Travel to the World of Attack on Titan

The fanfic has 700 chapters written for free. It can be seen that the author really loves giants, but it is a pity that he failed to grasp the essence of the fanfic, that is, in a short space of time, he can show the original charm of the original characters or deepen the image of the marginal characters in the original work. The look and feel of this writing seems a bit wrong when it comes to straight men, but it doesn't sound right when it comes to hanging silk. The most appropriate way to describe it is that it gives people a very Guo Nan feeling. In addition, the way of shaping the protagonist by transferring the brilliance of the original character has caused a landslide in the perception. For example, at the beginning, if the author wants to show the maturity of the protagonist, the text feels a bit too pretentious, and the way of pretentiousness seems not clever enough; and if the author wants to show the protagonist as a hardworking grassroots Phoenix Nan who has risen with a young strong image, the text feels a bit under-finished, only about 3%. Around ten, there is a big gap. There is no process of showing the advantages and disadvantages of the characters while letting the advantages outweigh the shortcomings. At the same time, too much useless space in the early stage consumes the reader's attention and affects the perception. In addition, the writing style is too old-boy style (that kind of Guo Nang smell). Overall, although it is better than many Attack fans who don't know the so-called, there is still a big gap compared with those excellent fans who show the charm of the original characters and plots or have novel ideas. Of course, as a web article, this is normal, but as a fan who needs to benchmark against the original work, the road is long and long, and the tall buildings are still flat.

I just noticed this book today. Come on, author. I will order it if I have spare money. I must update it.

First person + double penetration, you are so brave

Keep it up author, not many people write this kind of novels nowadays

Fanfiction is really not suitable for double wear

After reading about ten chapters, I found that Mikasa is too charming, no wonder I like Niu Ailun regardless of whether it is a fan author or the original work😂

Chapter 700 is finished, and it hasn't been released yet. It's purely powered by love. What kind of perseverance does the author have? 😰

I don't know what to say except that the author is awesome. Attack on Titan can write 700 chapters in one world. I'm convinced!

First person, writing in first person is a dead end. The reason is that the perspective is too small and cannot show the overall situation. Language control skills are required to be very high. Most people's writing will be a bit wordy, and it is difficult to describe the scene well, and it is impossible to describe the psychology of other people. Like "Crazy God", it's best to feel it yourself. For example, if there is an enemy who is plotting against you, it is difficult to express these psychological activities in the first person.

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" is much better than the garbage main work

I feel bad that the author has never been on the shelves.

You won't rob Sanli, right? Others, Migasa and Allen are childhood sweethearts! Would you like to run over and intervene? I like giants! If it were to be transformed like this, I would never stand it! Although Sanli is beautiful, if I have to choose, I would choose Historia. Others would only choose Eren! I feel like it would be a blasphemy against the giant if you interfered.

The author is really great, but the paragraphing is very criticized. I will always support you!

Damn it, it's been so long without being on the shelves. It's so cruel.

Such a good girl as Christa is unacceptable in the original novel. I hope the author can interact with the queen more or accept her as one of the heroines 😊

First person? Although there is nothing wrong with this, how many people can stand it? If you are still writing now, I suggest you stop and change the first person to the third person in this novel. I believe the results will be better.

Author of Power Generation with Love, you are waiting, the monthly tickets and recommendations are all yours

Does the author have any misunderstanding about Baji? He is proficient in so many boxing techniques, but he was almost beaten to death by a few malnourished 14-year-old gangsters?

I also like the work Attack on Titan very much. I came across this novel by chance and came to read it. I didn't expect it to be very good. I don't know what to write next. The comic only comes out once a month, so slow 😭😭 It would be embarrassing if the plot is out of the way.

I've never seen such a useless demon hunter time traveler. It's so useless.

The best giant article I've ever read, it's logical.

Ask the bosses who the heroine is 🙂

A very good giant fanfic I felt a little disappointed after reading it I may not be used to the first person, but the author grasped it very well. I patiently read more than a dozen chapters and accepted this setting, because it did not have a big impact on the perception. Although the introduction looks like there are two male protagonists, in fact the other person can be regarded as the friend of the protagonist, and there will be no uncomfortable plot. Highly recommended

Personally, I think Attack on Titan is one of the best fanfics.

It would be great if I could write another novel from the perspective of the protagonist in the game "Attack on Titan 2 Final Battle"

Does this author have a fan base? I really want to add it. If any father knows, please tell your son. Please.

The author is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Are there any other good-looking giant world texts that you recommend? I can ask for unlimited or single ones.

At least it's over. This spirit is worth learning from 👍

This book is very well written, and the first person is quite engaging. It's just a question of whether you can continue reading or not.