Moyu Era

The writing is good. It has been collected. Can you come back and visit me 😁

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The introduction is good and the writing is innovative and well done. The writing is quite good. I have the ability to make up stories and my logic is pretty good. I'm also wondering why a batch of good works always don't do well. I feel like the author still needs an overall improvement. I feel that this work can highlight the author's certain skill and aura, but the story must have literary beauty. Cruelty can also be beautiful, and blood can also be beautiful, but you must have the ability to write these beautifully. 2. The ability to write stories. This is so important. An editor may not necessarily be a screenwriter. To write a good story, you need to write it well. 3 Characters. Yes, I think the author needs to improve in the above three aspects