Zhutianwushen Road

The protagonist is not like a martial arts idiot, and the villain is not like a villain. There are too many problems with the characterization of the characters. I remember that Mingyu Gong is still a Yin Gong method, and the Du'e Sutra is from Taoism. I thought the protagonist would be better at cultivating his character. The sudden death at the end of the Yitian chapter is a mess. Overall, it is the same as the previous review said. There is a problem with the three views. It feels like the author just writes whatever he thinks of, and kills everyone. I can't stand it if Yitian doesn't see half of it.

Why hasn't this garbage been banned yet? The three views of this book are too crooked.

The ending of Xiao Zhao's family really left me disappointed. The author just doesn't know how to arrange a natural plot. It feels like he just thought of a plot and then wrote it. As he wrote it, he realized that the circle would never come back, and then went to an extreme to solve the problem. It looked so awkward. If you insist on writing Xiao Zhao to death, if you insist on going too far and forgetting your feelings, it's not impossible. I thought of a bloody plot and thought the author could write it like this: During the ten-year contract period, Zhou Zhiruo and Xiao Zhao committed countless crimes in the world due to the protagonist's sheep-herding education. People in the martial arts world couldn't bear it. In addition, they believed that the protagonist had always believed in himself and would keep the ten-year contract, so Shaolin took the lead and secretly planned to lure Zhou Zhiruo and Xiao Zhao out of the mountain in an attempt to encircle and kill them. (If you say that Zhou Zhiruo is as perverted as the protagonist and can fight one against a thousand, then think of me as farting) In the end, of course, Xiao Zhao, who usually did not practice well, died, and Zhou Zhiruo escaped, and the entire plan was exposed. Then the protagonist broke his oath and massacred Shaolin first. Just as he was about to continue, Zhang Sanfeng finally decided to take action. The two fought fiercely for n days and nights. The protagonist completely focused on himself during the battle, so the Ming Yu Gong broke through. Under the influence of this, he felt that revenge was meaningless, so he accumulated enough combat experience and gave up everything in this world to ascend. Although this kind of plot is bloody, it has several advantages. One is that it will not make the protagonist's behavior objectionable; the other is to break the shackles of "faith". I personally think that compared with the feelings of people, the shackles of "faith" are the biggest obstacle to the Supreme Being. The other is that there is no need to rely on "dynasty luck" or "the general trend of the world" to break through, otherwise it will be too abrupt. It is recommended that the author polish the outline more.

In addition to the good writing at the beginning, the later part is very poisonous to me, another one of you look at me and I will kill your whole family. I originally thought it was because I had a bad mood during practice, but I didn't expect that it was because of my wrong outlook on life. I said goodbye 🙏

How should I put it... In short, the three concepts of character design have collapsed since the appearance of Wang Nangu... If the character design before and after the literary work does not match, then those who don't like it will definitely say it. If you write it for others to read, you have to let others speak. The author's control of the plot and characters is a bit poor. Maybe he wanted to write about dark style, but he didn't quite understand what pure dark style looked like. Or maybe he wanted to please the reader after seeing what he said, but he didn't control the plot. It was a bit different. Under the wave of modern national rejuvenation thoughts, the author is still using things from many years ago to teach Min Min Temuir martial arts. He deserves to be scolded.

Pig's Foot's outlook on life is obviously not righteous, and he has broken away from the category of some charming characters who are both good and evil, and has become a heinous and disgusting villain.

The book is good, but the protagonist is really unattractive and feels like an annoying ordinary person.

Progress: Chapter 116 This is the first world, and all the characters have collapsed. Xinglin national players, people in the world, masters who preach and practice, martial arts idiots who insist on collecting magical skills, and blackened killers... Author, have you really carefully portrayed the character of the protagonist? Until Chapter 87 and Chapter 101, Professor Zhao Minhe interrogated the girl in yellow shirt, the protagonist's double-marked face made me want to slap her! Looking back at the actor-level acting in the prologue, oh, I understand - in the final analysis, the protagonist is a refined egoist. Because of his high martial arts skills, he can do whatever he wants, even if the reader feels uncomfortable. Because this is simply the author's self-pleasure! In this case, I was too uninterested to delete it, so I threw it into the bottom of the bookshelf and left. God of War? God of War? ? God of War? ? ?

The contrast between the protagonists is really big In the early gift package, because I don't like bullying orphans and widowed mothers, I chose Yue Fei's Divine Fist Sanshou But let's see what happens later Needless to say, it goes without saying that it's a matter of kindness after all. As for others, although you didn't bully others, you helped, protected and taught them.       ，， At the inn, the boss refused to accept guests because he took your money. What happened? Wait. In the early stage, he taught his disciple what kind of person he wanted to be and decided how to take revenge. In the later stage, he turned her into what he thought she was and took revenge in the way he thought was right. You must have eaten all the previous settings.        ，，，

I'm not bragging, this book is **, if someone wants to kill you, why don't you save him for some unimportant martial arts? It's hard to see the logic behind it. If you want to be a bad guy, please be more thorough, if you want to be a holy lady, please be less pretentious. You're so stupid, you're just a waste of time reading this!

The character of the protagonist is written like this to make it look like a ghost.

It deviates too much from the invincible flow of the original work. This writing method is too cliché.

After reading Chapter 70, I tried the poison! You can still watch the early stages, but by sixty-eight or sixty-nine, when you kill the palace guards, you don't blink an eye. When it comes to Zhao Min, you are afraid that your Mingyu Kung Fu will harm him. She also spreads her martial arts skills. What people are thinking about is how to chop you into pieces and feed them to dogs. What you are thinking about is how to raise this loli, your dream of being an emperor! Your stance at that time was correct! What do those people you killed in the early stage think? You can forcefully snatch the Yitian Sword. At first, you were thinking of not being afraid of offending the Yuan Dynasty. Later, you handed over Mingyu Gong, the Princess of the Yuan Dynasty. It's so awesome that I can't even describe it.

The beginning of the book was good, but starting from Chapter 5, I didn't really enjoy reading it. Chapter 15 was unreliable. The development and leveling of the low-down game at the beginning was very well written, but it failed later on. It went directly from opening up new maps to large-scale dungeons, and it was no longer interesting. A common problem in plane novels, but it appears too early. That is to say, the combat power has increased too quickly, and the hang-up is too strong, and it has no feeling. Of course, Xiaobai still likes this style, but it is a bit poisonous for old bookworms .

Practicing martial arts based on ideas, including Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, foreign martial arts, magic, etc., Can all be classified as martial arts! External technology, medical skills, and mechanical weapons can all be classified as subjects! Can the God of War not understand the world? What is there in heaven and earth? It's not a law of nature! What are the uses of natural laws? Imagination can be realized! In other words, in advanced words (pretending to be xx): Promise the truth! Then, the result is that netizens and second-rate authors are not limited to Internet articles, science fiction articles, acgn's various concept settings, character designs, etc. For example, practicing internal strength does not mean that food is absorbed and converted into ATP (high school biology), the most direct energy substance, to provide energy for other sports. This is the legendary refining of Qi. The second step is to refine qi and transform into a god. Without the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, it is to convert the energy extracted from the food into energy that can be controlled at will, including fighting spirit, internal force, mental power, magic power... Internal skills with spiritual energy can have more magical ideas: -------Since the internal force can be transformed into spiritual energy, or the internal force can be released externally and maintained (such as the three-foot wall of energy of the sweeping monk), then here comes the idea. The internal force can be released externally to form the shape of the tendons in the body. Does the enlarged version of the meridians have a much faster absorption capacity? --------Swords such as the Yitian Sword can conduct internal force, so the question arises: Doesn't solidifying the transmission lines and customizing the human body's muscles and veins become a spirit gathering array? Customized into a Dantian structure and acupuncture point structure, wouldn't it become a spirit storage array? If the meridians that release sword energy are taken out alone, wouldn't they be an attack array? If the three-foot air wall is taken alone, wouldn't it be a defensive array? The upgraded version of Qinggong, coupled with the jet or drone fan principle, isn't it just a floating array? Flying array? Flame Knife, Xuanming Divine Palm, Thousand Spiders and Ten Thousand Poisonous Hands, Sky-Splitting Palm, wouldn't it be possible to take out the meridians alone and form fire, ice, poison, and air formations? Are other elemental formations still far behind? Aren't the techniques with special effects such as the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, the Music of the Blue Sea Tide, the Six Meridians Divine Sword, and the Beiming Divine Technique, become functional formations of magic weapons? Aren't they a magic weapon when combined? The metal of the divine weapon is made of silk and is made into three-dimensional veins. Corresponding to the above formation, doesn't it become a talisman? The talisman is extremely small and has the structure of the dantian to store internal power. Doesn't it become a cultivation elixir? Alchemy begins! Jin Yong's martial arts genre has great potential, if there is no artificial upper limit in the world. As long as you have a big brain, Jin Yong martial arts can be upgraded to cultivation. As long as all the people practice cultivation, they can be upgraded to interstellar cultivation and dominate the universe! As long as they don't stupidly develop technology, inner universe technology, and demiplane technology are mounted on the warrior's Dantian, Daluo Jinxian-level warriors can also achieve it. Refining the Spirit and Returning to the Void is the study of nature, the study of material transformation and life. Lianxuhedao is to realize the imagination, and technology changes the world! We are all in harmony. Infinite development is the right path. Tesla and other scientists are still alive today, and they are still super scientists and have been developing. Imagination is the primary productive force, in novels!

The author has made it clear that this is the path of a true villain, one who goes wild when he gains power.

The beginning was okay, I was practicing martial arts and studying medicine with peace of mind, but I couldn't stand it anymore when I forced someone to hand over the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. It would be fine if you made the protagonist a lawless person or a crazy person who practices martial arts from the beginning, but the protagonist is obviously a person who knows the rules of human relations, and he forces people to break rules and regulations, and threatens the lives of other people's sons just for his own selfish desire to practice martial arts. He is extremely poisonous. Look at the protagonist's apprentice again, isn't he just a real naughty kid? A bully face, no different from Long Xiaoyun. I don't know what to say, so I wish the author a happy birthday in advance.

The writing is okay, but I personally don't like the character of the protagonist, and the author has a lot of personal stuff, so I can't read it anymore, sorry.

It is a good book that beats all the novels written by great gods. You will regret it for the rest of your life if you don't read it. The content of the book is very upright. The protagonist is very kind, kind, just, smart, and not at all a virgin. It is a book that is rare in five thousand years and breaks through the history of China. The author can be remembered on a stone tablet with this book and be admired by future generations. All four famous works are garbage in front of this book . . Emma, ​​I can't edit it anymore. In short, this is a very good book. Based on the principle that one cannot eat shit alone and one cannot be poisoned alone, I strongly recommend this book. It is a must-read.

After discussing with the author, we formed a book group. If it is inconvenient to speak here, go to the group. If you want to scold the author, you can also go to the group. The author is in the group. It won't be banned. I'll apply for the circle leader later.

To be honest, the Beggar Clan is a group of local chickens and tile-dogs who have done it for 20 chapters. Later, Wudang may be able to do 30 chapters, plus being the leader, they can defeat the Yuan Dynasty. . . I'm afraid Yitian can get at least 150 chapters 😅

A small part of it is okay in the front, but it becomes more and more toxic in the back. I really regret putting my last investment opportunity this month on him.

Nine of the ten books written by Chuan Yitian have to be related to the heroine of the original work through various messy relationships. Is the author a sperm in the brain or does he think that the readers are sperm in the brain? He is ruthless in daily life and has no principles or moral bottom line to achieve his goals. Only I can take advantage of others. Yi, no one else can take advantage of me. I have to plot against the character of this classic starting male protagonist. He changed as soon as he saw the original female protagonist. Invincible is so sophisticated, and the character of the protagonist is even more disgusting than the original male protagonist. At least, Xiao Zhang is not bad in daily life, so forget it if he is a bit cowardly.

In fact, this conflict in the restaurant is unnecessary. It's the same routine and template. After a few chapters, it's not on the shelves. There's no profit. It's quite tempting to quit. It's like it's over. It's better to have more meaty scenes. It also takes a few days to skip this plot. It's really difficult.

I only noticed that the author was a woman when I saw Xiao Zhao died, and I had to accept it. I felt really boring after reading Yitian Volume. Although my favorite Jin Yong heroine is Zhao Min, you still accept all the other female characters. If you accept them, you will accept them in a hurry. In the end, you will die in a rush. So what's the point of accepting them? Personally, it seems that it is entirely to satisfy the author's own inner darkness, and the character creation is too outrageous. Xiao Zhao's personality is completely different from the original work. In the end, it is written that the protagonist has always been fond of the original Xiao Zhao. Logically speaking, Xiao Zhao has followed the protagonist since he was a child. Since the protagonist knows the original Xiao Zhao's personality and has a good impression, he will cultivate him in the original work, right? The key handling method is also funny. Xiao Zhao also showed mercy to Ji Xiaofu in the beginning, right? In the end, Ji Xiaofu tried to kill Xiao Zhao. Shouldn't Xiao Zhao kill her? Ji Xiaofu is from Emei but not a Mingjiao disciple, and Yang Xiao killed more than twenty Mingjiao disciples for Emei but nothing happened. Isn't this funny? Is it too ridiculous to use the rules of harming Ming Cult disciples to make one of his own disciples die and abandon them to another person who killed dozens of his fellow disciples? The key is why Yang Buhui died? Just to have a baby? The protagonist's martial arts skills only make it difficult for the other party to conceive or the child will die early, but why does Yang Buhui have to die giving birth to this child? It's not a difficult labor! Is it possible that Yang Buhui, who is so powerful, can exchange one life for another by his own will, and exchange his own life for the healthy growth of his children? Does the protagonist have this ability? Besides, why was Zhou Zhiruo kicked out? Is it wrong to save my junior sister? Was it Zhou Zhiruo's hand in torturing Yang Buhui? Could it be because he injured Yang Xiao? Yang Xiao is from the Ming sect, aren't Zhou Zhiruo and Xiao Zhao? Besides, Yang Xiao violated the canon rules first, right? What's disgusting is that the protagonist kills his disciple's entire family just to give Yang Xiao an explanation, and yet he still makes Yang Xiao admire his selflessness? Then why not kill Yang Xiao too? If it was because Xiao Zhao tortured Yang Buhui that the protagonist became murderous, the protagonist should do it himself, right? It is understandable that a woman with a dark heart like the author looks up to Zhao Min, a Bai Fumei who is top-notch in family background, appearance, and means, and who gives up everything for the one she loves, but she should not let other outstanding women become victims to satisfy the author's own dark and disgusting heart like maggots!

I have read too many Juten Wanjie-ryu novels, some of which are ruthless or gentlemanly. But the theme of this one is confusing and the plot is incomprehensible. When I first looked at the setting, I thought it was about warmth. However, when I went to see you for medical treatment, I just asked you to subdue the dragon with the Eighteen Palms. In reality, when someone asks you to do something, you don't want them to bring their daughter to repay you. The protagonist is obviously reasonable and reasonable in the previous plot. , You are not a fool, why did you give such a stupid reason? There is a system, and the Ming Yu Gong can be extracted, but it cannot come up with a better one. A time traveler does not know that the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms are incomplete parts, and does not know the allusion of relying on the sky to slay the dragon? Therefore, I finally recommend this book to the kind of novice readers who read books very mindlessly and will forget about it within a second after reading. Qidian novels say this, even Gu Zhenren is bad and persistent. The protagonist you wrote is as detestable as a scoundrel who suddenly became rich.

There was a little change from Xiao Zhao, but fortunately only two were gone. Until Zhao Min, they were all practicing killing people. The protagonist of the Dark Flow can still read the secrets of martial arts until he went to Muyang Palace to find the black jade intermittent ointment. The appearance of Zhao Min was described as a cruel and murderous female devil. However, after the protagonist threatened Zhao Min with the black jade intermittent ointment and took Zhao Min out, in order not to hurt Zhao Min and prevent Zhao Min from practicing martial arts, he specially taught her the Mingyu Kung Fu. He taught Zhao Min martial arts and swordsmanship overtly and covertly, and even used double standards to clear Zhao Min's name, giving the protagonist a reason to save Zhao Min, and then officially transformed into a dog licker. I couldn't stand it anymore! I heard that the author is also a woman. At that time, I just wanted to say that indeed, the double standard for women is that they are powerful, regardless of their level of education.

This author is from Mongolia. You can beautify Zhao Min as you like, but there is no need to blacken all Han people. There are not many good Han people you write about. You must report this kind of book 😤😤😤😤

The protagonist's methods are a bit underhanded The protagonist is a disciple of Hu Qingniu. He is considered a member of the Ming Cult. He practices the Ming Yu Gong. He is the second best in the world before he is twenty years old, probably second only to Zhang Sanfeng. The protagonist met the Budai monk and couldn't explain it. Seeing that his Qiankun Yiqi bag was good, he masked up and went to grab it that night. Please, you are all members of the Ming Cult, and you are just an invulnerable sack. Is it worth being so bottomless? If you practice Jiuyang, it doesn't matter if you need a bag to assist you in the final level, but if you practice Mingyu Gong, is this bag used as clothes? Also, if you praise this bag during the day and get robbed by a man in black at night, the key is that you still have the ability to treat others as stupid? If you are like you and still want to be a leader, you should first ask someone if you are convinced.

This protagonist also wants to pay birthdays to Zhang Sanfeng. I am Lao Zhang, and he is going to have his wits about him.