Sword Spirit Immortal Dome

I came across this book when I was short on literature and read it for several days in a row. It was really amazing. This is a good article about the rebirth of an orthodox cultivating heroine without CP. The heroine is tough-minded, cautious yet benevolent. The descriptions of other friends of the Wuxiang Sect are also quite interesting, including the childlike old sect leader Bai Ze who knows everything but cannot reveal it, the little Phoenix who can carry a cauldron, the Zhu Niao Changli who sacrificed his luck to save the heroine, and the little local tycoon Zhong Yun who met and helped the heroine... The most incredible thing is that The most valuable thing is that as a sword cultivator, the heroine is not greedy, and only relies on a sharp sword to conquer the world. Unlike most cultivation novels that rely on grabbing treasures and resources in secret realms to attract people's attention, the heroine in this book also has adventures, but she can stick to her heart, pay attention to the ecological environment, and never use up all the resources she encounters, and never fish in the lake. In addition, when you read later, you will find that the author's structure is still very large, with foreshadowing layered one after another, and there are many new characters without being chaotic, so he does not stick to some small villains. The heroine is quite happy to take revenge in the early stage, and she will avenge her revenge. Those brainless villains often don't survive more than three chapters. There are still some small flaws in the first few chapters. The name of Xuanniao is always mentioned, which makes it a bit unsatisfactory to read. The heroine's state of mind is not like the rebirth of Yuanying. Maybe it is integrated into the segments. However, in the later period, we can really see the improvement of the heroine's mentality and thoughts, which is worthy of praise. As for some details, such as giving someone else half of the unicorn horn, or giving half of his spiritual stone to his junior brother, it does read differently from the style of conventional novels where the heroine takes the majority, but sword cultivation is not a heavy thing, so it is not worth mentioning.

Many readers like this book. I personally feel that not only the heroine is well portrayed, but more importantly, there is a very excellent female supporting character - Zhong Yun! When the matter is over, he brushes off his clothes and hides his body and his name. He has the carefree mood of "the handsome thief leaves the fragrance at night, but he doesn't know where his body is". Huang Zhongda Lu has a chivalrous voice and is deeply in tune with Hu Tiehua's heroic chivalrous sentiments of "colorful butterflies grow wings, and the fragrance of flowers fills the world". Fu Yi's temperament is round on the outside and square on the inside. She looks smooth but is actually strong-willed on the inside. She is indifferent and difficult to approach. Like a peerless sharp sword, it stands alone, proud, and outstanding. Zhong Yun's character is square on the outside but round on the inside, bold yet flexible and cautious, chivalrous yet cowardly, noble in character yet somewhat naughty at the same time. Like an unparalleled sword, it is indestructible and brave. Fu Yi is as cold as water, while Zhong Yun is as enthusiastic as fire. They are two people with almost completely opposite temperaments, but they are surprisingly compatible. Fu Yi's encounter with Zhong Yun is like Chu Liuxiang's encounter with Hu Tiehua. They cherish each other and have a close heart. From then on, they have a friend who can trust their back and trust their lives. The most unforgettable thing is the sentence "You can control me, it's easy to talk," which is clearly a conversation between a pair of experienced veterans, a perfect replica of Chu Liuxiang and Hu Tiehua! Fu Yi + Zhong Yun, it's like burning a knife and roasting a leg of lamb, then sprinkle a handful of cumin powder, take a sip and it will be spicy on your throat and warm your heart, take a bite and the aroma will hit your nose, and you will have endless aftertaste after swallowing it! I really like the book written by the author of this article. The heroine is not pretentious, the heroine is smart, the heroine and the heroine do not fight stupidly, and the female nuns also have an iron-blooded and life-or-death friendship. In the previous book, the female partner was matched with a male partner, but I was actually quite dissatisfied with it. Please ask the author of this book not to arrange a double monk couple for Zhong Yun. Just as Chu Liuxiang cannot live without Hu Tiehua, Hu Tiehua cannot live without Chu Liuxiang; Fuyi belongs to Zhongyun, and Zhongyun belongs to Fuyi. No need for lily, friendship is enough! I really like Fu Yi and Zhong Yun, and I look forward to the two evil swordsmen uniting as soon as possible, smiling proudly in the mortal world, and embarking on the path to immortality together!

The character is mean, a bit a bit bullying, not always relaxed, a bit depressing and unsightly

I subscribed to the full text of Sanxiu Yiwen. This one is tied. I particularly like the author's writing style. First, there are very few typos, and the punctuation marks and paragraphs are also comfortable to use. Unlike many articles, where typos and words are wrong, readers have marked them in comments and never changed them, which greatly affects the perception. Second, the names of characters, regions, and sects are very particular, and they are not inexplicable. , Without drama, thirdly, the worldview is large, and it can be clearly seen that the author has a worldview setting, including geographical distribution and chronology. Fourthly, the most important point is that whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, the character characteristics are distinct, and the character characteristics are not abrupt before and after. The villains and minor characters will not be shaped as if they have been demoralized just because the protagonist is the protagonist. Of course, this also causes some readers to feel that it looks unpleasant and a bit frustrating (the pace is slow, there is a golden finger but it is not straightforward enough), and it is not completely in line with the current rhythm of fast-food reading of online articles, so it is not a big hit I hope that my wife can stick to her heart and write better and better

1. No male protagonist. 2. There is 1 chapter in the free period, 2 chapters will be released, and more chapters will be added as time goes by. 3. Updated on time at 8 o'clock every night. If there is an emergency, we will ask for leave in advance.

There are several major poisonous points: 1. The heroine is beautiful, but now her cultivation is low, and she has just escaped from her enemy. What is the heroine's first task now? There is no doubt that he is disguising his identity, growing up obscenely, and making a fortune in a low voice. At the very least, can he smear a layer of dust on his face? You are still wearing such conspicuous and beautiful clothes. You are not trying to attract others to notice you. Come on, uncle, come and see me. 2. That Xin Wuzhen already knows that you are the little slave girl who has just escaped. You let him go back to the base camp and will go to Aquarius Village later. As long as he tells those people about you, he can guess which of your slaves escaped. Do you think all the preparations you made for escaping are in vain? 3. The heroine is reborn and has lived hundreds of years. Why is she still so immature? You are so willing to believe that people can casually make friends with a little girl and play around with each other. I really admire that a person who is hundreds of years old can still play with a little girl. The two of them have different minds. It's just like you, a man in his sixties or seventies, fighting with a child of twelve or thirteen years old. It's incredible.

I have read two books. The pattern of casual cultivators is very big, and Wenfeng is more serious. This one is a bit more fun and entertaining at the moment. But one thing these two books have in common is that the battle scenes are not attractive enough. In the early days of casual cultivation, there was still a bit of thrills and excitement, but later on, they paid more attention to understanding nature and polishing their character, and even the fights had a sense of being free from desire. In this book, the heroine is a sword cultivator, which I am actually looking forward to. In fairy tales, I actually prefer the protagonist who is a sword cultivator. He always has a bunch of fortune treasures, and he can conquer the world with his life skills. However, seeing that now, there are fighting scenes, and the heroine's strength looks good, but I always feel that it is lacking a bit of flavor. The swordsmanship is unremitting, the method is changeable, the music cultivator, the evil cultivator... I always feel that it is not enough, the fighting is too good.

It's great to watch. I especially like the fact that there's a high-quality female supporting role at the beginning. I look forward to seeing more female supporting roles for both good and bad guys with all kinds of IQs and charming online in the future.

Xin Wuzhen should obviously be killed. Isn't the heroine a swordsman? She actually cares about such a small cause and effect. It really doesn't fit the setting.

Speaking of which, I had no interest in flipping through it at first, but I continued to flip through it when I saw the female supporting role and found it particularly to my liking. The more I read, the more fascinated I became. As some comments said, the heroine seems to be calm and relaxed, but in fact she has her own stubbornness in her heart. She has more entanglements in some things and has heavier inner thoughts. Although it feels refreshing to be thoughtful, she is a bit tired after watching it for a long time. At this time, the heroine's jumping-off and open-mindedness can adjust the plot very well, and can wake up the heroine when she is in trouble. The other supporting characters are also very interesting. The wooden Song Hongyuan and the clever Ji Liwei both enrich the plot very well. Looking forward to more characters appearing!

Female authors should write more novels that torture men. Look at the male videos that write about Red Mansions. You wish you could have sex with every woman you see. Who can bear it? Daiyu Baochai Yuanchun Tanchun sticks to the male protagonist on a pole, and then writes about those women for him to fuck. Oh my god, it's so disgusting. As a man, I can't stand it. It's all a bunch of fucking scum that are out to get it.

I have read twenty chapters, and overall it is good, but there is one thing that I particularly hate, that is, the presence of Li Xiao is too strong, and it is impossible to see how much hatred the heroine has. She still has to figure out the reason why she was killed 😅, and when someone who killed a close friend in the previous life actually used the theory of cause and effect as an excuse to let go 😅, I will not say more about this. I just want to ask if there will be any reversal in the future of Li Xiao

I've read about twenty chapters , and I can't help but remember the cruel character. Female authors always like to write this kind of bullshit sadomasochism plot. Even though it's not the male protagonist, it's still disgusting.

I also don't understand why the heroine would give most of her things to the surnamed person. She was afraid that she would be suspected of not being like a little slave girl. There was no need to do this. The heroine couldn't just give most of her earnings to others if she exposed herself to anyone she came into contact with in the future. If the author hadn't said that there was no male protagonist, I would have thought that he was the male protagonist, and he didn't contribute anything at all. This kind of overture is a bit unreasonable.

This is a female protagonist article, why is it a bit serious to kick a woman and flatter a man?

After reading more than ten chapters, the heroine's character has not been fully established, and I feel that the portrayal is a bit thin. I can't see the heroine's emotions, but I can't see the heroine's indifference either. She can tactfully talk nonsense and secretly complain, but the rest of the time does not show that the heroine is an interesting person. Only the lines and psychological descriptions show a little nonsensical, but her behavior is unsustainable. It feels weird, maybe it's a pen problem.

Can the heroine calm down and practice? She always causes trouble. Of course it is right to save people, but do you have the strength to save people? I see that the heroine has been resting on the laurels of her previous life.

After reading dozens of chapters, I concluded that the heroine talked a lot of nonsense. She just said that the old man who sold her sister and wanted to sell her to her was actually explained before the heroine killed him. If this was a supporting villain, he would have died long ago.

Finally able to invest! I quickly invested 5,000 points The story this time is also very interesting, and there is no more depressing atmosphere like a casual cultivator I wish all the best! After signing the contract, come back and give rewards to help get on the list (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ! (Be careful

I didn't expect that there were so many lightning protection discussions in the 150 discussion. I no longer want to read it. I don't really like cultivating immortals anymore, but I still have to restrain myself. I'm already fighting with God for my life. Still like this, I moved it out of the bookshelf.

First of all, I am just expressing my own opinions. I have no intention of attacking or judging, nor do I mean to instruct the author. Writing a book is based on your own wishes, which is also one of the joys of being an author. I still like the setting of this book very much. You can read it with confidence because there is no cp. In addition, there are no big pitfalls in the setting of sword cultivation. 1. Creation of the Protagonist The initial setting of the protagonist's character was fine, but it started to fall apart after 200 pictures. 2. Supporting character creation This is quite remarkable. The characters of the supporting characters are all very unique. It can be said that many great writers are not as good as the author. But the problem is also obvious, that is, the villain's strategy setting and IQ don't feel very online. 3. Plot setting Personally, there were no problems two hundred chapters ago, including the sudden addition of the Wuxiang Sect midway. These changes are still very surprising. Including the sudden disappearance of the sect leader Bai Ze, these are all unexpected and eye-catching. Readers who are accustomed to reading traditional cultivation novels will not be bored or the subsequent plot will be guessed at once. Very readable. What makes me feel that the drama is that the Golden Crow City and the subsequent plot are a bit too ordinary, lacking excitement and suspense. And the logic started to have problems, for example: I was injured in the ring competition, and I had to pay compensation! I don't quite understand it. Competition is inherently risky, and besides, it only slightly injured the opponent and didn't knock him unconscious. Also, the weapon spirit feels very twisted. An old monster that has lived for hundreds of thousands of years has been suffering in front of the protagonist, and Li Xiao didn't notice at all after discovering that the protagonist had broken him so many times. They didn't have much money and they were chasing the weapon spirit. When they saw that the protagonist looked exactly like the other person, they were fooled by the protagonist with a few words and finally became friends. If it is just a funny daily text, I can still understand it. But according to the writing technique at the beginning, the author is obviously setting it up based on the overt and covert struggle between realistic writing and normal immortality writing. The following plots with loose logic are very confusing. Many authors carefully write a good beginning at the beginning, and after passing the review, they start to receive subsistence allowances. But this is really not a good experience for readers. 4. There is also the main plot setting I am a little tired of it. Many heroine stories and single heroine stories have no problem in the early stage, but once the beginning is passed, the salvation setting begins. It's not that I'm anti-human, it's just that the simple salvation setting is too simple. Just like if you read one book with this setting, it's okay, but if there are ten books, it's a bit overwhelming. This is also one of the common poisonous points in current non-CP female protagonists! Furthermore, the setting of the road to salvation as the main storyline is not very pleasing, just like those routines in stallion harem novels. If you have seen it too many times, you will get tired of it. It is best to have already practiced as a main character in the early stage. You can focus more on the protagonist, practice, understand mysterious skills, develop your own side business, such as alchemy, weapon refining, formations, talismans, etc. Set some strange and logical secret trials or strange areas. This may require a lot of environmental description and imagination from the author, and there are certain risks. But it is also a challenge and breakthrough. Although the general writing method is mature and risk-free, it lacks some characteristics. These are just my personal opinions, I hope it will be helpful to the author. The current writing environment is not very good. Many authors are part-time writers, basically using their free time. If they don't really like it, few people can stick with it. After all, there are only a few hundred authors who support themselves entirely through writing. And once the author signs a contract, there are still many restrictions. Maybe sometimes you have to revise the novel according to the editor's wishes. I hope the writing environment will be better in the future! I also hope that more authors who love immortality will appear.

Is there any novel with a female protagonist that has no CP, no emotional lines, no ambiguity, and treats men and women equally?

Both the beginning and the end are relatively dull. I gave up the article after reading about ten chapters the first time. It wasn't until the second book shortage that I insisted on reading the whole book! Overall, it's pretty good, at least it allowed me to read the whole book. There are two main factors: Firstly, the map layout is large enough, and the author's imagination is really admirable, so the plot of the heroine and her friends going on an adventure to fight monsters and hunt for treasures is exciting. It wasn't until about 700 chapters near the end that I slowly started to feel tired. The author didn't extend the plot to the spiritual world, so it was obviously rare for him to wake up! Maybe some people say that the fighting scenes are not exciting enough. It should be related to the fact that the heroine is a swordsman. The fighting method seems to be a bit monotonous compared to that of a magician, but actually I think it is okay. If you describe it too much, how can people with poor imagination understand it? ! Just like some ancient romance novels, they use a bunch of gorgeous words to repeatedly describe how beautiful a certain character in the novel is, which makes people look confused - hell, I have never seen those things described, and I don't even know what it is talking about! Therefore, I personally think that the same goes for fighting scenes, as long as they are appropriate! Secondly, the characterization is very good, at least the main characters have distinct personalities. I have read a lot of fairy tales, and the heroine in this article is one of my favorites. Because she was a "poor sword cultivator" in her two lives, the heroine is a bit "greedy for money", but she is also real, shameless, and has a bottom line. The most important thing is that she has strength and scheming without appearing greasy! Overall, there aren't many shortcomings that people can tolerate! (Of course, those who can't bear it will just abandon the article) In addition, if you really care about it, there are many bugs in the article that are difficult to explain, such as Zhiming flooding the Dragon Binding Domain, the Red Star falling into the Yellow Sand Domain, etc. In the plot that can destroy the world at every turn, Ming Ming Ming spent many days rushing to reach the destination before the fight, but when he was about to be destroyed, he had time to save people all over the world. He also said that he had rescued all humans and monsters. I wonder if he didn't waste time on the way to save people, or could the moment of disaster be extended indefinitely? ! For another example, there are at least eleven places in the Qingsha Palace where the Black Bird once sealed the Blue Dragon, and each of them contained the Tenth Ancestor's natal magic weapon. However, by the end of all the plots, it seems that all the Tenth Ancestor's belongings have not been found. The younger brother's Taiqing Wheel and the Scarlet Bird, Qilin, White Tiger, and Xuanwu were not seen before. The pit dug by the author has not been filled, even if it is explained in a few sentences... There are many loopholes in the logic of such details, but fortunately it is not unacceptable!

When will your wife publish a new book? I want to read articles about cultivating immortals! 😊

When will there be a side story about Buddha Yi's travels after the fusion?

I want to say that I found a good novel about cultivating immortals. It's really pretty, I like it.

Although I have limited access to watch it for free, I'm sorry, big time.

This book is actually quite good, but of course not everyone will like it. For male channels, it is almost the standard configuration of Long Aotian. There are not many female channels like this.

I would like to ask, the person who met the upper realm earlier said that no one from the lower realm has ascended to the upper realm since the Middle Ages, and the people from the upper realm also said that the memory of the heroine was not erased. Why did he later say in many places that he wanted to know how the elders who ascended to the upper realm were doing, and also asked Yin Yun to ascend to the upper realm? I was confused.

Is there a follow-up? I always feel like I cut it off halfway through writing! A little bit of regret!