I Have a Primordial World

Attention, Authors! Attention, Authors! A small suggestion: if you're writing about a beautiful woman engaging in flirtatious behavior, then stop immediately. Otherwise, don't engage in flirtatious behavior; just keep them as friends. Never write about a beautiful woman being interested in the protagonist, who has principles, and then endlessly engages in flirtatious behavior. That's extremely toxic, like the most potent poison in the world.

Holy crap, you're really something! You're showing off and then getting slapped in the face. You've already done it seven times and you're still not done. I'm speechless.

The three golden chapters truly lived up to their name; aside from these three chapters, I couldn't read any further.

Aside from the first few chapters being somewhat interesting, the rest just followed the same tired, overused tropes: mindless bragging and face-slapping! 😥

I think in novels like this, you acquire a world and develop it slowly, glossing over the main world's affairs. I believe the modern world after leaving the primitive realm should have at most two chapters: one for preparing supplies, and one for dealing with practical matters. Then, you can level up.

Shennong is dead. He buys his ex-girlfriend a million-dollar luxury car, only to have someone trample on it, then seek revenge only to be trampled on again. He also forces a plot involving his beautiful cousin-in-law, his sexual fantasy object, to have her husband die, her father seriously injured, and struggling to afford treatment, almost forcing her into prostitution. I just can't take it anymore.

Selling ginseng leads to the appearance of a powerful figure in the industry; buying a car brings in an ex-girlfriend and a pretentious guy, and then gangsters threaten to break his leg. It's 2019 already, and people are still writing like this.

The author seems destined for failure; each of the three books is more toxic than the last. However, the author is still incredibly talented, writing from the opposite perspective of the reader in every book, doing things their own way. Persistence pays off, and the attitude is commendable. But you probably haven't heard the saying, "Wrong method, wasted effort," right? 😂

Is all the author can write is mindless clichés? ... Haven't they improved at all?

You wrote two chapters about the wild and untamed world, and then 25 chapters of showing off in the real world! Author, do you cause so much trouble in the real world too? It's just selling ginseng; anyone who didn't know better would think you went to cause trouble for the President of the United States!