10? I really didn't see this turning point. If I were to handle it, the protagonist's first reaction when hearing the president's request would be that it's you, old man. Then I thought about it for a while, although I didn't know what Nitro wanted. But let's try our hand at it first. It's a rare opportunity to challenge the top players. Watch the follow-up after finishing it. Anyway, there are many ways to open your mind. Even if in the end Nitro really doesn't give me a license or read it. You can also go directly to the Sky Economic Center. As a result, I don't know why the protagonist you wrote went crazy. As if he didn't know Nitro, he took Nitro's words literally and left. Next, Chapter 10 laments my own powerlessness. This is not a standard plot in a novel about cultivating immortality. Obviously the protagonist is prophetic.

There's nothing wrong with the writing. The ability settings are average and there is no sense of substitution. The plot setting is a mess.

After reading Chapter 11 I understood. Co-author, you really wrote it based on a martial arts or immortality novel. The word "protect shortcomings" suddenly appeared and I was dumbfounded. What about foresight? The protagonist really only knows his name, right?