Travel Notes of Zhutianxing

Before I read The First World, I thought this book was a fairy grass. Watching the Three Kingdoms, it was okay before meeting Sima Yi, and my IQ was online. When he met Sima Yi, 😵 almost dropped his cell phone and fell to the ground foaming at the mouth. Sima Yi can be said to be a joke, the hero of the entire Three Kingdoms era. Lao Yinbi, who can be regarded as the best in history, actually looks like a sand sculpture here. Frankly speaking, it is impossible for the protagonist to fool Sima Yi like this. If the protagonist says the first sentence, Sima Yi will stop listening and have the protagonist killed. Sima Yi is a Gou Emperor. If Cao Cao is not dead, he will not wander around at all. If you say that he is plotting to usurp the throne, he will think that you are sent by Cao Cao or others to trick him, or that you are Cao Cao or something to test his loyalty. As a modern time traveler, you can be proud of the ancients in terms of knowledge and technology. But it is too exaggerated for you to ignore the ancients in terms of IQ. Anyone who becomes a seventh-grade official will not be a fool. They are not comparable to ordinary people in terms of IQ and power. I met a county secretary. After that, I never wanted to meet and talk to an official again.

The chapters up to Chapter 20 are all considered qualified chapters. I originally thought that this book had great promise and some people would read it, but when I saw that the protagonist in Chapters 21 to 22 directly told Sima Yi that he was a time traveler, this was really poisonous! It's poisonous to death. Fortunately, this poisonous spot came out early. Evacuate people as soon as possible. If it comes out in the next few worlds, it will be a waste of time and a loss.

Chapters 20 and 21 feel a little awkward. How does the protagonist tell Sima Yi about traveling through time and space? Can't the plot be determined based on the character's appearance? It seems a bit poisonous to tell Sima Yi about his future.

This book is indeed good, IQ is online, there are some small problems, but not big problems The core advantage is that rebirth means starting over, which prevents the power system from collapsing, and it is easy to read, each chapter is not too long, but the writing is first-rate

I feel like it's well written, but why doesn't anyone read it?

The protagonist deceived the gods and ghosts in the Three Kingdoms. Were we only 250 people at that time? Sima Yi was such an incredible person, could he be deceived into a dog-licker by just a few words? The most awesome thing is to bring Dongfang Bubai back to the main world, and let him stir up troubles. Isn't it afraid that the protagonist will not die quickly enough? It's embarrassing to pick it up again after the plot collapses 🤭🤭

Chapter 21 is simply a failure among failures. Among all the books in the world, yours is the only one I have read that dares to write like this. The protagonist is an assassin who is saved by Sima Yi, and then Sima Yi recognizes the identity of the assassin. Then the protagonist tells Sima Yi's future. Sima Yi just based on the protagonist's expression believes that the protagonist is not lying and believes it. Even the TV dramas dare not act like this. Does your protagonist have a smooth tongue or a face decorated with gold?

The author really doesn't know how to choose a world. If you are casual or urban-oriented, you can choose the Love Apartment. If you want to cultivate immortals, you can choose the Jiu Shu World, Zhu Xian, etc. Of course, it is also acceptable to choose Zhu Xian for the Immortal and Martial Arts types. But the protagonist is in the main world of the High Martial Arts type, but he has to enter the Jiu Shu World, and also go to the Love Apartment? It's almost enough to choose the Three Kingdoms in the first world, but I chose to assassinate people like Tongquetai and lick Sima Yi (it's not impossible, but don't directly say whether it's from the future or not), ugh, it's disappointing

There was a genius sister at the beginning, and another mission to recruit women in the first dungeon... Slipped away.

In the war years of the Three Kingdoms, a group of people met a single person with tender skin and tender flesh. The first words the child said would make you think you heard it wrong: "Big brother, can I eat you?"

After reading Chapter 21, Pig's Foot told Sima Yi that he was a time traveler and the future history of the Sima family, and died of poison.

It fails to capture the readers' hearts. When traveling to a zombie movie, instead of learning Taoism, one learns zombie boxing techniques.

This is another harem novel. A drunk man can't do anything. Doesn't he have any common sense? Very poisonous

In Chapter 21, the protagonist actually told Sima Yi his identity as a time traveler. Poison

There is no book more disgusting than this!

The author of the Minotaur, no wonder more than 270 chapters have never been released, and the plot writing is really rubbish. The whole process is depressing and not at all exciting.

Soul travel is the most poisonous thing. You use other people's bodies to play with your own women. When the protagonist turns into a zombie, he also shouts that he hates the color green... The author is very thoughtful and I admire him.

Drive high and go low? And there is nothing when you return, you have just reached a state, and you have to slowly cultivate it back on your own, which is poisonous

Why do so many authors emphasize the bottom line? When you become the master of a world and save the dawn of the world in the future, you can ignore the previous process.

It's poisonous. When I returned to the love apartment, I found that my girlfriend was married to Zhang Wei 🥵

The author should be writing about his own ideas. He wants to brag but also wants to be truthful. He doesn't care about both ends. The protagonist is described as indecisive, with great ambitions and limited talents. There is no improvement in practicality in the description. He always puts children in charge, and he is afraid of the easy and dares to use force to suppress it. No one dares to resist! Coward! The beginning of the text is long-winded and the protagonist is useless. Readers will only be disgusted and have no interest in reading further.

This book is average, no matter how poisonous it is, but one thing is that traveling through the world of Uncle Jiu is not about learning orthodox Taoism. Even if the protagonist in Uncle Jiu's world cannot learn it, it can be done in the real world. It is also possible to travel through the Republic of China with a space ring and some thermal weapons. The real world force is too high. After more than ten years in the Three Kingdoms, I was still nervous and wanted to escape even if I couldn't defeat a warrior.

The main world is okay, I can see through both worlds. As a result, the two worlds got two women sleeping in the time and space stone. For decades, not to mention learning knowledge, Taoism, various classics, and no life experience at all. For the sake of system tasks, we are reckless. I can only bring two bags of jewelry in the first world. I can't stand the end of the second world.

The writing style is good, and the plot is also well written. But the outline quality and writing style are several levels different. It's too exaggerated.

Zombies can already overwhelm the world of martial arts

I haven't read three chapters yet! I don't know if I'm upset! The book is still not to my liking!

Nowadays, everyone likes to watch modern harems, so look for some TV series after the founding of the People's Republic of China to have harems.

The plot is too cliche, the characters are not distinct, and after experiencing two worlds, I feel mentally immature. It's very embarrassing, even though my writing may not be as good as the author's. Just think of it as my rant 🤫! I jumped and saw that 149 couldn't hold on anymore.

Haha, the first 5 chapters have already shown the potential of the harem

There are a lot of pitfalls that the author has not filled in? It's still a big hole