Online Gaming: The Imaginary Number Puppet Master

I hate the trope of a character starting with a woman and being a virgin; it's really off-putting.

Author, you have many ideas and a strong desire to express the content of your favorite game world. The plot and game content are fine, but the biggest problem is that your book lacks any exciting moments, even omitting them entirely. This is a major taboo in writing. Writing like this makes it easy for readers to lose immersion and feel like they're reading a monotonous account.

What's with the master-disciple relationship between the protagonist and Zhang Ju? They've only known each other for less than a day, and it's already a bit toxic. I really hope Zhang Ju dies; if he's resurrected later, that would be truly toxic.

To put it simply, the structure is quite good, and the layout is decent, but the most crucial aspects are punctuation and typos. Most novels nowadays use pinyin input, so typos are inevitable. However, the punctuation is a major problem; it's clear the author is not skilled at it. Poor punctuation is like a modern person reading classical Chinese.

Chapter 10 is discouraging; it completely disregards game balance. Even though the main character farms gold relatively quickly in the early game, it only yields 5 silver (0.5 Gold). Then, someone explores a new map and gets a server-wide announcement and a reward of 1000 gold! That's ridiculous! 🙂🙂🙂

Having read up to chapter 76, it's clear the author intends to create a grand worldview, whether within the game or in reality. However, the protagonist's rapid power increases, without any other players of similar strength for comparison, make it feel like a novel, albeit somewhat mindless, wish-fulfillment story. The protagonist is far too overpowered and provides mindless enjoyment.

What the hell is this other world? The protagonist is wandering around in drag. What happened to the previous world-building and background? What happened to getting the princess back the doll she took? Did they just abandon everything? The plot transitions are abrupt and abrupt, no transitions, just a sudden change of map. And they even made him cross-dress! And they even changed his name! Did they just completely mess it up, or did they switch authors and accounts?

The beginning was alright, and the ideas were interesting, but later it turned into a bunch of new puppets and new skills that seemed to come out of nowhere fighting monsters that were obviously very strong, which made it feel very inexplicable to read. It's clear the author really enjoyed writing the fight scenes.

I believed the hype from the group about the tentacle monster who could update 15,000 words a day, so I wrote an outline and pulled out more than 30 hairs. Someone wants to read Summoner fanfiction. I just don't know what kind you guys like, whether it's a traditional online game or one that I've split off from the current timeline.

Isn't it because something happened, or is he a eunuch? 😰😰😰