The Wizard Descends Upon All Worlds

A loser at the beginning. A genius female friend. Commoner background. Childhood sweetheart of a nobleman. Jealousy from a rich second-generation. Poisoning. Retaliation.

I'd like to offer some feedback: could you please stop having that cheat ability constantly beeping in the protagonist's head? Imagine the protagonist is researching a skill, just coming up with a method and wanting to delve deeper, when this damn cheat ability beeps, and all their ideas vanish. Or when they're making a potion, a beep comes, their hand trembles, and the potion fails.

In typical fantasy novels and movies, magic has no concept of quantity, nor is it ever said that it can be exhausted. For example, in One Piece, Devil Fruits, disregarding external factors such as Seastone, allow users to use their abilities as long as they have the stamina. Magic is similar; as long as the caster has energy, magic can be cast.

The outdated formula has become highly toxic. Admittedly, six or seven years ago it might have been considered acceptable, but now, the completely brainless villains, with their artificially lowered intelligence just to make the protagonist look cool, feel like they're repeatedly rubbing the reader's IQ into the ground. And the blind date scene... Sorry, I just couldn't bear to watch anymore.

I'd like to ask the author what motivated you to continue writing formulaic stories from years ago, despite the fear of starving?

Damn it. The protagonist only gets one attribute point per level. How many levels are you planning to raise the protagonist to? 1000 Or something? Where are you going to get all that experience? It's frustrating to read. And do you think you can't write a novel without giving the protagonist an enemy from the start?

Honestly, since the first time the event happened, it was related to the protagonist's studies. Why didn't the protagonist play it safe? He could have gotten into a good school if he had just returned normally earlier. As a result, the mission failed, and the protagonist's spirits were dampened. What excuse could the protagonist possibly use to demonstrate his excellence? Even in a high-risk world, the more outstanding the protagonist, the less likely others will dare to touch them. Goodbye

The writing is like child's play. Kel'Thuzad's death—knowing he was outmatched and about to die, he still spouted nonsense. The Infinite Dragon—oh, it overwhelmed the Bronze Dragon with time-sealing magic, but was instantly killed once the seal was broken? Are you sure this is World of Warcraft, or some children's literature like Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf?

The introduction paints a rosy picture, but the main text moves at a painfully slow pace. Even if you have a wealth of brilliant ideas in your mind, what you actually write is just a smattering of reality.

I've read forty chapters, and it's too confusing. The plot and the power levels are all a mystery.