It's Strange That Arita Has Some Money

I can only say that the idea of ​​monsters is very good, but the relationship between the characters feels disgusting. It is not well handled and expressed well. I don't know what the author wants to portray Bai Minghua into. Our readers' view of this Bai Minghua is: very annoying. It just forcibly fabricates the feeling of a villain without expecting the author to correct it. Abandoned🙂

The subject matter is really good, but the dialogue style of the Japanese manga is a bit incompetent. The protagonist is too slutty.

I think you can communicate with other authors of similar works

The author should not blindly let the protagonist suffer. The protagonist is already a master and has integrated into the rules of this country. Logically speaking, how can he not know the prices? Is that Fangshi intermediary just for a living? Don't always write about that novice. You've already written her in a negative light. If you're trying to whitewash her, then I'll quit. The subject matter is obviously very good, water.

The writing is okay, the setting is good, and it has the potential to be a hit. Don't be an eunuch easily. Many of the books are based on accumulated experience.

Aren't you the trash protagonist of Japanese comics? Have you never seen a woman ask you to go to a health care store? No normal man can stand a woman like Bai Minghua. What men like is always the gentle type. He has never seen a woman or been in love before and thinks that as long as she is beautiful, anything will do.

If it was a man who kicked the protagonist, it would probably be an undying hatred, but what if this person was a woman? Then he might be taken in as a mistress by the protagonist. Is this kind of mentality normal?

I feel that the protagonist is a bit cowardly. He obviously has collateral, but he still has to be arranged in various ways. After finally finding a way to pay back the money, he still has to comfort himself after being targeted. He also has no ill intentions towards that short winter melon. There is also a medical potion worth 500 in one tube. Do you give it to others casually or just give it to one bottle? Are you not in a hurry to pay back the money? ? If you give it to Guan Hai, it can be said to be of indirect help. Then why give it to someone who always laughs at you! ? ? Isn't Xian's taunt harsh enough? And the thief Xiao B who was injured because of stealing things has too much money and no place to spend it? ? ? ? The author's writing is okay, but it's not to my liking. I'll leave now.

This woman Bai Minghua is too poisonous. If I don't kill her, I will feel uneasy. If the author continues to write like this, it will be cool!

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The beginning of your book is pretty good, about that Bai Minghua, and that Yan Shi. Well, I'm not a person who doesn't like to suffer losses, but you have a problem with your kind of suffering. You, that whole Bai Minghua, I feel that you should I should have wanted to write about tsundere, but now you don't look like a tsundere, and your personality contradictions don't look like a strong business woman at all. I feel like you're just a stupid, silly person, a very annoying woman, and that Yanshi, whether it's When his teammates were rescued, he taunted the protagonist, tried to take action, or went to the big pit and kicked the owner into the pit. I felt that this woman was unacceptable. I felt like I wouldn't survive three chapters. I saw Enshi kicking the protagonist into the pit. I feel like I can't stand it anymore. I'm afraid there will be another plot like this, and I won't be able to bear it, so I'll withdraw first. Generally speaking, I think what I wrote before is okay, but in general, it's a good book at the beginning, and that's it from now on, right?

Well, I was attracted by the subject matter at first. It felt like I was in a different world and was attracted by different folk customs. There was also special energy that gave birth to special species. I thought it was Pokemon. I thought the author's main focus was to write about monsters with various characteristics. There are also various barbarians with different racial characteristics. In short, they are considered to be farming people. Later, refugees, famines, devastation and chaos appeared, and the protagonist achieved the result of various coincidences that turned the tide. Well, although I feel that the subject matter is not purely farming, these are acceptable. The final reason for abandoning the article was probably the protagonist's character and characterization. I don't know what kind of person the author wants to write the protagonist into! Holy Father? He made the thief his subordinate, and Chang Pu accidentally made a mistake that caused the protagonist to suffer so much loss, and even almost put his life in danger, but Good Luck was saved, and the protagonist never scolded her. The female clerk rashly brought Pu Chang to the workplace, and she didn't feel any remorse afterwards, which was very inconsistent with the protagonist's description of her character. The protagonist was saved by the young master of the Bai family. This was not just the use of the precious phoenix spiritual water. Well, he saved a dying man in the wilderness, used the store's treasure, and then brought him back to resettle him. Then the protagonist's reward was to pay back the money for the medicine, without any gratitude to the young master Bai. Later, because he didn't know if he could make the elixir within half a year, he didn't want to pay back the money but instead returned the medicine. Haha, why doesn't the protagonist want to repay those who are kind to the protagonist, and why does the protagonist not even blame him for those who have caused substantial harm to the protagonist? This character creation is too strange! There is also Bai Minghua, her character creation is hard to describe in one sentence. One moment he is said to have business talent, the next moment he appears to be such an idiot, the next moment he is portrayed as a villain, and the next moment he is whitewashed in various ways.         ，， There are many others too lazy to give examples.

This book. . . Recommended for readers who like to read books without thinking. The reason is simple: the author wants to write in his own style, and he has also sacrificed a lot of effort to write in his own style. But it is a pity that the author's writing skills are too poor and he cannot write in his own style. As a result, I sacrificed other aspects. As a result, my own style was not written. The plot and characters seemed twisted and mentally retarded. It was better to write honestly. The simplest and first example is the character Bai Minghua. The author wants to write about her cuteness and willfulness as a girl, so that readers can see the image of a little girl who is messy but behaves cutely. But the author cannot write, nor does he know how to shape it, and his thinking is rigid. I only know how to write about Bai Minghua's tricky protagonist, but I don't know how to write about Bai Minghua's cuteness. This ultimately led to one-sided book reviews and the author quickly wrote off Bai Minghua. Then at the beginning is the appearance of the protagonist and the encounter with the pot monster. The author wants the protagonist to owe the Bai family, and wants the protagonist to repay it, so as to lead to the main line of the opening chapter. Then he also doesn't want the protagonist to owe others, so as not to appear that the protagonist is not awesome, and the readers will feel uncomfortable when entering. And I don't want the protagonist to be the kind of ungrateful person who refuses to repay what he owes. I want the protagonist to repay the kindness he owes. . . I want to make money by being a cousin, and I also want people to praise my purity, let alone destroy it. The logic of the protagonist's behavior in the first three chapters is so inconsistent, so most readers are unhappy with it. Even if they just glanced at it without studying it in detail, they probably won't feel very comfortable after reading the first paragraph. If you ask me, the protagonist is either sincere and ready to repay the debt, or he simply defaults on the debt. Whether you really want to pay it back later, or you will be coerced to pay it back several times and turn against the Bai family, let's talk about that later! In short, make it clear at the beginning, be straightforward, have a clear theme, and avoid awkward contradictions. The beginning is complicated and complicated, who can understand it? We are not authors who know the characters well after writing the outline. Then there is the encounter with the pot monster. I won't analyze the author's thoughts here, because I guess the author just wants to encounter them. In fact, the plot only requires meeting the pot monster. But here comes the part that makes readers [especially old readers like me] unhappy - the protagonist hides in the shadows during the day. First make the monster blind, then move in front of him, so that he can realize that he is a monster. Then the clerk pretended not to notice [the warehouse didn't even know when someone entered in broad daylight, and was cursed with being unable to see in the shadows]. Then the thugs led many guys to pretend not to see and fight with the monster. It was like watching a play. It made the shadow seem like it was already in another dimension. This reminds me of a very popular plot trope ten years ago that was copied by old authors - The protagonist hides [behind a tree or a stone] and watches the God of Light and the God of Death engage in a devastating battle [the space cracks, the earth breaks, the wind howls], and then the two gods fight so hard that they can't move, and then the protagonist runs out from behind the tree to pick up the head. . . [Don't ask me why that tree can survive the cracks in space and the broken earth, and don't ask me why the two gods can't find the protagonist. It's just the author's setting! Okay, let's stop complaining about this joke. Let's pretend that the protagonist hides in the shadow plane, and no one can find him. What really makes me feel sick is why the protagonist doesn't stand up and hides from others! ! ! Why hide? I would like to ask. The protagonist doesn't live here and wants to work part-time as a thief? Or will the guys kill the protagonist when they see him? Do you have to hide from others? Are you so afraid of meeting people? What else are you using [I don't know why, so I hid in the shadows] as an excuse. . . Why not just give the protagonist [I don't know why, so I stabbed Bai Minghua]? That way, even if it is brainless, we will enjoy watching it more, instead of feeling disgusted with the protagonist's behavior. Also, later on, it was obvious that the Pot Monster was still hiding. I just gave a lot of examples of yellow monsters killing people, and there was also a fight between thugs and vine monsters. Why did the protagonist refuse to stand up and tell others that there was still a Pot Monster hiding? Did the author personally tell the protagonist that the pot monster would not kill him? Or had the author already assured him that the pot monster was actually a pet prepared for him? That's why he refused to tell others that there was a weird monster there, and he dared to look for it without any help? Who has just watched Zombie vs. Taoist Priest, and would you be so excited that he would crawl into a zombie hole to talk to the little zombie that the Taoist missed? Nowadays, no one dares to act like this in TV dramas! [There were actually quite a lot of ** dramas like this in the past, such as one in Mr. Zombie, but the little zombie that was taken in was really cute, and it was only taken in by children. Well, that's right, the only ones who dare to do that in **TV dramas are stupid children with underdeveloped IQs, and no adults in **TV dramas would do that. The author is really. . . Let's write about summer without thinking. This is just the plot of the first few chapters. I don't even bother to talk about the content after the fourth chapter. But to be honest, I really like the weird ideas in this book, otherwise I wouldn't have read so much or coded so many words. I just hope that the author will write more and more in the future. Finally, I recommend watching it without thinking, because the author writes that the protagonist can teleport and become invisible, and also likes to go to zombie caves to talk to zombies. . . That's all. It's no brainer anyway, just a bug.

It was supposed to be an easy farming flow, but as a result, you, the protagonist, have been targeted all the time. When you were slapped in the face, you stretched out the other side to be beaten. You were pushed off the cliff by the red fish. As a result, she was injured and you still went up to treat her. You are so good, so good. Goodbye.

That Acorus messed up the protagonist's cage car renovation should have been a big mistake. The protagonist paid a lot for it. After causing so much trouble, nothing happened to her. She didn't even mention the most basic compensation. Why is the protagonist so big-hearted? No matter how good-hearted he is, he should be dissatisfied.

The character creation of Bai Minghua is really a failure. If the author doesn't pay attention, he may poison a large number of people.

If the author had whitewashed the short winter melon from the Bai family, it would be impossible to watch. Is the protagonist too old and a good person? The protagonist studied with the female director and should have a general understanding of the status of the master. Why do I feel that the protagonist is so easy to bully? The protagonist is obviously a good friend of the head office son, so why would she, a branch president, treat the protagonist casually? Even if there is a conflict, he should act like it, and didn't the protagonist take something as a mortgage? You must understand the truth that rare things can be found. Although these magical props may not be as good as the Phoenix Crystal, the protagonist should not be treated as a freeloader. The protagonist starts out as a guest. How can this be the case? As a businessman, the branch manager would not be discerning. Overall, it's good, but if the author whitewashes the short winter melon from the Bai family, what will the female director do?

I really have nothing to say, the subject matter is very good, the writing is also good, writing a protagonist is such a **** thing, he deserves to be thrown into the street

Do light novels have to stick to Japanese language style?

To be honest. Lazy lion. I have read your book since high school, and then... My first impression is that the author is a nerd. The second feeling is that the author's writing is broad enough. Thirdly, it feels like I am also a dead otaku? Then... I have been working for three years now, and you are still LV1? ? Why? It is your bizarre experiences that have always made me hesitate to open a book. Later I wrote. Then pounced. Write again. Pounced again. Well, I can understand Ning now. Come on and good luck. Ordered.

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