I Am Engaged in Production in the Last Days

I don't know if the protagonist is innocent, stupid, or pure

Still the same thing, many people don't like to read reality, but I have saved 300,000 words, which are interspersed with real-life games. If you want to change it, you can't change it one by one, but I can guarantee that it won't tj! Since I am about to start online classes, I will be a senior soon, and I am not very motivated in terms of writing. During this period, the collection has also been declining, and the baby is feeling miserable... Many people P me (no longer listed), and many people encourage me, such as "Hugo Liuli, Ten Thousand People Qi Master Zhang, Frosty Cold Night, Violet_ JC" and so on. I am really grateful. You are my biggest motivation for writing novels. Because I didn't know the various situations of qd at the beginning, I wrote tens of thousands of words a day, so this tuijian has been delayed, and I am very desperate, but it is also because I don't understand anything... As a newbie, my writing is unsatisfactory in many aspects. If you have any new ideas, you can say it in this post, even if it is not what I said, but I hope you will not say it in other posts. Everyone is welcome to speak freely.

I think ketchup is the girlfriend who the protagonist loved deeply but died in the beginning!

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a post-apocalyptic article. After looking at the table of contents, I discovered that it was a game article? Unlimited text? Has the author thought too much and bit off more than he can chew?

Haha, actually players need to go to O'Riordan and Lisa to buy accessories (¯ㅂ¯VID) (Will the author include the accessories?)

The book is very good! I hope the author will continue to update and sign the contract as soon as possible! !

I'm speechless. Others have three golden chapters, but the first three chapters of yours start to lose word count.

The cold flower is quite weak when she cries.

Only veteran drivers understand the bad taste in this room.

It is a game-like book, not a pure system text. The subject matter looks good, the sense of immersion is good, and it has good appeal to young readers. It should be a good new book. It's just that... Written text can never be as good as visual videos. People who have never played that game feel that this book is quite good. But those who have played this game will feel that it is not as exciting as the game?

The exclusive zombie servant washes the feet, the considerate and beautiful zombie maid, and the author of the apocalypse, I just feel bursts of nausea. When you read the plot I described... You really can't stand it anyway.

The new book is good, I invested in it! The author should not publish more chapters to show his appreciation! 😊

I feel like Ketchup is just spoofing Jiang Nan, I can't help but give her a thumbs up

This book is pretty good at the beginning, but it gets slow at the end.

I suggest you write less about reality and more about games.

The male protagonist's reality and games always jump back and forth, which makes things a bit weird

There is a typo, it means taking one's life, not understanding

Jiangnan is even poorer than poor Diaosi. I am speechless with this character.

The heroine of the protagonist. After being harmed, doesn't the protagonist feel any heartache at all? Once the mentality of revenge for the heroine is gone, I am really convinced. He also let that person go and dealt with him all at once. A thunder comes down and hits GG directly

Author, I gave you three recommendation votes, otherwise I'm afraid I'd be embarrassed to tell you. I didn't want to come over at first, but when I saw Chapter 135 I couldn't help but come over. I just wanted to ask you if you could write the male protagonist's IQ higher? Does he believe anything the large infected body says? Does he believe it when it says it's the male protagonist's father? Doesn't he understand these eight characters: "Those who are not from my race will have different hearts"? OK, if he doesn't understand, can't he simply ask? Is it that difficult for you to confirm with the people below that "there is no need to explain it anymore"? He is so stupid. If he really treats more than 1 million people as food rations, will he leave weapons for them? Will you keep them until now? Can't you put yourself in someone else's shoes? If it were me, they would be my food rations. I would eat them all early. Yes, that's right, you wrote about Jiang Nan. I don't know why the mother's body never attacked humans but waited for him to come over before attacking humans. But I still want to ask, is the male protagonist you wrote really brainless? I can't believe it if there are two large infected bodies. How dare you believe what they say? ? ? I don't even know how I read these more than a hundred chapters. I just want to ask if the person next to me can die? Yes, that's right, this is a plot requirement, but even if it is a plot requirement, can you improve the male protagonist's IQ a little? What kind of alpha antibiotics and beta antibiotics are developed by college graduates? ! Finally, I will give you the following summary of this book: 1. The content and subject matter of the book are relatively novel and unique. 2. The title and introduction of the book do not match the content. 3. The male protagonist's IQ is too low and is inconsistent with his status as an undergraduate and a developer of α and β antibiotics. Some suggestions I give you: 1. Improve the male protagonist's IQ. 2. Let the male protagonist know what is meant by the eight characters "Those who are not of my race must have different hearts." 3. Fill in all these pitfalls for me (kill those two large-scale infected people who were the old rulers) (I won't say anything about deleting this comment or killing it) I won't say much else. At least you can do one thing for me, that is, make the male protagonist have a higher IQ. Some of the things the male protagonist did when I was acting almost made me angry to death. Above! ! !