Stealing the Dao Across the Heavens

The book is okay ╮(￣▽￣)╭ but the world view of the protagonist makes me speechless 😓 There is no subjective consciousness at all, and it feels like a brainwashed fool, just like the protagonist in the first picture only thinks about sword fighting and doesn't even know what the world is, the human heart is sinister and selfish, which is the real world. It's just a group of thugs. Only those who are rich and powerful can fight with swords in the world, otherwise they can't afford to eat. If you are good at martial arts and kill, rob, the rich and give to the poor, then you are a bandit. If you are low at martial arts, you are just an object of young heroes to punish rapes and eliminate evil. Dong Tianbao, what is wrong with being motivated and motivated? Isn't practicing martial arts just to stand out? It's not like Jun Bao, who has a martial arts skills and can only work as a waiter. There is no future at all. If there is no one to protect him, the salary is probably not enough to eat steamed buns every day. The martial arts skills will probably be useless in a year. The protagonist can be casual but he has to know what he wants. Now it is completely the rhythm of the late middle school sophomore period.

First of all, the blood-drinking beads are dispensable for the pig's feet, but he would rather offend a few big forces for it and expose his golden fingers, which is unwise! Secondly, the Emperor, who is known as the first person with magical powers to become an immortal through martial arts in modern times, his inheritance and the first artifact will appear on a remote island, and the protagonist will get it casually, it is unreasonable! Once again, after the protagonist traveled through time, he was unscrupulous and killed experts for the sake of Tai Chi Qi. He also flaunted justice, but he was not a devil. He was immature and shameless! Finally, such a big golden finger does not use soul piercing to improve wisdom, temper the state of mind, understand the truth, and create the strongest foundation. Instead, it pursues the most useless Qi. How can the Qi of the small world be compared with the big world? Buying a casket for a pearl, putting the cart before the horse, and incompetence!

1. According to the five-man army system mentioned above, the fifteenth battalion is 4,500 people, but it says "command 3,000 soldiers and horses." Is there a problem? ! 🤔🤔 2. In the article, "The fifth battalion has a captain, and the fifteenth battalion has a deputy commander. Each commander has two deputy commanders." Is there a typo here? It should be "the fifteenth battalion has a commander." Right? ? 3. Jiang Wen wanted the treasured bow, but others were concerned about his identity as a descendant of a noble family and gave him three points of respect. Without provoking his predecessor, Jiang Wen dared to take it by force. Either there is a background behind him, he is not afraid of his family status, and it is related to the death of the original owner. Or it is to forcibly reduce the intelligence, create conflicts for the protagonist, and trigger the plot.  …Thinking🤔🤔… 4. According to the rules of the competition, the first place has innate martial arts. However, according to the explanation below, as long as you become an acquired master, you can become a school captain at the highest. The only difference between the captain and the commander is the position of captain. A big competition can reward a soldier with innate martial arts. 😰😰 It feels a bit weird to have a growth prospect second only to becoming a grandmaster! The first place feels like it gives the protagonist innate martial arts. 😂 5. In the third chapter, it is said that the Shaolin Temple has "eight hundred warrior monks, one hundred and eight Arhats, and four great warrior monks..." Is it a typo? What is the difference between "Eight Hundred Monks" and "Four Great Monks"? He probably wanted to be called the "Four Holy Monks or Divine Monks"! It feels like there is a difference! 😁😁 It's just my humble opinion, and I'm looking forward to your reply. I apologize for any inconvenience or lack of thoughtfulness! 😜😜

The writing is incomprehensible. If you don't have the strength, you go around provoking the enemies, trying to commit suicide, the Celestial Silkworm changes the world, and the Godsend Organization. In the first part, you also said that the Killer Organization is everywhere, but then you go to the base camp to provoke the enemies. I thought I was invincible, but in the end I couldn't take care of myself after being beaten. It was simply my strength that persuaded me to quit this chapter. Also, I have been here for almost a year, but instead of trying to figure out how to obtain Tai Chi Qi, I go around teasing enemies to death all day long. I am not invincible yet, so good at it. I got Tai Chi Qi just once by killing Fu Yushu. After so much experience, I probably guessed that I could get Tai Chi Qi by killing some key people, but I didn't have any intuition at all. I just knew how to commit suicide and was mentally ill I know the importance of Tai Chi Qi and improve my physical fitness. Quality, increase skill, etc., Instead of trying to figure out how to obtain it, they ignore the basics and pursue the weakest, thinking about this secret book or that martial arts all day long, and in the end, they have no time, and they are still doing unknown things, plot for the plot, plot for the plot, no ideas, no plan.

I have always wanted to watch the astronomy of the world dominated by the Great Shang Dynasty. Now I finally saw the movie Celestial Candlestick. This movie is relatively old, so I won't watch it as much. Come on

Damn you scum, in the Celestial Silkworm Transformation, you have to block a sword for an unfamiliar woman, **.

No matter how you say it, the protagonist has received nine years of compulsory education. His understanding is not as good as that of soldiers in ancient times. Just like the author, don't you think it's strange that you can actually use a computer?

Just rely on Canghai to give you two monthly passes. Keep up your hard work and finish this volume.

The protagonist is getting more and more murderous, and I kept skipping to read it. From the end, it was like writing about a big devil. After arriving in Zhuxian World, the protagonist slaughtered the whole world. If you want to read this book, you should first read the plot of Zhuxian World. If you still want to read this book, I will admire you. I will give up now, bye.

I read Chapter Seventy-Eight, and the writing was a bit too messy. It was written abruptly in order to expand the plot. It made me feel embarrassed. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist was just looking for trouble.